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~Thorns~ Ijutsu- Talos Techniques

 
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:36 am    Post subject: ~Thorns~ Ijutsu- Talos Techniques Reply with quote

Name: Talos Palm Technique
Type: Ijutsu
Rank: A
Requirements: Ijutsu major, My Permission
Description: Channeling healing chakra into your fist, you unleash a blast of power into a blow. This ability dos no damage however. Instead it converts the energy into a very unique effect. This ability painlessly disconnects the target bones, relaxing every muscle and paralyzing the opponent for one post. This ability was originally created for the relaxing effect, able to heal cramped muscles and knots instantly while realigning the target’s bones. After the one post of paralysis, the target’s bones slip painlessly but not silently into perfect alignment. This ability is now used more commonly as a self-defense method for healing nin. For a quick escape, an enemy downed for even a moment can really help out. As a side effect some nin have purposely fought Healing nin with this ability hoping for the immeasurable pleasure of relaxation following the temporary paralyses…  

Name: Blade of Talos
Type: Ijutsu
Rank: B Kin
Requirements: Ijutsu Major, Connected to The Children of Fate, My Permission
Description:  This technique is to reward those in service to the Children. This surgery is a painful processes were blood pours from the users hands, raising a risk of sickness threw bloodloss. This ability grows, in a matter of 24 hours, a pair of bone blades from the user’s arms that can be pulled into the body or extended like cats claws. The blades are the length of the user’s forearms and are made of an extremely strong combination of calcium and inter-linked carbon compounds. The blades strength and durability make them extremely useful tools. Never dulled they are shape enough to be used in surgery cutting down on chakra costs and making allowing them to never be unarmed. Capable of coming out at insane speeds the blades can be used as a hidden blade of sorts.

Name: Air of Talos
Type: Ijutsu
Rank: A Kin
Requirements: Ijutsu Major, Connected with The Children of Fate, My Permission, Must learn in The Forest of Death.
Description: This long agonizing surgery calls on The Children of Fates knowledge in a flash of visions lasting for a  48 hour period were the user is in continuous pain and unconsciousness. This ability is a gift directly from The Children of Fate and as such the process may only be started in the Forest of Death, were the user will be guarded by the forest itself during the 48 hours of helplessness. After the 48 hours the user now has an impressive set of leathery wings. They are fully functional and are incorporated in the user’s biosystem. The wings are designed as such that when they are not in use they connect to the users back much like a cloak would, with the small bone hooks at the wings central joint connecting in front of the users neck much like a clasp. Under close inspections the true nature of the close fitting cloak is revealed but it is uncommon for them to draw attention in this way unless the user has used the wings under watchful eyes. The wings are durable and extremely strong as is required to propel the user into the sky. The wings are not optimal however for combat for they are venerable to attack.  When the wings are not in use the wings strong resilient backside shields the venerable joints and fleshy underside. Small ports that are in the users back allows for the weakest part of the wing to be slide into the users body making the wings “cloak” form to remain very close to the user.

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

First one is at least A rank, for the effect.

Second one is fine

The third one confuses on the fact that, is a lasting effect? Also explain it a bit in a simpler way... sorry but it seems all over the place, and confuses me a bit XD
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 9:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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The third one confuses on the fact that, is a lasting effect? Also explain it a bit in a simpler way... sorry but it seems all over the place, and confuses me a bit XD

Yes Its a lasting effect. It is a surgery. I will add to the end in a bit, to make it clear that it is a surgery.

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 9:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright then that is all I needed to know, and since you changed the first ones rank.

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PostPosted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 10:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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