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Suna Doton Rise [Earth Release: Sand And Earth Rise]

 
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 1:05 pm    Post subject: Suna Doton Rise [Earth Release: Sand And Earth Rise] Reply with quote

I made a little moderation to:

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Gokusamaiso [Prison Sand Burial]
Rank: S
Requirements: None
Description: The ground quickly loosens below the opponent and causes everything in the area to completely sink hundreds of meters deep within the earth. By being imprisoned at this depth, the pressure on the opponent will immobilize their ability to even move a finger.


Here is the custom one I made.

Doton: Suna Doton Rise [Earth Release: Sand And Earth Rise]
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Requirements: You have Gokusamaiso [Prison Sand Burial] As One of your Jutsus.
Dsscription:The ground quickly raises and causes everything in the area to completely raise hundreds of meters high. By being at this height, the lack of oxygen will make it harder for the person to take even a breath. THe only way for the lack of oxygen to not affect you is if yuo are used to it. Thus you must practice witht his jutsu many times. This jutsu may be used offensivally and defensivally. For denfence, you can shoot yourself hight inot the air, avoiding attacks. For offense because you can send your untrained opponent that high and make them unable to breath. After an extreme amount of training the user can control how high the pillor of land will go.

Stages

Stage 1:
Requirements: Have Doton: Suna Doton Rise [Earth Release: Sand And Earth Rise] jutsu.
Description:The user cannot control how far the land will rise. It is different everytime. This can cuase trouble. Also the user in unable

Stage 2:
Requirements: Have Stage 1. Light Training. (About 2 RP posts of using this jutsu)
Description: The can now breath at the extreme height. You still cannot control the size of the pillor.

Stage 3:
Requirements: Have Stage 1 & 2. Heavy Training. (About 10 RP posts using this jutsu)
Description: The user can know control the pillor of land. The user has now mastered the art of Doton:Suna Doton Rise [Earth Release: Sand And Earth Rise].

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[quote="Everwill"]Pretty sure the episode count is over 9000.[/quote]


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 1:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This jutsu seems pretty awsome. I wish I was from the sand village now, and used earth element jutsus. The lack of oxygen thing however you would practicly have to be directly under the Earth's atmosphere, unless you make your opponent try to breath in quick gasps of air. Besides that this jutsu KICKS ASS!!!!!
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 1:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you. But, the amount of Oxygen depends on how high the pillor goes. At stage 1 & 2 you cant control the height, but by stage three you can. And it is not total loss of Oxygen, more of harder to breath, so if your opponent is tired and is breathing hard....you get it. And by stage 3 you can raise it however you want. Like from 1 cm. to 500 meters (Higher or Lower).
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 1:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thats exactly what I mean. If your opponent is out of breath or breathing hard they won't be able to take in large amounts of air, and thus they might suffercate. Well thats at stage three of course. As for 1 and 2 I dunno. Anyway its a good jutsu.
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 1:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

1 & 2 said it is random. It will rise to random heights. It is unpredicable.
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 1:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well its deadly and painful. Looks good to me.
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 1:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I broke my own rule by accepting this, but who cares. Never again shall I do this. (Til' next time Razz)

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