Pushing the Limit [KinJutsu Train]

Zeke Jamora

OOC: Okay guys, lately you guys have been confusing me. One second there's going to be a Chuunin Exam the next there's not. But whatever. I'm exchanging two gates for one technique slot. My Houshou slot.

I need 2 Hachimontonkou. 10 KinJutsu Points, 5 for each gate.

IC: Jikota was eager to become a Chuunin. He had heard about his Student Malekith, it made him proud that he was the one to have trained a Sannin however, when was he going to get some respect for his work? Afterall, he taught Malekith everything in the basics. Whatever Jikota thought. He's not my rival anymore. I have my own ambitions. Diplomacy is the answer to my problems.

Jikota was in the desert mountains hills training his TaiJutsu. Since they wouldn't turn him into a Chuunin by Rank, he was going to Auto- Chuunin himself by level. There was nothing that was going to stop him from realizing his dream. He had forgotten all about becoming Kazekage. Now, the grandson of Nidaime Kazekage had a new dream. One of equal desire, and like always he was driven to protect his dream, even if it meant taking his life.

BOOM!

An explosion occured. It was merely Jikota's fist hitting a few rocks. On his ankles and fore-legs were not 60 Pound weights like last time, but this time, 100 Pounds weights. That was not all, he had also put 80 Pounds weights on his wrists and fore-arms. It was surprising that he could even move. He dropped to the floor and decided to call it quits for today. It was weird, he knew he could go for another 6 hours, but instead he didn't. Usually, he pushed himself until he was close to dieing, however, that was when he had Malekith as a rival. Seeing as how he can't possibly compete with him, there was no use.

Jikota took off the weights and slowly went to sleep. He had hope'd that no scorpions would sneak up on him. It had to have been around 23 hours, and he stared at 6 hours. He got in a good amount of training, for a Genin his age that is. Any other Genin would've quitted and should've quitted way long time ago but, Jikota wasn't even pushing is training to the max like he always did.

Laying in the sand, he began to think to himself. Being Kazekage isn't worth it anymore. What's the point? It's just a position afterall. Though, I've always wanted to save this village from Wars and unneccesary battles. Kinda like the one I was suppose to be in. I could've been a Chuunin at age 11 if it weren't for my grandfather giving me to that pail Dude for "Testing". I can't even remember anything. What exactly did they do to make me lose all my chakra and send me back to the Academy for a year to train more? I need to get to the bottom of this.

It was something that always puzzled him. It made him think that he actually failed and had to repeat that year. This was the main reason why he work's so hard. However, the reason he wanted to become Kazekage was purely so that his fellow Sand shinobi wouldn't have to sacrifice their lives for stupid battles that meant nothing, and solve conflicts with words and not war. Sitting up, he staired at the stars.

Jikota:"I have to become stronger, so that I may protect the ones I love, and the dreams I have."

Jikota began to train more and more. The weights were beggining to tire him out but slowly.
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airknight12 · Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 8:49 am Post subject:

+1

you need to be a lot more detailed with your training period and elaberat emore. the other stuff is fillar information. I would have gave you just .5 but you threw some character explanation in near the end of your post.

So your trying to get the first two gates right?
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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Sun Sep 02, 2007 9:07 am Post subject:

OOC: Using a NPC

IC: It was the next day and Jikota seemed to have gotten atleast 3 hours of sleep. As soon as his body was refreshed he instantly got up so he could train more. He put back on the weights and set up a obstacle course. Overnight, Kazekage had sent a Chuunin to help him out. His name was Haru, a Puppet master shinobi.

Haru:"Alright, this time, try the aerodynamic spin technique you were working on."

Jikota:" Yeah, whatever. Just hope that your Puppets can stay up with me."

There were 2 Puppets, and they were identical to Combat Posts. In other words, TaiJutsu based puppets, which was a first for Sunagakure no sato. Jikota rushed towards the puppets, the first puppet launched a kunai towards Jikota. Easily, Jikota blocked the kunai with a kunai of his own. Then, from behind, a Puppet stabbed him with a kunai. Jikota smiled, and revealed a clog of mud and dirt.

Haru: "Replacement?"

Within an instant, as Haur looked at the other Puppet, it was in ruins, completely dismantled from Jikota's bare hands. Haru put up his guard and protected himself with the second Puppet, however, it was too late and Jikota squeezed in a final hit to finish the fight.

