Drake Kaguya [Mist/Genin]

Drake · Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 10:10 am Post subject: Drake Kaguya [Mist/Genin]

Name: Drake Kaguya
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Height: 5'6
Weight: 120

Appearence: Drake has long dark blue hair. He has two bangs and the rest of his hair in a bun so, it won’t get in his way. He has light blue eyes and has a black robe around his body. He is very muscular and is not very fat, he is light skin also. Drake has a black sword in a black sheath, he carries it on his back at all times. He never goes anyone without his blade, the handle on the blade is black and white. At the top, you will see a cross on the blade which will go all the way down to the end of the handle. In battle, his hair will loosen out and his hair will cover his face. He will have a cold expression all the time showing no emotion. He mostly has a smirk on his face so he can get the for mad at him of some sort. He will also grin away like always showing his talents.

He would sometimes were cloak to cover any wounds of some sort. He has many treads which he likes to where a lot of times. Like when he has his hair out and it cover his eyes so it is hard to tell who he is. He does this to keep himself away from society, if he would go into a regular town in his normal attire. People would hide away from were he is because they know who he is by his clothing style, so his life is sometimes a mystery. He also wears a black ninja shirt with a white ninja pants and were a false headband.

Race: Black
Hair: Blue
Eyes: Baby Blue
Body: Muscular, Athletic
Ethnicity: Mizu no Kuni (Water Country)

Level/Rank: Genin
Village: Mist
Bloodline: Kaguya
Main/Favored Weapon: Bones
Element: Fire
Fighting Type/Style: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory: x2 Gauntlets, x20 Shuriken, x6 kunai, x1 Wakashi

Strengths:

- Agile
- Flexible
- Excellent Strategist
- Quick on his feet
- Physically Strong
- Strong Taijutsu
- Good chakra control

Weaknesses:

- Doesn't work well with teams
- Low chakra supply
- Generally unliked by most in his village
- Can't stand people that complain
- Lazy
- Weak Genjutsu
- Bad at defending against Genjutsu

Personality: Drake has a very rude personality, all the time. He is very aggressive a cocky all the time, that is why people do not like him. He loves to see blood and when he does, he acts crazy like. He loves to see blood and that makes him go on a rampage when he is against his enemy, this is why he is very deadly, people claim that he needs medical help but, he doesn’t want that. He kills for fun like people lives are noting to him, he is cold-hearted and hates everyone. If his family members die in front of him, he would just laugh at how he died. He doesn’t like people who are emotional, it makes him sick to the stomach. He never got the feeling of love and hated it, this is why he is a alone person most of the time. The weird part is that he is very kind to animals, he treats them like there are his family.

When he is around animals, he acts very friendly towards them. He would share some of his bread or snacks with them and sometimes heal them from their wounds. He does many kind things sometimes and he always love to draw animals like artist. But, rarely that side is shown because if someone was watching, he would have never done that. So, it seems that he has a secret life style that he doesn’t want people to know. If people did know, they would claim that he is weak which he doesn’t like because he feels that is truly not a good prospective for him.

He can also be a riddle fellow because in battles, he will give his foes riddle’s that might confuse them. He loves to see his enemies confuse in ways, he like a mind twister. He also can talk about how he defeated this person that had gone against him. There are many multi personalities of Drake but, most of his personality is his mean and aggressive side that he uses often. It depends on who he is around and the specific place, if he was in his home village, he would act like the evil person everyone know him as. But, if he is in a differ town and the person he meet is cool with him. He would act nice towards the person.

But, he will never show a soft said like a crying mood. That would be the last thing on earth that Drake would do. He would commit suicide just for shedding a single tear that shows extreme weakness in his book no matter what people say. If he see people crying. He would be disguised at the view which he had seen.

Jutsus:

- Bushin no Jutsu
- Kawarami no Jutsu
- Henge no Jutsu

Bloodline jutsus:

Teshi Sendan [Ten Finger Bone Bullets]
Rank: D
Requirements: Shikotsu Myaku [Bone Corpse Manipulation]
Description: With the exception of their bloodline, one would use their fingers to fire a long range attack. At this distance, the bullets they fire are phalange bones, and they happen to rotate. They will drill into their target once the attack hits.

Jutsus that wants to learn:

- Kinbori
- Art of Walking on Water
- Genjutsu Kai
- Hone no Bushin (Bone Clone...Riken has it)

Yanagi no Mai [Dance of the Willows]
Rank: C
Requirements: Shikotsu Myaku [Bone Corpse Manipulation]
Description: The first of the Five Dances. In this form, one would use Shikotsu Myaku to extend their forearm bone to their palms. Using precision, one would be able to evade several attacks, countering and stabbing their opponent at the same time.

Tsubaki no Mai [Dance of the Camellia]
Rank: C
Requirements: Shikotsu Myaku [Bone Corpse Manipulation]
Description: The second of the Five Dances. In this form, they form a sword out of their bones. The bone will be removed from their shoulder bone, and increase the density to make it as hard as steel. Using fluid and precise movements, one would then cut through any opponent within striking distance.

