Taming the dragon and redemption (jutsu training)

Eric Hatake

Takashi had left Kirigakure with a wet behind the ears Genin named Lita. At first he thought she was cute, but when he learned of her motormouth, he lost all interest in her. However, she wanted to see him train so he thought he might as well bring her to the shore so she could see him learn one of the water jutsus he was gonna learn from the scrolls he took from his parents 'jutsu chest' before he left his home in Kumogakure.

They weren't alone when they were at the beach.

Another figure was there, traveling bag sitting next to him and a traveling cloak covering his face. He was just staring at the sunset, so Takashi left him alone as he walked a bit aways so he could start practicing. Taking out the scroll, he read what it contained inside.
"Suiton: Suiryuudan no jutsu. A rank jutsu. Use chakra to have water spiral around you and form a giant water dragon into which it will try to crush, drown, or eat the enemy." he read. Below it was the handsigns necessarry to pull the jutsu off.

Takashi cracked his knuckles as he began going through the many handsigns needed for the jutsu. Starting and ending with the Tori symbol, he experimented with how much chakra he had to use in order to pull off the jutsu. "Suiton: Suiryuudan no jutsu!" he shouted, letting out a good amount of chakra. The water from the ocean began to surround him in a swirling motion. Just as it reached a foot above his head, however, the water crashed into itself and it left Takashi all wet as the water fell to show his failed attempt.

"All right. Too much chakra." he muttered to himself, thinking of how much was needed to pull it off. He knew jutsu's were tricky things. Not enough chakra and it wouldn't go. Too much chakra and it would backfire, injuring him like an idiot.
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Hatake, Eric
Hiroshi, Kite
Kaguya, Takashi

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Shinobi Rank: Sannin~~Genin~~Jounin
Village: Konoha~~Kiri~~Kiri
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Katana:2, Shuriken: 30, Kunai:40, explosive tag:40, soldier pills:20, wire:20 meters, Trench knives:2 Fuuma Shuriken: 20 Special medicene pack.
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Lita · Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 4:43 pm Post subject:

Lita walked along with Takashi. I wonder what he is going to learn, since he is a jounin, it probably going to be really cool and really strong and really dangerous.. I think I might want to memorize these jutsu's hand signs and learn from his mistakes, if he had any mistakes She looked at the unknown man watching the sunset. "Do you know that man?" Lita asked randomly, he probably didn't there were too many people in this world to know all of them.

She watched Takashi as he opened up a scroll and read it, concentrating hard. I should steal that thing from him... it looks like the jutsu, no, I can't steal, yes I can. But he is a jounin, he will probably chase me down and kill me, but I don't have to steal it, I can borrow it Lita thought to herself. She watched as the water swirled around him and then she bursted laughing when the hit the jounin. "Haha, that was funny," Lita laughed, wiping tears of joy off her cheeks. "Do it again please!" Lita begged, still laughing. Maybe my innocence would throw off anything on his mind, that I might want anything from him, I mean I am still a Kiri kunoichi.
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Mora, Lita

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Village: Mist
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Eric Hatake · Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 4:58 pm Post subject:

Takashi sighed as he took out the scroll again and gave it another once-over. "Note: It should be warned that the dragon is very picky about how much chakra is put into the jutsu." he saw scribbled at the very end. That made him feel very stupid. Then he got pissed when Lita started laughing at him at shot a bone finger drill at her feet to scare her, however it was caught by the mystery man's bo staff. Takashi didn't even see him move, but he guessed it was by accident and the man was probably getting ready to leave soon.

"Alright, last time I put in too much chakra, now I'll try putting in less." he muttered to himself as he began going through the series of handsigns again. When he reached the final tori, he shouted, "Suiton: Suiryuudan no justu!" The water around him began to spiral around him again, but it went really slow and it looked deformed as it tried to spiral upwards. To his suprise, the jutsu decided to just fall, however this time it got Lita instead of Takashi.

"What goes around comes around." Takashi thought as he sat and down and began to think on how much chakra he should put in the jutsu for his next try. The first time, he put in 1/6th of his chakra, then he put in 1/10th on this one. So he guessed it would take about 1/8th of his chakra to pull it off. He wrote down his notes on the sand with his finger so he wouldn't forget. That was the last thing he needed to do.
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Hatake, Eric
Hiroshi, Kite
Kaguya, Takashi

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Village: Konoha~~Kiri~~Kiri
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Inventory: Katana:2, Shuriken: 30, Kunai:40, explosive tag:40, soldier pills:20, wire:20 meters, Trench knives:2 Fuuma Shuriken: 20 Special medicene pack.
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Lita · Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:43 pm Post subject:

Lita didn't flinch once, she wasn't scared, when he shot the bone at her. "It will take more than that to try and scare me... oh and Thank you Mister!" Lita replied, when his feint to try and scare failed and for the unknown man for trying to protect her. She stuck her tongue out at Takashi when he started reading the scroll again. "Such a bum, every little embarrassing move you make, you think the whole world is about to get you," Lita commented, rolling her eyes at him. She was soaked in water the next second! "Oh my goodness, How very rude of you!" Lita screamed, "what a nasty little joke you played on me, you uptight, childish, little boy!" Lita, now soaked got up, and tried to dry off her violet hair, plus she also tried to get a little peak at what Takashi was writing down. 1/8, what the heck is that suppose to mean?
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Mora, Lita

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Eric Hatake · Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:55 pm Post subject:

"I told you to be quiet, remember?" Takashi asked. He was getting annoyed, and when he got mad, he was a berserker. So he did the next best thing, he threw his emotions away, and his eyes became a dull golden color compared to how bright they were a second ago. Going through the handsigns again, and said, "Suiton: Suiryuudan no justu!" puting 1/8th of his chakra into the jutsu this time, he felt the water spiral around him. It was finally starting to take shape, and that's when he felt his concentration break. The tiny euphoria in his heart that he was finally getting it right had cost him. The justu broke again and water got on both of them again.