Haru:"Wow, I'm surprised they haven't made you a Chuunin yet."

Jikota:"I'm surprised aswell. Hey, I have a question? Aren't you supposed to be at your team-mates funeral?"

Haru:"Yeah, but you know how I hate funerals. The worse part is that I tried my best to save them from the enemy attack."

Jikota and Haru, this was not the first time they met. They were the best of pals in the Academy. Haru got up, and summoned 2 more TaiJutsu puppets with his scroll. This time, I'm nto going to hold back he thought to himself. Meanwhile, Jikota positioned himself to attack.

Rushing straight in, Jikota jumped into the air and came with a strong spin kick. The 1st puppet blocked it, and then Jikota jumped back to get some distance. His legs were getting tired, but that didn't stop him at all from training.
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Eric Hatake · Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 8:33 pm Post subject:

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OOC: Not all that long, but you detailed some parts. You also gave some background of your Chuunin NPC. Very good. Although, concentrate more on the training than actually talking. You only had maybe one or two paragraphs of actual training.
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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 4:23 pm Post subject:

OOC: You guys should make up your mind. If training is about role playing skill or actual training.

IC: Jikota was doing farely good fighting against a puppet master. His Taijutsu speed wasn't exactly enough to defeat these puppets this time. And whenever he attacked the puppets who were TaiJutsu based more then weapon based, they could easily block the attacks.

He was begging to get tired, and he had to take care of the puppets soon. Haru's attacks were getting deadlier and deadlier with each passing moment. But this was the best way to train.

That's it..... he thought to himself. The aerodynamic spin technique is the only way I can beat him. And the worse part is that he is pressuring me into doing it. Okay, here we go.

He readied his body, this technique did not take much effort, however, it took major physical control over one's body. This wasn't a special jutsu, but more of a manuver. The Puppets rushed in towards Jikota, he easily bounced them off and then slashed one with a kunai. The kunai had zero effect, but at that time Jikota had jumped into the air and began his finale for his final attack.

Jikota:"Here we go! The finale!"

Haru:" You're making me tired!"

He took his kunai and threw it straight into the head of the Puppet. It connected however, the puppet was still moving. The puppet launched itself with it's brother, into the air after Jikota. They met each other in mid-air, when finally, he released his final half of his attack.

Jikota punched one in the stomach and then moved so that the other puppet would attack the other one. Slowly, as he attacked with weak attacks, the puppets began to hit each other. As they landed on the ground, Jikota got some distance away from the puppets.

The puppets tried making a final attempt, however, no matter how hard Haru tried, the puppets wouldn't move. It had seemed that Jikota had analyzed where the weakpoints were on the puppet before making them hit each several times in the air. The puppets fell apart and Jikota decided to get some rest.

Using a scroll and Kuchiyose no Jutsu, Haru summoned 2 boxed lunches and they both ate them. It had appeared that Haru's plan to kill Jikota had been foiled. He had used too much chakra and he found out that Jikota was stronger then he thought. Haru thought to himself, Killing this guy when his endurance is low isn't going to be as easy when I killed my friends when they were tired.

Jikota and Haru were best friends and smiled at each other. However, Haru's smile was fake, when he actually was trying to assasinate Jikota. Luckily, Jikota just thought he was merely training.
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Eric Hatake · Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 5:13 pm Post subject:

OOC: It's a combination of both Roleplaying skill and actual training.
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Air: you can rp well through describing the training, that goes along and once again unlike most games you shape your characeter so you have to do a lot of training if your going to learn something like this K.
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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 3:21 pm Post subject:

OOC: 6 more points and I'm done.

IC: Jikota finished his lunch and it had seemed that he was completely refreshed. Haru on the other hand seemed like he wasn't as fully restored as Jikota. Most likely, it was because Haru's chakra control wasn't that great, or it was atleast on the average level. He probably used up too much chakra.

Haru did his fake smile as Jikota stood to his feet. They both finished their lunches and went back to what they were doing before. Combat practice. However, this time, Haru had a more mischeivious plan. It had appeared to him that taking out Jikota was different from killing an ordinary Genin. He was going to have to use his best puppet.

Haru: Kuchiyose no Jutsu!

Haru used a scroll and summoned a house. Jikota was purely amazed at his next level of training. He hadn't expected anything as of yet. Infact, he thought that Haru was finally taking him seriously. This house was actually, a Puppet. It was 3 stories tall and with each level the survival rate grew lower and lower.