Karamatsu no Mai [Dance of the Larch]
Rank: A
Requirements: Shikotsu Myaku [Bone Corpse Manipulation]
Description: The third of the Five Dances. In this form, one releases bones from all over the body. The bones are as hard as steel and come from the rib cage awell as the radius and ulna. these bones can act as a strong defensive mechanism against incoming strikes. Due to this they will also serve as an offensive attack to allow a Kaguya member to move and strike ones opponent.

Tessenka no Mai [Dance of the Clematis]
Rank: S
Requirements: Shikotsu Myaku [Bone Corpse Manipulation]
Description: Using their Kekkei Genkai(bloodline limit), a Kaguya Clan member will remove their spinal cord from their back and can use it as a whip-like weapon of some-sort. However, within this Dance, there are 2 inner forms of fighting and using it.

Tessenka no Mai: Tsuru [Dance of Clematis: Vine] - Kaguya Clan memeber will use their spinal cord as a flexible bone-like vine. This "vine" can be used to wrap around a target and would probably rip them apart.

Tessenka no Mai: Hana [Dance of the Clematis: Flower]- Using this dance a Kaguya Clan will also form a large flowering bone spear which he can also use to pierce any shield his opponent raises. The spear is said to be nearly indestructible and the ultamite attack weapon.

Sawarabi no Mai [Dance of the Young Ferns]
Rank: S
Requirements: Shikotsu Myaku [Bone Corpse Manipulation]
Description: The final dancing art form. Most likely, when one would use this dance, they would be either under ground aswell as being very close to death. In this dance, one would release several large spiked bones from underground. This creates a huge forest of bones that are also as strong as steel. This skill may use up all of one's chakra, though, if one survives, they may then merged into the bones and attack from the tree's.

Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: He was born in a very dangerous village were he had to fight for himself. He was abandon as a child so he plans to protect himself no matter what the cause. He had a kitten and some kids killed it and beat up Drake, he started to gain hatred towards the kids. A couple of days later, he went to the boys and ended up killing them with a kunai. The kunai had blood dripping at the very tip of it, it was said that he killed them with one blow. People started to fear him now and thought he was crazy and needed help, Drake left the village as a unwanted shinobi. He then travel to many villages, he survived the wilderness because of his talents and skill of battle.

He then bumped into a man and the man said that he knew Drake from somewhere. He asked him if he wanted tea, Drake gladly accepted the mans offer and drank tea with him. The man treated Drake like he was the mans son, the man thought Drake how to wield a blade and how to fight.. Drake then lived with the man for 6yrs and then killed the man, he killed him because asked the man to teach him more powerful skills but, the man had noting left to teach him. So, Drake ended up killing him, after that day. Drake left that village and went somewhere new to live.

He started to go and battle road ninja’s and such for his time being. People fear him for his power and for how many road ninja’s he had killed. Their were rumors that he is part wolf and such but, he really isn’t. People say that because they said that when he is mad. His eyes turn blood red like some sort of demon. But, that is not true to Drake. He then plan to join this group that he heard of which is called the “Seven Swords Men”.

Since his goal was to become on of the members, he began to kill as many people as possible to raise his missing ninja. He started to make people scared of him. He loved the feeling to make people fear him and that is why he want to join “The Band of Seven” until he was finally recognize for his talents.

EDIT: I'm a Kaguya now.

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Sench · Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 10:14 am Post subject:

ok, strengths and weaknesses aren't quite balanced. remove a physical strength or add another weakness. also, you can only have one bloodline jutsu to start with, I think
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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 3:29 pm Post subject:

Yeah, I was a bit puzzled.

Sench · Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 4:07 pm Post subject:

Reflexes and flexibility are two different things
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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 4:30 pm Post subject:

Yes, though your flexibility comes from your quick reactions and able to remotely move upon sighting something am I, right?

Though, in some form or way, your Flexibility is amphed or something from Reflexes. Think about it, when Lee see's an incoming attack, he's able to move and counter-attack instantly.

Also, I thought Reflex is basically flexibility because they depend on each other. Think about it, Reacting? Flexible?

What I am trying to say is, that he should just put, "Quick on his Feet" or something.
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Sench · Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 4:32 pm Post subject:

Actually, flexibility only means you can bend well (to put it bluntly). It doesn't really have anything to do with reacting. Of course, you can probably dodge better if you're flexible, but flexibility by itself does not give you the speed to do it
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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 4:37 pm Post subject:

But if you dodge, it's a reaction from your Reflexes, right?
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OzanaruSyra · Posted: Tue Jan 08, 2008 9:30 pm Post subject:

I agree with Sench. Reflexes and flexibility would be separated. While one can aid one another, it doesn't necessarily mean they are reliant or grouped together. It would be the same as saying you have fast hands and strong punches. Together that would be great, but you don't necessarily have to have one to have the other.

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Drake · Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 9:40 am Post subject:

Alrighty...I changed to Kaguya...maybe now my str/weak match.

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 11:44 am Post subject:

It does look very good, the only thing I see wrong is your "Ethnicity", which should be "Mizu no Kuni (Water Country)". Other than that, looks great.
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