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 Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 4:49 pm Post subject: Nezinau Kaimas - Bound Demon |
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Name: Nezinau Kaimas
Age: 37
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 10"
Weight: 125 lbs
Appearance: He has short, messy indigo-coloured hair that is offsetted by his pure black complexion. He is so dark in colour that he can absorb light to a small degree; this is why he typically stays out of the sun. He has fiery red eyes that glow when he has bloodlust, which is often. He is of average height and below average weight but he still manages to be menacing. He has pearly white teeth that glimmer in all light which he loves to display in evil grins. He is often mocking his enemy and keeps his smile on at all times. His voice is medium range and thick with jeering towards anyone. His main oddity is his left hand; the l1 foot claw protrude from the ends of his fingers which are stubs. At the end of the black claw there is small pores which secrete poison which enters the bloodstream of enemies through the steel-like black claw. His style is defined by his grandeur clothing or lack there of. His body seems to be constantly shifting; every once in a while clothing seems to be there but the depth of the darkness surrounding him and within him make it impossible to see what he's wearing; most just see a blurry shadow. This even occurs in bright light, merely looking like a blurry but faded shadow.
Race: Shadow demon
Hair: Indigo
Eyes: Crimson
Body: Thin
Ethnicity: Kaimas Clan
Level/Rank: Equates to Syra's
Village: None
Bloodline: Demonic Heritage
Main/Favored Weapon: Claws
Element: Wind, Earth
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Starting Inventory: Claws
Personality
Combat Aspects -
- He is very fast
- His poison is devastating
- Nezinau is strong in shadow abilities
- His senses are heightened
- He has low strength
- Like all demons he is unable to perform jutsu
- His chakra pool is lower than most; must use techniques sparingly
- He toys with his enemies too often and can often be tricked
- His bloodlust tends to stop him from creating good strategies
- He isn't enduranced in the sense he can't take many attacks
Jutsus:
Bloodline jutsus:
Name: Shadow Leap
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Kaimas Clan
Description: This is similar to a sunshin but rather an innate trait. At a young age all Kaimas can 'jump' small distances. As they grow stronger their jumps tend to take less time to start and the time when they reappear can be controlled. However the distance barely changes; they can't leap anymore than a few meters.
Name: Whole of Darkness
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Requirements: Kaimas Clan
Description: The whole body of the Kaimas is enshrouded in darkness. Their body is practically invisible besides a blurry image that only colour can be properly deciphered. The amount of darkness covering the body can be shifted but it requires great strength to create more darkness when in bright light.
Name: Stunning Poison
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Kaimas Clan
Description: This creates a poison which secretes from the Kaimas' claws. Upon a clear and good strike that enters the body the poison will begin to affect the bloodstream. Steadily the poison will effectively numb and slow the person over a period of 3 posts, afterwards they are able to shake off the effects. There is only a small amount of stunning poison in the claw and can't be used continuously.
Name: Devil's Eyes
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Kaimas Clan
Description: The eyes turn a reddish glowing colour and when they lock eyesight with another they send waves of fear and panick. These waves are subtle enough to make the opponent feel as if that is their own emotions. However it does little to deter them and merely serves as a minor distraction.
Name: Dark Rend
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Kaimas Clan
Description: Using chakra, the claws extend and become more shadowy looking. They can rip more easily through armour and leaves longer lasting wounds on the enemy. The wounds will last 10 - 15% more time, depending on the severity.
Name: Demonic Shielding
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Kaimas Clan
Description: An orb of darkness surrounds the demon, protecting it from most jutsu. It will absorb any C rank or lower ninjutsu, give resistance to genjutsu, and absorb some of the impact from B - S rank ninjutsu. It does nothing to repel taijutsu.
Name: Paralyzation Holding
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Kaimas Clan
Description: This is a much stronger version of the Stunning Poison. It is released in the same way but instead of numbing and slowing the enemy it will eventually paralyze their muscles entirely for a short period of time. The poison builds up in 5 posts afterwhich the enemy is unable to move anything but their mouth and fingers for another 3 posts. Those with good chakra control can warm their muscles faster and are only paralyzed for 2 posts. There is only a small amount of poison and can't be used more than once every several minutes or so.
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Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background: A shadow of the past, few remember where he came from. Like most Kaimas demons his childhood is kept a secret and even themselves tend to lose the memories most would cherish dearly. After fifteen years of empty oblivion he grew into a fully adult demon, with all the powers endowed upon his clan. At that age he killed one of his siblings and took his place as leader of his territory. He spent most his time preying on the weak in a forest trail. He would kill anyone who would pass by them. However, one day a young female shinobi (Syra) tricked him and forced him into a demonic contract. His killing days were over and his servitude had began.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Kidaku Itichi
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin
Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure
Training Points: 185
Inventory: 1 Katana
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 5 FC
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| Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 5:04 am Post subject: |
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Ok, is there supposed to be a problem here? because i don't see one.
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Dharma, The Silver Moth
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Shinobi Rank: Chuunin, A ~ Chuunin, B ~ Jounin, A ~ Jounin, A
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ ??? ~ Konohagakure
Training Points: 240
Inventory: Blade of the Wind Spirits, 20 kunai,100 feet of metal thread ~ See Inventory ~ Summoning Quiver (Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ Mouse Paw Yo-yo, Lexi, Retractable Shuriken, and Silver Soldier Serum x3
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| Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 5:08 am Post subject: |
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Did syra ask you too bring this back?
Because it was trashed around 3 months ago?
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Zomar, Rynel
Hyuudou, Skye
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Village: Otogakure[Zarn]~Sunagakure[Senith]~Otogakure[Rynel]~None[Skye]
Training Points: 90
Inventory: All; 25 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, 15 Senbon, 50ft Wire, Katana [Sen, Z, Ry], 20 Razor-Bells [Sk]
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| Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 5:03 pm Post subject: |
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I think you need to edit it according to the updated Template, no?
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Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
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Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
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| Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 5:25 pm Post subject: |
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Well, looks fine to me. Objections?
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Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
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| Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2008 5:34 pm Post subject: |
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I'm waiting to see if anyone else, Mods. see anything else wrong.
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Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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