Aimlessly, Jikota walked into the puppet home. At the very top floor, Haru controlled the puppet was chakra strings. On the first floor, there was a huge ogre looking puppet. TaiJutsu based like always Jikota thought to himself. The puppet then opened it's mouth and release a powerful flame.

Dodging it easily, Jikota landed on the roof of the first floor. He stood there and waited for the puppet to attack. There were no strings so he could predict its movements. He then tries to move however, he can't for when he looks at his feet, he see's 2 puppets holding him. The ogre puppet then moves in to punch Jikota will full on force.

Jikota:"I guess I have absolutely no choice. If TaiJutsu doesn't work then NinJutsu it is. Suiton: Teppoudama"

He focused his chakra after performing the Tora, or Tiger hand seal. He then released a blast of water into the puppets face. The puppet took the hit head on a fell to the ground, however, recovering at the last moment, standing on it's feet. The puppets from the ceiling let go and Jikota fell to his feet.

Impowering the chakra he has into his feet, Jikota launched himself swiftly, attacking the puppet relentlessly. The puppet was barely able to defend itself, until it fell to the ground from exhaust(Haru that is).

Jikota:"What's wrong? Can't keep up? This is the power of Sunagakure TaiJutsu."
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airknight12 · Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:01 pm Post subject:

+1
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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:28 pm Post subject:

IC: Jikota kept attacking the ogre puppet but it just sat still in the same spot. No matter how hard he tried, it just wouldn't smash. He was beggining to get tired. The weights were making his breathing deeper and deeper. He didn't want to take them off mainly because he needed this training.

He then began to look around to see if he could find a terrain advantage. He then noticed that this floor was wodden, and was exactly like a Karate Doujou. Looking at the puppets feet he noticed that the water blast had damaged him more. Also, all the water that was on the puppet had dripped to the floor.

Finally, there was the element of the Wood-based puppet that could blend into the walls. Pretty much, he was screwed, however, he had a plan. One that might actually work.

The puppet finally began to take it's stance. It was obvious that it was going to use it's fire blast again, however, it put up it's 2 arms and opened up 2 hidden cannons. This is bad! Jikota thought as the puppet released the triple fire attack. Jikota jumped out of the way, but just then, the wodd based puppet who had been quiet finally revealed itself again.

From the ceiling, the puppet launched a poison-based kunai. It got Jikota in the shoulder purely because everyone knows you can't dodge in the air, most of the time. As he fell to the ground, he quickly recovered and removed the kunai. He then began to feel and realized what type of poison it was.

Jikota:"I can't feel my arms?! And soon, I won't be able to move them....Whatever, atleast this is going to make my training more rigorous."

Haru: That may be true, however, if you want the antidote, all you have to do is take it from the puppet.

The ogre puppets chest plate opened, revealing a bottle of antidote. Haru was toying with Jikota, though Jikota didn't realized until later. Jumping away from the aerial kunai attack from the wood puppet, he then rushed in towards the ogre puppet. The ogre released a fire blast again. It partially got him, however, because his element is Water, it did little damage, barely any.

Jikota:"This is going to be tougher than I thought. But the more the merier! Take this!"

Jikota rushed full speed, channeling his chakra into his fist. Or so he thought, as he tried to hit the ogre, he then realized that he couldn't gather chakra into his right hand. And so, the ogre puppet retailated, punching the Genin high into the air. He fell on his back, realizing that he poisoned kunai that he took into his right shoulder did more then he thought. Luckily, it was only his right should, and not somewhere else like his heart.

It was okay, as long as he could gather chakra into other points of his body, he was going to survive. His arm felt numb, and soon he would not be able to use it. Rushing head in, seeing that there is no other way to beat this puppet, Jikota charged with a right hand jab, trying to reach for the bottle.

The puppet was going to smash him with a single strike, however, just then, Jikota jumped back and looked behind him to see where the wood-based puppet was. Once he located it, he grabbed 4 Shuriken, focused his chakra to his feet and walekd on the ceiling. The ogre tried his best to stop him by using Fire blasts but it was no use. The shuriken hacked the head off the puppet once Jikota was close enough.

Jikota:"One done, noe more to go!Now this is real training!"

OOC: A very detailed Post, and even more. I hope this get's me alot of points.
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airknight12 · Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:40 pm Post subject:

+2
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