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Zakatchi

My clan i am thinking of posting once i get 200 posts yayyy

Okay give it a chance it seams like it is god moding but actully its the exact opisite okay hope you enjoy it i did it on microsoft tell your oppinion honest one i wanna here it and mods give it a chance i am not done with it but thats all i did today i am getting 200 posts then i will create it before Zakatchi because he is the leader i know the clan leader has to be chunnin but he was the last one after his father and mother died with the stone okay


Bloodline Name: Yoshiro-Kanza- Salasar – Zakashow - Meaning the forgotten dammed blood demon souls.
Clan Name: Kanzaiyoko
Leader: It use to be Zakatchi’s mom but she died from a robbery death trap . Now its Zakatchi he has gave out fliers telling other like him to meet in certain places .
Village: Unknown

Clan Description: This has been a legendary clan that has been threw almost the whole time of the world. Its history is short because some don’t believe it some think a religion cannot be so powerful but they were wrong. The clan started when a mischievous god named Angeliso was bored so he escaped the heavens and took a stone and gave power to the stone to grant certain wishes but to have a curse with in the stone. Angeliso would always love to watch humans fight to death for land and for goods but he wanted to be blamed for it to have a reputation like the other gods. All the heavens mocked him and called him the little god of pranks. But oh how they were wrong as the poor reputation made him very unpopular in the heavens he became to think evilly . So Angelisio made the stone have a curse that once you hold it to your heart in a praying hand seal formation it would steal your soul.

And change you to a demon like appearance .But the worst thing was done was the soul stealer. Because the soul is the thing that keeps you from hell or heaven and allows you to pass if you have no soul once you die no next life in hell or heaven. So that was the worst thing about it you see . Even if the abilities you gained after your soul was took none could find happiness because they knew they would never meet there loved ones in heaven or fight there enemies forever in hell. So it made everyone depressed after a certain age and the leaders started to kill themselves but some did not some just made there life happy by what ever it took .

But after Angelisio the god of mischief  made this stone he made it so it would be recognized by its beauty so some would take it trade it and other things with it. So Angelisio went to earth and placed it on the ground its beauty was great and it was in the shape of a diamond so most would think it was worth something. But from inside what made it so special was it glowed with all colors that ever existed in a diamonds shape and it looks like a diamond but it glowed with all colors that ever existed it was about as big as a tennis ball you could say.  So greedy souls could not resist .

Then after he placed it on the ground he turned himself invisible and watched as he saw a traveler named Kyo Yourmaga  stumble by . As soon as Kyo saw the glow he was very curious so he ran to where it came from and saw its diamond like appearance. So Kyo then walked over to it and picked it up as he said “ Oh my gods of the heavens look it this thing it gota at least be worth 10 mountains “ The man then with joy put it in his pocket as he then began to walk down the dirt road to a near by village.

Angeliso then smiled as he transformed himself to wearing a gold cloak and golden hair with bright blue eyes giving the appearance of an angel. Angelisio then took the invisibility off and walked to the man and said in a most gentle voice “ Um sir do you know where my diamond is , I am sorry I have not introduced myself yet I am the God of Generosity” The man then looked at the god as he said “ Well I found it and um well its looks like its worth allot and I am kind of poor if you know what I mean and also tho my friend is dying from a disease  and well I don’t have the money to pay for his procedure , so and either does he”

Angelisio then after hearing this had a great big smile on his face and said “ Well my good man your in luck this stone is worth allot but I am the god of generosity so I shall let you keep it also well it’s a wishing diamond” The man then said “ Can it help me save my friend “ Angelisio then said “ Yes it can all you have to do is hold it near your heart in a praying hand seal formation” The man then smiled as he began to cry tears of happiness as he quickly held it to his heart in a praying formation as he said “ I wish that my friend Kojo would live from this sickness and be better by tomorrow”   The stone then turned black as Kyo fell to the ground and started to cough up this light blue smoke from his mouth.

As the blue smoke drifted from his mouth it started to form a smoke image of him what he looked like and everything. Angelisio then showed his true appearance he looked as a ghost his skin was white as snow and his hair was black as the shadows he had black pure night eyes . And his shadow looked like many creatures such as wolves and dragons. Angelisio then said in a laughing tone “ Now your dammed forever little traveler oh my friend he's dying you are pathetic” The man then coughed out the rest of the smoke as it was fully formed into a smoke image of Kyo the full body and everything . The soul of Kyo then exploded and raised into the heavens . Angelisio then said

“ Wonderful let me tell you something else you friend is going to die you did not say what kojo his last name and kojo is a pretty poular name so I am sorry “ Kyo then looked up at the god and said “ You are no god you are a devil “ As he said those words kojo’s hair became white as snow and his eyes started to change colors as his skin was peach color and his ears were pointed . But then Kyo screamed as his teeth began to grow but only the canine teeth on the bottom and the top jaw grew the top jaw canine teeth grew to two inches long and became as sharp as razors and straight as can be to a tip.

