Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 11:55 am Post subject: Kutaku Tsutaro
Name: Nataku tsutaro
Age: 13
Gender: male
Height: 4'10'' Â
Weight: 130
Appearance: black trench coat with red japanese(hate, sadness, vanity ect.) letters with collar comming over sides of face. long black hair that is hidden in coat. strands of hair comes over eyes. Under trench coat is black tanktop tucked into black saggy jeans. has black nail polish. has black sheethed kodachi strapped to wiast.
Race: Japanese
Hair: black
Eyes: black
Body: toned muscles
Ethnicity: land of waves
Level/Rank:Genin
Village: village hidden in the mist
Bloodline: furagan (if it gets passed)
Main/Favored Weapon: 1 kodachi (double handed grip)
Element: Fire Â
Fighting Type/Style:genjutsu, taijutsu
Starting Inventory: 30 shuriken, 30 kunai, 1 kodachi, 3 energy food pills.
Strengths:
+ excellent leading skills (as far as giving immidiate orders)
+ above average strength
+ makes good grades
+ above average chakra controle
+ doesn't stick out
Weaknesses:
- too quick to make dissisions (dissisions could be bad if head isn't right)
- below average speed
- antisocial
- below average chakra
- secret hatred for humans
Jutsus:clone jutsu, substitution jutsu, tranformation jutsu Â
Bloodline jutsus: fire toss[ one handed sighns to create light flames in each hand that don't do damage (if bloodline gets passed)]
Jutsus that wants to learn: all basic jutsus
Background: Kutaro was in a special village where people hand had mindfull intelectual compacity. the people were fairly peaceful because their location was in a certain spot were even travelers rarely passed through. every now and again some people would take advantedge of thier intelectual gift to manipulate others and make them do hurtful or savage things. the gaurdian wolf who was protecting this village was upset. the giant gardian wolf (purple) told the people to stop or else he and his two sons (one red and one blue) would destroy the village. The kage of the village punished those he could and Kutaku helped out. But some kept on and without warning the gaurdian wolves destroyed the village with fire. the kage and two kage level ninjas opened all thier inner gates to make three giant seals to seal the three wolves into the blood of the surviors. (Nataku, Kutaku and outhers.) Kutaku had no where to go so he took his son to the leaf village, left him there, and ran to the village hidden in the mist. here he learned techniques. He vows to one day meet his son in combat.
Missions Completed: Â
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0 Roleplaying Characters: No RPC Np RPC No 3rd RPC No 4th RPC RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: genin Village: village hidden in the mist Fame: 0 Infamy: 0 Training Points: N/A Inventory: one kodachi, 30 shuriken, 30 kunais, 5 energy foodpills
*cracks knuckles* Alright, this one looks alright, but there are still some things that need to be done:
1. 6'1'' seems too tall for one who's only 13, by typical means that is.
2. Adjust the weight after the height change.
3. You're Village is going to be "Kirigakure no Sato (Village Hidden in the Mist)", not "Waves".
4. Take out "a lot of", "excellent", and "high" because a Genin won't have any of that. You can say either "below average", "average", or "above average".
5. Wouldn't "excellent leading skills" and "too quick to make dissisions" contradict each other?
6. It's "Substitution Jutsu", not "Substitute". _________________ Shigane, Makoto Roleplaying Characters: RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Village: Fame: Infamy: 0 Training Points: 0 Inventory:
Let me clarify for you that 5) is not a contradiction. In fact, the strengths and weaknesses are almost completely balanced and quite excellent for a new profile. _________________ 2 Ex. Rank Trains, 1 Auot Rank Up
I wasn't saying that they were uneven, those just didn't look right to me. I mean, you can be a good leader, but be too quick to make decisions? _________________ Shigane, Makoto Roleplaying Characters: RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Village: Fame: Infamy: 0 Training Points: 0 Inventory:
Mhm. Being a leader means you have charisma, more or less. And you must make quick decisions all the time; however that doesn't imply they are the best decisions. _________________ 2 Ex. Rank Trains, 1 Auot Rank Up
Looks much better now, heh. Ummm, what do the "Japanese letters" say on your coat? _________________ Shigane, Makoto Roleplaying Characters: RPG Stats: Shinobi Rank: Village: Fame: Infamy: 0 Training Points: 0 Inventory:
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