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Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 4:00 pm Post subject: Ayame Daikonran Kaitsume |
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Name: Ayame Daikonran Kaitsume
Age: 13
Gender: female
Height: 5'5"
Weight: 130 lbs
Appearance: Wears a white and black tank top with bandages wrapping around her neck that crisscross from both of her arms to around her neck. Wears a small black skirt, with a small silver belt around the waist that holds two small wooden swords, and black boots that come up to her thighs. Black wirst bands with bandages tied around them. As a full bred she has wings as well.
Race: Neko demon
Hair: Silver
Eyes: brown
Body/fur: White fur and black ears
Ethnicity: Hi No Kuni
Level/Rank: Chuunin, B-rank
Village: Sunagakure
Bloodline: Nekojin Isan (Cat Demon Heritage)
Main/Flavored Weapon: Two wooden Swords
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory:
Two Wooden Swords
10 Kunai
20 ft of Wire
20 Shuriken
Suna Forehead Protector
Strengths:
Chakra randomly increases
Highly attuned to Fuuton Jutsus
Very intelligent
Good at learning Medical Ninjutsu
Fast Runner
Weaknesses:
Chakra randomly decreases
Cocky
Becomes angry when taunted
Very impatient
not great at hand to hand combat
Jutsus:
Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: This technique must be mastered by any ninja who has graduated from the shinobi academy. It's the most basic technique a Gennin must know, since it can be a real lifesaver. This ninjutsu creates a simple illusion clone identical to the caster. The clone however has no physical properties and will disperse the moment it is touched.
Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Henge is the basic skill a ninja must know to become a Gennin. It's mostly used as a decoy, to confuse the opponent by transforming into somebody that's an ally with the enemy, and then attack from the back when he's not expecting it. This technique can easily be combined with other jutsus for a more powerful effect, such as with Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique].
Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Switch Technique]
Rank: E (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: Kawarimi is a widely used and very famous skill among shinobi. The user uses speed to their advantage, and grabs an item from the environment and places it on his/her current position while moving out of the way. This is clearly an evasion technique used to dodge attacks; however it can be linked with other jutsus or attacks to create massive damage if done properly.
Kinobori [Tree Climbing]
Rank: C (Basic)
Requirements: Learned From A Sensei
Description: The user concentrates onto the soles of their feet and coats them with a layer of chakra. Once this is done, the user will then be able to walk up any tree like they are walking up a regular foot path.
Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking]
Rank: C (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: The user focuses their chakra to the soles of their feet and step onto the water. From the surface of the liquid, they would then need to be able to measure the amount of chakra it would take to support their weight along the surface of the water without sinking. Once this is mastered, the user would be able to easily walk on water.
Chakra no Mesu [Chakra Scalpel]
Rank: B
Requirements: Medical History / Proper Medical-Ninja Training
Description: This ninjutsu technique is used primarily for field surgery. The ninja concentrates a powerful aura of chakra around their hand, creating a blade capable of tearing through muscles and arteries, or breaking bone, without actually breaking the skin of the person they're using it on.
Chiyute no Jutsu [Healing Hands Technique]
Rank: A
Requirements: Medical History / Proper Medical-Ninja Training
Description: A ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses chakra into the palms of their hands, creating a small ball of healing chakra. This chakra, when concentrated, can instantly repair physical damage done to another person or themselves.
Bloodline Limit:
Wind Control- Daikonran can control the wind to a small degree. It allows them to deflect small projectiles and blow people off their feet. It gets stronger the more experienced the shinobi becomes.
Flight (2 feet high per rank)
Strong Lungs - Can breath under water a long time
Name: Hane Seicho (Wing Growth)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Nekojin Wings
Description: This is a jutsu for nekojin that want to fly alot more often. Usually, they could only fly or hover for a few seconds. With this jutsu there wings become large enough to fully support them. After making handseal, the send chakra into the wings to make them grow. They can now fly long amounts of time without exhaustion.
Kaze Dansu (Tenohira Yoshiki) [Wind Dance (Palm Style)]
Rank: C
Requirements: Strong Affinity to Wind, Taught by Cat Demon of the Daikonran family.
