Name:  Jissen Kenbu (Actual Battle Sword-Dance) Type:  Taijutsu/Genjutsu Rank:  Chuunin+ (B-Rank) Requirements:  Must have strength in speed and power, Taijutsu specialist, ability to use Kempo fighting style.  (Can be taught to another) Description:  Using his speed and power to his advantage over his target, Aoshi will move with the fluidity and movements that will confuse the opponent, making it seem like he's in defferent places at once.  While using this, he sets up his target to use the "Kaiten Kenbu".
Name:  Kaiten Kenbu (Literally "Dance of the Wheeling Sword") Type:  Taijutsu Rank:  Chuunin+ (B-Rank) Requirements:  Ability to use Kempo fighting style, one or more Kodachis, strength in speed and power, Taijutsu specialist, must know "Jissen Kenbu".  (Can be taught to another) Description:  Using one, or both, of his Kodachis, along with the "Jissen Kenbu" technique, Aoshi will get to a point of the target, usually behind them, then twist around in three quick circles, almost in the blink of an eye, cutting the target three times close together.
Name:  Ryusui no Ugoki (Flowing-Water Movement) Type:  Taijutsu/Genjutsu Rank:  Jounin+ (A-Rank) Requirements:  Must know "Jissen Kenbu", Taijutsu specialist, ability to use Kempo fighting style, strength in speed and power.  (Can be taught to another) Description:  A more powerful version of the "Jissen Kenbu", this is a moving technique where Aoshi moves around fast and silently, confusing the opponent due to the fluid motion & continuously changing speed.  This sets his opponent up for one of his strongest attacks:  "Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren".
Name:  Kaiten Kenbu Rokuren (Literally "Dance of the Wheeling Sword Six Successions") Type:  Taijutsu Rank:  Jounin+ (A-/S-Rank) Requirements:  Must know "Jissen Kenbu", must know "Kaiten Kenbu", ability to use Kempo fighting style, strength and speed and power, Taijutsu specialist, two or more Kodachis.  (Can be taught to another) Description:  The attack involves Aoshi gripping his Kodachi backhand, then slashing the opponent six times in rapid succession, from both sides (it relies on confusing the opponent on the direction from which each subsequent strike is going to come).  This is one of his strongest attacks, and he uses both of his Kodachis.
Name:  Onmyou Kousa (Ying-Yang Cross) Type:  Taijutsu Rank:  Jounin+ (A-Rank) Requirements:  Two or more Kodachis, Taijutsu specialist, strength in power.  (Can be taught to another) Description:  Aoshi blocks an enemies striking weapon with one Kodachi, then strikes it with the second Kodachi, thrusting the first one through.  This won't destroy ALL weapons (like Custom Weapons and the such), but will destroy a normal weapon.
Name:  Onmyou Hasshi (Dusk to Dawn Strike) Type:  Taijutsu Rank:  Jounin+ (A-Rank) Requirements:  Two or more Kodachis, Taijutsu specialist, strength in power and speed.  (Can be taught to another) Description:  Aoshi throws both Kodachi at the opponent, hitting the end of the first one with the second one for an extra boost.  The second Kodachi is hidden directly behind the first, so the opponent would only see one Kodachi heading for them in their line of sight.  Though this will leave Aoshi defenseless, in terms of not having his weapons, he'll immediately try to retrieve his weapons before the target can get to him.
Name:  Gokou Juuji (Shadow-Light Cross) Type:  Taijutsu Rank:  Jounin+ (A-Rank) Requirements:  Two or more Kodachis, Taijutsu specialist, strength in power ans speed.  (Can be taught to another) Description:  Aoshi crosses the two Kodachi and moves them outwards in a scissor-like cut.
