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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 1:05 pm Post subject: Suna Doton Rise [Earth Release: Sand And Earth Rise] |
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I made a little moderation to:
| Quote: | Gokusamaiso [Prison Sand Burial]
Rank: S
Requirements: None
Description: The ground quickly loosens below the opponent and causes everything in the area to completely sink hundreds of meters deep within the earth. By being imprisoned at this depth, the pressure on the opponent will immobilize their ability to even move a finger.
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Here is the custom one I made.
Doton: Suna Doton Rise [Earth Release: Sand And Earth Rise]
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Requirements: You have Gokusamaiso [Prison Sand Burial] As One of your Jutsus.
Dsscription:The ground quickly raises and causes everything in the area to completely raise hundreds of meters high. By being at this height, the lack of oxygen will make it harder for the person to take even a breath. THe only way for the lack of oxygen to not affect you is if yuo are used to it. Thus you must practice witht his jutsu many times. This jutsu may be used offensivally and defensivally. For denfence, you can shoot yourself hight inot the air, avoiding attacks. For offense because you can send your untrained opponent that high and make them unable to breath. After an extreme amount of training the user can control how high the pillor of land will go.
Stages
Stage 1:
Requirements: Have Doton: Suna Doton Rise [Earth Release: Sand And Earth Rise] jutsu.
Description:The user cannot control how far the land will rise. It is different everytime. This can cuase trouble. Also the user in unable
Stage 2:
Requirements: Have Stage 1. Light Training. (About 2 RP posts of using this jutsu)
Description: The can now breath at the extreme height. You still cannot control the size of the pillor.
Stage 3:
Requirements: Have Stage 1 & 2. Heavy Training. (About 10 RP posts using this jutsu)
Description: The user can know control the pillor of land. The user has now mastered the art of Doton:Suna Doton Rise [Earth Release: Sand And Earth Rise].
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C&C welcome. _________________ Dog carcass in alley this morning, tire tread on burst stomach. This city is afraid of me. I have seen its true face. The streets are extended gutters and the gutters are full of blood and when the drains finally scab over, all the vermin will drown. The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save us!"... and I'll look down and whisper "No." They had a choice, all of them. They could have followed in the footsteps of good men like my father or President Truman. Decent men who believed in a day's work for a day's pay. Instead they followed the droppings of lechers and communists and didn't realize that the trail led over a precipice until it was too late. Don't tell me they didn't have a choice. Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring down into bloodly Hell, all those liberals and intellectuals and smooth-talkers... and all of a sudden nobody can't think of anything to say.
[quote="Everwill"]Pretty sure the episode count is over 9000.[/quote]
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 1:16 pm Post subject: |
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Thank you. But, the amount of Oxygen depends on how high the pillor goes. At stage 1 & 2 you cant control the height, but by stage three you can. And it is not total loss of Oxygen, more of harder to breath, so if your opponent is tired and is breathing hard....you get it. And by stage 3 you can raise it however you want. Like from 1 cm. to 500 meters (Higher or Lower). _________________ Dog carcass in alley this morning, tire tread on burst stomach. This city is afraid of me. I have seen its true face. The streets are extended gutters and the gutters are full of blood and when the drains finally scab over, all the vermin will drown. The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save us!"... and I'll look down and whisper "No." They had a choice, all of them. They could have followed in the footsteps of good men like my father or President Truman. Decent men who believed in a day's work for a day's pay. Instead they followed the droppings of lechers and communists and didn't realize that the trail led over a precipice until it was too late. Don't tell me they didn't have a choice. Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring down into bloodly Hell, all those liberals and intellectuals and smooth-talkers... and all of a sudden nobody can't think of anything to say.
[quote="Everwill"]Pretty sure the episode count is over 9000.[/quote]
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 1:28 pm Post subject: |
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1 & 2 said it is random. It will rise to random heights. It is unpredicable. _________________ Dog carcass in alley this morning, tire tread on burst stomach. This city is afraid of me. I have seen its true face. The streets are extended gutters and the gutters are full of blood and when the drains finally scab over, all the vermin will drown. The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save us!"... and I'll look down and whisper "No." They had a choice, all of them. They could have followed in the footsteps of good men like my father or President Truman. Decent men who believed in a day's work for a day's pay. Instead they followed the droppings of lechers and communists and didn't realize that the trail led over a precipice until it was too late. Don't tell me they didn't have a choice. Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring down into bloodly Hell, all those liberals and intellectuals and smooth-talkers... and all of a sudden nobody can't think of anything to say.
[quote="Everwill"]Pretty sure the episode count is over 9000.[/quote]
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 1:39 pm Post subject: |
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I broke my own rule by accepting this, but who cares. Never again shall I do this. (Til' next time )
ACCEPTED _________________ Dog carcass in alley this morning, tire tread on burst stomach. This city is afraid of me. I have seen its true face. The streets are extended gutters and the gutters are full of blood and when the drains finally scab over, all the vermin will drown. The accumulated filth of all their sex and murder will foam up about their waists and all the whores and politicians will look up and shout "Save us!"... and I'll look down and whisper "No." They had a choice, all of them. They could have followed in the footsteps of good men like my father or President Truman. Decent men who believed in a day's work for a day's pay. Instead they followed the droppings of lechers and communists and didn't realize that the trail led over a precipice until it was too late. Don't tell me they didn't have a choice. Now the whole world stands on the brink, staring down into bloodly Hell, all those liberals and intellectuals and smooth-talkers... and all of a sudden nobody can't think of anything to say.
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