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PostPosted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 7:31 pm    Post subject: Shiroi Kiba [Summon] Reply with quote

Name: Shiroi Kiba
Age: 300
Gender: Male
Height: 4' 1 tall, 7' long
Weight: 250 lbs

Appearance:



Race: Mystical Wolf
Hair: White
Eyes: Blue
Body: Muscular, very little fat

Level/Rank: Ordinary summon (Minor)
Type: Solo
Contract: Wolf (W.I.P)

Main/Favored Weapon: Fang & claws
Element: Lightning
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory: none

Personality: While appearing to be calm and peaceful, often playing around with other animals, is extremely fierce when in battle. Very loyal but to only one master and always one master, and would die for him/her. Intelligent, wise, and experienced in combat and in other areas for the long life that he has had. Shiroi prefers to be with a companion always, be it an ant or a fellow wolf, but doesnt mind acting alone if he has to.

Jutsus:

Raiton: Gian
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Shiroi
Description: Raiton: Gian is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After gathering chakra and focusing them to Shiroi's mouth, He releases a wave of electricity from its mouth. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri. If hit, the target receives first degree burns and becomes paralyzed for a duration of one post.

Raiton: Bakuha
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Requirements: Shiroi
Description: Raiton: Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique using the lightning element. After gathering chakra and spreading them throughout his body, Shiroi discharges the chakra into the surroundings, where everything within a 7 meter radius is shocked. Anyone hit receives first degree burns and stunned for a duration of one posts. Shiroi remains unharmed however. The jutsu can be used defensively to shock taijutsu users as they approach Shiroi, and can deflect projecticles if chakra is evenly and densly released.

Background: Shiroi was born into a famliy that lead the mystical pack of wolves that could utilize the lightning element for use. They controlled a vast area surrounded by high mountains where everything was covered by snow 365 days a year. Shiroi was trained by his father, the pack leader, to lead the group of wolves after he died. Shiroi went through rigorous and tough training to make his father proud and soon became one of the most powerful wolf in his generation, utilizing his incredible speed and quickness. His father then taught him to be intelligent and wise as a sage and thoughtful as a hermit. After leading several hunts, Shiroi had strongly established himself as the successor to his father. As Shiroi took over as the pack leader, many challanged Shiroi's authority on the group. He had to fight atleast twice every day and shedded many blood. This constant killing and fighting was a strain to Shiroi and he gave up on his title and left to wander the worlds, in search of a companion who he could stay with permanently or until he died.

Roleplaying Characters:
Ryu Hikaru
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No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin
Village: Konoha
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 0
Inventory: 5xKunai, 1xWakizashi

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 07, 2008 8:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is ready to be looked over now.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 3:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here's what I see wrong:

1.  300's a little old, no?
2.  I think for "Race", you would put down "Wolf", no?  O.o
3.  A Summon's "Level/Rank", unless it's a Boss Summon, is equal to it's Summoner.
4.  What are those Jutsus?  Never heard of them.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 3:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

um Kat 1. No it's not for a summon.

3.As long as the rank is one of a level of jutsu you can use it should be fine.

4. Summons usually have unique jutsu.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki (Clan Leader)
Aleison Nova, Starkin Queen
Ezekial Yuwea, Aasimar of Light
Dharma, The Silver Moth (Mastery) and Dizzy
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin, SS ~ Chuunin, C ~ Jounin, S ~ Jounin, A ~ Enemy, E
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Iwakagure ~ Konohagakure
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 2400
Inventory: Blade of the Wind Spirits, 100 ft. of Metal Thread, Shinsou, Fan of Furious Flames, Righteous Guard of Madara, Summon Tattoos (Shuriken, Kunai, Windmills), Summon Scroll (Large Med Kit), Small Med Kit, Summoning Jewerly, Symbiote, Spiral Bracer. Inversion Summon Scroll Located In Uchiha Clan House~ Customized Shortbow, Summoning Quiver (Customized Arrows, High Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ See Inventory

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

1. what Yuwea said
2. Eh, changed
3. The 1st jutsu is B rank and my genin is D rank so it can be used. The A rank jutsu can't until i reach C rank, but that can be done tonight if needed so its not a problem
4. What Yuwea said. I made custom jutsus for the summon so that he's more unique. 1st jutsu is based off of Raiton: Gian though, which is a canon jutsu used by Kazuku

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Village: Konoha
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Inventory: 5xKunai, 1xWakizashi

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's fine with me, Kats?
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Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki (Clan Leader)
Aleison Nova, Starkin Queen
Ezekial Yuwea, Aasimar of Light
Dharma, The Silver Moth (Mastery) and Dizzy
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin, SS ~ Chuunin, C ~ Jounin, S ~ Jounin, A ~ Enemy, E
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Iwakagure ~ Konohagakure
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 2400
Inventory: Blade of the Wind Spirits, 100 ft. of Metal Thread, Shinsou, Fan of Furious Flames, Righteous Guard of Madara, Summon Tattoos (Shuriken, Kunai, Windmills), Summon Scroll (Large Med Kit), Small Med Kit, Summoning Jewerly, Symbiote, Spiral Bracer. Inversion Summon Scroll Located In Uchiha Clan House~ Customized Shortbow, Summoning Quiver (Customized Arrows, High Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ See Inventory

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PostPosted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Soooooo, who's going to have the Scroll then if you only have a Genin?
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

the Genin?...He's entering the coming Chuunin exams, and i can rank train to C rank if i have to
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Village: Konoha
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is true, but someone still needs to control the Scroll for now to pass it on, no?
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 4:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

He can carry it even if he can't use it. Much like in real life i could carry a sword and not know how to appropriately use it.
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Bethany (Team Silver Unique NPC)
Sharingan Points=  1,000;
Anyone Perfect Must Be Lying, Anything Easy Has It's Cost. Anything Plain Can Be Lovely, Anything Loved Can Be Lost.

Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki (Clan Leader)
Aleison Nova, Starkin Queen
Ezekial Yuwea, Aasimar of Light
Dharma, The Silver Moth (Mastery) and Dizzy
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin, SS ~ Chuunin, C ~ Jounin, S ~ Jounin, A ~ Enemy, E
Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ Iwakagure ~ Konohagakure
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: 2400
Inventory: Blade of the Wind Spirits, 100 ft. of Metal Thread, Shinsou, Fan of Furious Flames, Righteous Guard of Madara, Summon Tattoos (Shuriken, Kunai, Windmills), Summon Scroll (Large Med Kit), Small Med Kit, Summoning Jewerly, Symbiote, Spiral Bracer. Inversion Summon Scroll Located In Uchiha Clan House~ Customized Shortbow, Summoning Quiver (Customized Arrows, High Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ See Inventory

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