Name:  Kaiten Nibai Kenbu (Literally "Dance of the Double Wheeling Sword") Type:  Taijutsu Rank:  Jounin+ (A-/S-Rank) Requirements:  Ability to use Kempo fighting style, two or more Kodachis, strength in speed and power, Taijutsu specialist, must know "Jissen Kenbu".  (Can be taught to another) Description:  This is an advanced version of the original "Kaiten Kenbu".  Using both, of his Kodachis, along with the "Jissen Kenbu" technique, Aoshi will get to a point of the target, usually behind them, then twist around in three quick circles, almost in the blink of an eye, cutting the target three times close together with both Kodachis, for a total of six strikes. _________________ Shigane, Makoto Roleplaying Characters: RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Village: Fame: Infamy: 0 Training Points: 0 Inventory:
Take out everything that says fatal or almost fatal. That's god modding from the start. Besides that it seems fine except the fifth one; it's way too powerful and it doesn't make any sense. _________________ 2 Ex. Rank Trains, 1 Auot Rank Up
Alright, I took those out, but I was going by how the attacks actually were.  As far as the fifth one, it's a technique from another char., and basically it's to cut one's head off.  Ok, added one. To answer your question, Yuwea, I'm going by the char. that actually uses these technique, and he only uses Kodachis. _________________ Shigane, Makoto Roleplaying Characters: RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Village: Fame: Infamy: 0 Training Points: 0 Inventory:
The first one doesn't seem much like a jutsu. Seems kinda like a cheat code.
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Onmyou Kousa
This doesn't seem like a jutsu, but more along the lines of self defense. Aoshi should be able to do this freely without a jutsu.
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Onmyou Hasshi
Once again, this technique doesn't sound like a jutsu but merely something you would be able to normally do in an RP. Infact, almost all of your techniques seem like normal role playing techniques. If you're trying to come up with an original technique, then make something like, I dunno, he sends out waves of chakra from his Kodaichi's, or he can control a wind current or something.
In terms of Taijutsu, I'd say make some type of cheap version of Renge out of it. Also, not all jutsu have to be battle attacks. Some can be normal skills that can be used outside of battle.
For example: My character Jikota is extremely powerful when it comes to Taijutsu. Yet, not many people know that he can literally communicate with marine animals.
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Gokou Juuji
Same goes for this technique. It's not a technique but merely a stance perhaps. This would be normal rp abilities. Not everything you do has to be considered a jutsu. _________________
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The first one doesn't seem much like a jutsu. Seems kinda like a cheat code.
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Onmyou Kousa
This doesn't seem like a jutsu, but more along the lines of self defense. Aoshi should be able to do this freely without a jutsu.
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Onmyou Hasshi
Once again, this technique doesn't sound like a jutsu but merely something you would be able to normally do in an RP. Infact, almost all of your techniques seem like normal role playing techniques. If you're trying to come up with an original technique, then make something like, I dunno, he sends out waves of chakra from his Kodaichi's, or he can control a wind current or something.
In terms of Taijutsu, I'd say make some type of cheap version of Renge out of it. Also, not all jutsu have to be battle attacks. Some can be normal skills that can be used outside of battle.
For example: My character Jikota is extremely powerful when it comes to Taijutsu. Yet, not many people know that he can literally communicate with marine animals.
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Gokou Juuji
Same goes for this technique. It's not a technique but merely a stance perhaps. This would be normal rp abilities. Not everything you do has to be considered a jutsu.
I got all of these techniques, except I edited the last one from "Kaiten Kenbu" to make it my own personal technique, from Wikipedia. They're all techniques that are used with Kodachis, hence why I put them here. Each one of them are actual attacks of some kind, except for "Jissen Kenbu" and "Ryusui no Ugoki", which I edited both of them, that can harm a person, or weapon in terms of the "Omnyou Kousa". The "Gokou Juuji" is an attack as well, not a stance on that it can cut a person's head off... O.o _________________ Shigane, Makoto Roleplaying Characters: RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Village: Fame: Infamy: 0 Training Points: 0 Inventory:
they seem to be techniques....and not actual jutsu
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