Description: This fighting style is a combination of Caleb's racial style and the palm strikes he's learned. It's most basic function is to add extra pressure to unarmed strikes by compressing wind. Jounin and higher can even use limbs against weapons without fear of losing them. The next function is mimic the wind's agility and evasiveness through clever footing. This gives them a boost in speed and dodging skills It also allows you to extend your strikes 5 feet past you normal reach. Until your of Jounin rank, these extended strikes hit with less force then actually hitting something physically. Lastly, at the rank of Chuunin and above, you can shoot wind blasts. These deal roughly the damage of a punch, but slightly varies with chakra channeled into it (still never does more damage than a good punch from the user could do) and it takes a minute to gather the wind / chakra to shoot . You don't lose much chakra unless using the wind blast option or your wind is "broken". This can happen when a strong opponent hits a limb with the compression effect (in effect shattering it like a weapon) or you're hit hard by an attack (causing you to lose focus). This causes a rather large amout of chakra to escape. Caleb's Palm Style is more physical than normal Kaze Dansu, which prefers to use wind blasts rather than physical blows. On a last note, this gives you a small control of wind, but nothing strong enough to be utilized in a battle situation.
Jutsus that wants to learn
Chakura Kyuin no Jutsu [Chakra Absorption Technique]
Rank: B (Special Ability)
Requirements: Special Permission *PM A Moderator*
The user is able to absorb the physical and spiritual chakra energy of the opponent into himself. This technique can be used for both offensive and defensive purposes. The user doesn't have to actually touch the opponent, since it is also possible to use it through other media.
Chuusuusei Biribiri [Central Nervous System Electrical Shock]
Rank: A
Requirements: Medical History / Proper Medical-Ninja Training
Description: A ninjutsu technique where the ninja turns their chakra into an electrical pulse which is transmitted into an enemy's body by striking the base of their neck. The electrical impulse travels up their brain stem and disrupts the flow of electricity in the nervous system.
Dokunuki no Jutsu [Poison Extraction Technique]
Rank: A
Requirements: Medical History / Proper Medical-Ninja Training
Description: A jutsu used to remove the poison from an infected victim. This is a very hard technique to perform and requires precise chakra concentration and control.
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique]
Rank: A (Kinjutsu)
Requirements: None
Description: Being a forbidden and advanced ninjutsu, only a few people know this technique perfectly. It is similar to the Bunshin no Jutsu since the main function is to create clones. However, Kage Bunshin no Jutsu doesn't create mere illusion clones. This jutsu can create clones that are real, and can deal physical damage. They disappear after being hit by an attack.
Fuuton: Daitoppa [Wind Release: Grand Blast]
Rank: C/B (For C Rank Please Ask For Moderator Approval)
Requirements: None
Description: The user sends out a powerful explosion of wind, which can easily level almost an entire area. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame, making it stronger and more damaging to the target.
Kaze no Yaiba [Wind Blade]
Rank: A
Requirements: None
Description: A ninjutsu technique where the ninja creates a whirlwind blade around their arm with chakra. The blade slices through almost anything and cannot be easily blocked, as it is said that "nothing can stop a blade of wind."
Saisei no Saibou [Cell Regeneration]
Rank: S (Kinjutsu)
Requirement: Medical History / Proper Medical-Ninja Training
Description: A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses all of their chakra into one part of their body just before an attack. The moment that attack connects, the chakra activates the natural regeneration of the body's cellular makeup, repairing the damage done by an attack the moment after it is done. An extremely powerful jutsu, it uses all of the ninja's chakra and stamina. Even though this jutsu can save the user from death, they will certainly not able to continue a battle in this condition.
Satsugaite no Jutsu [Killing Hands Technique]
Rank: A (Kinjutsu)
Requirements: Medical History / Proper Medical-Ninja Training
Description: A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses chakra into the palms of their hands, creating a small ball of killing chakra, which is the complete opposite of the Chiyute no Jutsu [Healing Hands Technique]. Through concentrating their chakra in a manner opposing the Chiyute, instead of rebuilding and restoring another person's cells, this jutsu intends to destroy and unravel another person's cells.
Name: Chakra Fists
Type: Nin
Rank: S(Kinjutsu)
Requirements: Large chakra pool, and good chakra control.
Description: The user starts by focusing chakra towrd there fist intill there chakra is eventually showing. Then the user focuses all there energy and will power into his/hers fists making the chakra look like fists 4-5 times the size. Depending how strong the energy and will power is the stronger the punch will be. But if the user doubts themselves during the attack, the attack will backfire and either take off the users arms or kill them on the spot, once the user sues this jutsu they collapse unconsious due to chakra loss.