The stranger finally got up and grabbed Lita's wrist. Turing her around so she faced him, he looked up so she could see the red eye with three tear shaped tomoes swiriling around the iris. Then he walked away, saying "Keep at it." while he walked.

Takashi frowned inwardly at the stranger leaving. Turning back to his scroll, he felt the tide come in as he took down some more notes. "Don't let feelings interrupt the concentrate when doing the jutsu or else it will fail." he wrote down. Tiny drops of sweat was mixed with the water, signs of exhaustion starting to creep up on him, ready to strike at a moments notice. However, he would keep going at it until he mastered the jutsu.
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Hatake, Eric
Hiroshi, Kite
Kaguya, Takashi

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Inventory: Katana:2, Shuriken: 30, Kunai:40, explosive tag:40, soldier pills:20, wire:20 meters, Trench knives:2 Fuuma Shuriken: 20 Special medicene pack.
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Sench · Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 7:59 pm Post subject:

Sol was walking down the beach, deep in thought. The trail ended around Kirigakure, and the only lead he had was nowhere to be found. He searched the village for hours without any results. Damn it, where is that girl? I don't even know who she is, but I have to find her... He looked once again at Lita's photo. Was she his daughter, or simply some girl connected to the whole thing? Or maybe just a random person who was in the wrong place at the wrong time? These question were without answer. He cursed as the problem seemed to be unresolvable. He saw a boy training in the water, accompanied by a girl... the girl.

The bounty hunter was glad and disappointed at the same time. He found the lead, but it was not one of his daughters, the wasn't the pressure of a vampire's presence about her. Still, it was good he found her. Sol walked straight up to the girl, stopping in front of her and saying: Girl, we need to talk. It was quite impolite of him to do so, but he didn't give a damn. He was far too nice as it is lately, and it was about time to make up for it.
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Suija, Enja, Igniz

Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Mutou Kazuki
Frederick
Henshin Ellen
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Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ Jounin (A) ~ S-rank Missing-nin (SS) ~ None (C)
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Lita · Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 6:21 pm Post subject:

(OOC: Okay, sorry so much!!!!)

Lita was now drenched in water, her hair starting to show frizz. She pulled her hair, so the water soaked out of her hair, making a puddle where she stood. "Gosh, Takashi! I love water, but this is too much!" Lita screamed. She felt her skin tightened as a person turned her around and said three little words. The Kiri kunoichi stood still for a moment, gazing into the unknown man's eyes. His red eyes, with three dots swirling around. It couldn't be, it cannot be...was it him? Lita thought she has recognized the man for a second, but he hasn't seen this person in so long, and she wasn't really sure it was him or not, Lita thought as she turned back around to Takashi.

Another unknown man stepped in front of her abruptly, and was extremely rude to her. She shot him an look of disgust, she was never going to be treated so horribly. She jumped and backflip, so she was up against Takashi a little. "Who the freak are you?" Lita demended as she pushed Takashi a little towards the man, so he was the only thing between the unknown man and the Kiri girl. "Takashi, I don't like the looks of this man," Lita quietly whispered to the jounin.

Sench: nah, it's cool. I'm not gonna wait more than 2 days for Eric though xD
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Mora, Lita

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Eric Hatake · Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 7:15 pm Post subject:

"Hey, leave this girl alone. She hasn't done anything to be one of your targets." Takashi said. "If you try to take her, you'll be an enemy of Kirigakure, and you will be hunted down and executed. So step off bub." This was the only time he was gonna ask nicely. If he didn't get the hint, maybe a few bones lodged in his lungs would. "She was watching me practice so she can learn this move. You have no right to disrupt that."
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Hatake, Eric
Hiroshi, Kite
Kaguya, Takashi

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Sench · Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 7:08 am Post subject:

Shut it, creep, - was Sol's only reply to Takashi. The bounty hunter had no business with the white-haired boy, and he wasn't going to waste his time on him either. He couldn't care less what did he have to say about rights. He stepped closer to Lita, completely ignoring the boy, and said: I'm looking for someone. Ukyo Tachibana. You know where he is?

OOC: sorry for shortness, no time
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Tachibana Ukyo
Mutou Kazuki
Frederick
Henshin Ellen
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ Jounin (A) ~ S-rank Missing-nin (SS) ~ None (C)
Village: Konoha ~ Konoha ~ None ~ None
Training Points: 325
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Lita · Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 4:03 pm Post subject:

Ukyo? What does he want with him? Was it about that vampire thing on the night that I left them? Lita thought to herself, it probably showed on her eyes that she knew Ukyo. "I don't know who your talking about! So leave me alone!" Lita answered. She hid behind Takashi even more, but he was a jounin, so she probably was safe around him and Takashi, even with his mean persona, would protect her even though they didn't know each other for very long. "How do you even know about, why would you come up to a random girl and ask a question?" Lita asked, she was wondering who this person was, and what he wanted with Ukyo and herself.
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Mora, Lita

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