And from how straight they were it made them able to pierce straight down threw things. Then the bottom jaw canine teeth grew to one inch long and became razor sharp and straight as can be to a tip. Then the teeth were now known as fangs so they then became as hard as titanium . Then Kyo finger nails began to extend from there normal length and became two inches long and curved slightly and to a pointy tip and became razor sharp . then the nails became hard as titanium.

Angelisio then laughed as Kyo was in pain as he said “ Almost done but the best gift to you is not even here yet “ The evil god then laughed again and again . Kyo then got up as his chakra exsploded out of him as his rage to the god was deadly . Kyo’s chakra then stopped and began to shake as it turned black . Angeliso then laughed as he said “ Now you shall be feared by most your chakra is not blue anymore now its black because you have no soul” Kyo then dropped to the floor as he saw a black shadow that was upright . He then screamed in fear as it came closer because shadows are post to stay flat but this one just got up and began to walk towards him. Angeliso  

then said “ Now for the ultimate gifts” Then the shadow then took out a sword that had white flames on it and put it threw Kyo’s chest as the shadow twisted the blade Kyo screamed as he fell to the ground as all these symbols on Kyo’s body appeared and started a to change colors. Angeliso then said “ Its finished now I will tell you what I put upon you a gave you a virus threw out your body that slowly. Consumes your blood making you slowly die  there is a way tho to keep yourself alive you must feed on the blood of other living things such as humans and animals “ Kyo then looked at the god terrified.

Angeliso then said “ Also now your body is much better than a  regular humans you now will be stronger than a normal human you will have incredible strength , speed agility sight, hearing and healing you will heal incredible rates  of speed . You wont be a god but you will not have super strength like to break a mountain you will just be slightly stronger than any other human . Also say you train your strength it will become stronger like any other training.

Now the last listen closely if you do not feed on others blood for a while the rate of the virus will kill your blood cells faster and say if you notice it and you feed right after they will still go at the same faster rate than normal so if you don’t feed the virus will spread quicker making you have to feed more often so if you keep on not feeding soon it will be so fast that you could feed a hundred times a day and it will still not be enough” Kyo then said “ You really are a devil arnt you that is the most sickest thing I ever herd I will not except this I will kill myself now I will starve my self to death because I will heal quickly”

Angeliso then said “ You see its not that easy if you don’t feed in a while you will become beast like and feed on any living thing around you even your family not knowing the beast of this virus will corrupt your train of thought and control you to only think about getting the feeding of blood you need. And once you get that amount you will return back to normal and not remember what happened but only see the destruction you caused. So once you are in this state you will do anything to get the blood you need”

Kyo then said in a most sorrowful voice “ You monster why would you do such a thing you are no god “ Angerliso then said “ I am a great god that will now be feared y most full thy self thoughts of a snakes tongue you don’t understand human also let me tell you the final thing you will never get sick and you cannot die from old age you will live forever if someone does not kill you “ As soon as the snakes words came out of his mouth . Kyo then began to cry as he gripped the ground and said “ Screw you, you dammed serpent of the fires of the below dam you to hell you sniveling coward “ Angeliso then said “ Goodbye have fun with your new life “  Angeliso then took the diamond and breathed on it with black breath as he chanted “ thy who touched thyself diamond smoke shall appear and show the information of this diamond .

1. This is a stone of great power it is a wishing stone.
2. This can not bring the dead back to life. It can only cure any sickness that’s all it can do.
3. Who ever holds the stone mean that its there’s meaning they can only wish once .
4. In time the stone must be passed to a other human.
5. who ever wishes will have great gifts upon them.

But who ever touches it will only see rule 1 and rule 5 thats all the others are hidden and can only be seen with the byakugan.

After that was  Angeliso then disappeared as the diamond turned back to its glow of colors . Kyo then was fully healed A couple weeks later Zakatchi’s great great great great so on so fourth great grandfather  got in a fight with Kyo and eventually killed him by restraining  him for 5 hours . You see Kyo did not care if he lived or died so he would often forget to feed so the virus spread and killed him after five hours with no feeding.  

The diamond then was eventually passed down to Zakatchi’s father Zakio . Then one shinobi war Zakio went to the war to defend his village and he died trying and the only thing that was recovered and sent back to Zakatchi’s mother Tokyo was the diamond but it was in a treasure chest so the person who recovered it did not see the smoke that told of the stones power. Zakatchi’s mother then began to die from the black plague a few years after Zakatchi was born. At the age of 6 Zakatchi had no one there to help his mom and his mom lost her voice so she could not call for help. So Zakatchi stole the chest and opened it in the forest and wished for his mother to be completely better. Zakatchi then after wishing this went threw the same changes that Kyo did . Gaining the Yoshiro-Kanza- Salasar – Zakashow bloodline .

Zakatchi was now like Kyo and was told by angeliso what his fate has now been sealed too. After Zakatchi herd all of this he did not care as long as his mother was fine him and his mother were that last in all there family . His mother then the next day was at a full recovery but she was blind so she could not see her son but she was happy that she was still with him. Zakatchi then quit as a ninja as he took care of his mother . But a year later him and his mother got into a big argument and his mother left with her walking stick into the forest to think. She then herd a scream so she quickly rushed to it. And tried to save the person but she was killed quick from not being able to see it was a trap to get people to come so they could steal there ryo.