Name: Fuuton Jukutatsu [Wind Release Mastery]
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S (Kinjutsu)
Requirements: Main Element: Wind, Precise Charka Control, Concentration
Description: By focusing your charka correctly, based on the way it flows and changes when handseals are used, one can use jutsu of their own element without handseals, though with the mental effort and concentration it does to do so causes the jutsu to be, at best, only half strength relative to the amount of charka used. This version is for those who's element is wind.
Training Time: 30 posts / 10 days
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background: Ayame was born in the fire country to the Cat demon clan of Daikonran. She is a apprentince of wind control, now living in Suna with her distant cousins (barely related) Caleb and Natalie. But unlike her cousins she isn't quite the same. Her fur and ears are of different colors, her father is from the other part of the Cat demon clan where her mother is from Caleb's side. Since then she took on the earth cat demon apperance making her a little more special in appearance and ability. When she was younger, most of the children made fun of her because she didn't have the pinkish fur like the others and this made her angry because she strived to be the like the others to be accepted into the clan like her cousins. When she was eight years old she decided to enter the clan and prove to her parents and the others that she would be the best medical ninja out there. Competeting with her cousins, she studied everyday and practiced her wind mastery. She wanted to control the wind to have it at the tip of her hands to show people that she would surpass even their clan leader and earn the respect that she desserved. When she was twelve she graduated from the Academy with top remarks being the top notch student in her class. As she was assigned to her team, she went to train to show them that she was going to soon be getting the respect that she deserved from her clanmates.
Roleplaying Characters:
Reileyn Itichi
Ayame Daikonran Kaitsume
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Otokage a rank, Chunnin b rank Village: Otokagure, Sunagakure Training Points: i have no idea!! Inventory: One large scythe, 10 kunai, 100 shuriken
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Is this a new char., or one that you already had? Oh, and good to see you again, Rei-chan! ^_^ _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi
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Posted: Mon Feb 11, 2008 7:27 pm Post subject: |
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Ok, no prob., but here's what's wrong:
1. You need a second Fighting Style.
2. You only start off with "Bunshin no Jutsu", "Kawarimi no Jutsu", and "Henge no Jutsu". You'll have to take the others off, and, if you want to, place them in the "Jutsus Want to Learn" section.
3. Does the Nekojin Clan actually have any Bloodline Jutsus? If so, you can have on up to D-Ranked Bloodline Jutsu.
Other than that, looks pretty good. _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi
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Posted: Tue Feb 12, 2008 1:24 pm Post subject: |
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She has no physical strengths/weaknesses. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Kaeor Arumashi
Sesshomaru Ozanaru
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Kage ~ Jounin Village: Iwagakure~Sunagakure Training Points: 0 Inventory: Kunai x6, Shuriken x 15, Poison Senbon x30, Nodachi strapped at his left waist and hiltless katana at his back, Explosive Tags x15, The Harvester~x9 Kunai, x18 Senbon, x30 Shuriken, x1 Wakishizi, x1 Katar
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 5:47 pm Post subject: |
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Could you at least specify that she has average whatever, which means no out glaring weaknesses but nothing that sets her above. _________________ Syra's Theme - 463

Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Cardinal Blood
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin, SS ~ Missing Nin, B ~ Genin, D (Not Yet Approved) Village: Kirigakure ~ None Training Points: 185 Inventory: Nezic Hsm, Naru Dagger, 2 Tekagi, 3 Daggers ~ 3 Choking Wires, War Sythe, Espada Ropera
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 7:01 pm Post subject: |
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Syra has a point. Put down just one physical strength/weakness and you should be good to go after that. _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi
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Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 5:12 pm Post subject: |
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As far as D ranked no, jutsu that where gonna be had to be C ranked... You could be nice lol. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Mousy
Dharma, The Silver Moth (Puppet Master)
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin, A ~ Chuunin, B ~ Jounin, A ~ Jounin, A Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ ??? ~ Konohagakure Training Points: 30 Inventory: Blade of the Wind Spirits, 20 kunai,100 feet of metal thread ~ See Inventory ~ Summoning Quiver (Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ Mouse Paw Yo-yo, Lexi, Retractable Shuriken, and Silver Soldier Serum x3, Tsurugi 2
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Looks fine to me now, anyone else? _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi
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