Zakatchi after hearing what happened left his homeland and disappeared after selling the stone to a dealer for a million ryo the dealer offered him 10 million but Zakatchi said I am a generous person . No one knows where the diamond is now the clan is only the people that have wished on the diamond the clan is not together but its spread out across the shinobi map. And from when you touch the diamond it tells you that it’s a wishing stone well that just there is hook line sinker . So yah any who wish on the stone are in the clan and the bloodline is passed sexually or threw wishing threw the stone . Now Zakatchi serches for people that have wished upon this cusred stone so he has found none yet but a wishing stone is usally used for wishing. So yah

Well thats the history i am nt done with the rest okay i made it with in the rules okay, its a a balnce of wekaness and strenths okay,Also plz just know how muchh time and effory i used to make this aslo i know my grammer sucks so yah um just think that its yours how would you feel after using this much imagination and it was deleted or un exsepted, just think that if you have any questions about it pm me or reply.
Zeke Jamora

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This has been a legendary clan that has been threw almost the whole time of the world


Weird how Ninja's haven't been around all of the whole time of the world.....unless you're Rikudou.

Also, is this JUST the Clan Description? If so, you may wanna shorten it and only include the important parts, or the parts that make sense atleast.
Zakatchi

1. Ninja in the world of naruto have always been around and i am guessing we are playing on naruto earth not real life earth

2. I read a approved clan it shout out to me that clan dicription is the history how it was started and everything so yah and i said it was short dint i so yah .

3. It makes since i read it to my dad before i posted he says i am very creative and i should be author so yah .

4. for it to make since you cany speed read it you have to slolwy read it .
Ballian

your fifteen and you can't spell description?

>_> *senses another airknight* lol.
Zakatchi

No its just well i speed type when i am not making a rpg fourm you see like clans profiles and rpg replise i do themon microsoft so yah.
Uchiha Katsuga

Ballian wrote:
your fifteen and you can't spell description?

>_> *senses another airknight* lol.


XD
Yoko

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your fifteen and you can't spell description?

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can't spell

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heh
Zakatchi

well yah what evevah anyways um so how does it sound good enough to be exsepted i tried to make it  short so yah i put lots of detail and made it have a = ballence of bad things and good things then i read the rules and found out no imortals aloud so i changed it to healing fast okay well they who have read it tell me how does it sound dont worry the rest will be in later.
Zeke Jamora

What's the attraction to this clan? To me, it's a bit bland. You need a couple of people to join this clan in-order for it to be accepted. AND you need to post it in the Post Clans/Bloodlines section.
Zakatchi

welll i dont have 200 posts yet so yah also hw can they join if its not accepted you cant reall y join persay you have to be a child of Zakatchi or anyone else or you have to wished on the stone so yah um also . So yah aslo right now anyone that wants the stone can have it because he sold it to a market so yah . Um so yah you only can be in the clan if your a child of one of the members and you or you must have a topic with the stone read it again it tells thats it is not a useual clan you see.
Zeke Jamora

....*aggrivated*

I see you're use to Myspace roleplaying....Uh, a requirement for having your clan accepted is to have a few members for it.

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a child of Zakatchi or anyone else or you have to wished on the stone so yah


I knew there was a reason I didn't read this. That doesn't make any sense. If this is just a clan with nothing special, no special jutsu, no bloodlines, no abilities or attributes, then what is the point of it? If it's just some type of brotherhood then make an Organization.

Also, you start as a Genin....How would a Genin have children unless their old but then that would be a disgrace....anyhow, this entire clan needs to be revamped. I can help you but, only if you want it.

By the way, I'm not trying to flame but, you remind me of a dude named Randy.
Zakatchi

what i never roleplayed on myspace no read the whole thing you see you did not read it all you read it fast it will make perfect sense once you read it all okay take your time you dont have to read it all tonight or today spread it out to a week if you have to . Okay it makes perfect sense.
Zeke Jamora

Punctuation and grammar is the key.....Alright, I'll get it done in like 10-30 minutes.
Zakatchi

Okay sorry i suck at grammer its just o  only use microsoft when posting a profile or stuff like that when i am just talking i just blow it up say what i want the way i want it so yah lolz.Yah also tell me how you liked it did it keep you intrested the whole way and at the end it was kinda like oh dam it will be to long less detail quick storry so yah. Also remember think of it as yours before you say no not allowed because how would you feel after doing all that work taking all that imagination and throwing it away so yah. Also um yes i know about gods yes i know okay but hidan worships a god that gives him imortility so its in the rules then the vampire thing well i made it actully relistic sounding a blood eating virus so yah. Then aslo the healing the strenth is just a bit better than a humans no god mode strenth okay aslo the training thing means that doing running they get it faster the speed i mean like say you workout for six weeks to get a six pack and you work out 5 hours a day it would with this abilty only take 3 days working five hours a day to get the six pack they addapt and upgrade there body's faster .
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