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OzanaruSyra Status: Offline  NRC Global Mods

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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 5:31 pm Post subject: Contfronting the Past - Syra's Rank Train |
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The bright sun glared off the top of the buildings. Dust trailed up as she kicked her feet, in the deserty place. The buildings loomed upwards, shadows hiding dangerous foes. All was silent, except the scuffle of her feet and the sound of her breathing. It seemed to echo with a cautionary ring.
She knew that she was being watched, but pretended not to notice. Every once in a while, a small cough sounded in a dark house, or a clang of metal between alleys. She didn't react; she merely shielded her eyes from the scorching light, and kept on her trek through the desolate town. It was only moments later until she came to the middle of the town, inside the grassy plain. Stone was inlaid into the ground, leading to the guillotine.
The unsettling void of sound was soon destoyed by a single, piercing voice. " It's bad for young girls to be walking alone," the man said. He leered at her with his watery eyes, grinned with his toothless smile. his ragged clothing and pasty skin only added to the disgusting ensemble.
All around them, clicks and snaps could be heard down the alleyways. Syra didn't have to look; she knew that several gunment, belly down and trembling with excitement, had cocked rifles with her head in the crosshairs. _________________ Syra's Theme - 463

Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Kidaku Itichi
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure Training Points: 185 Inventory: 1 Katana
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 5 FC
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Eric Hatake Status: Offline  Honored Retirees

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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 5:47 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: If that's the whole post, then .5. If not, then tell me when you're done so I can check it. _________________ Hatake, Eric
Hiroshi, Kite
Kaguya, Takashi
Roleplaying Characters:
No RPC
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin~~Genin~~Jounin Village: Konoha~~Kiri~~Kiri Training Points: N/A Inventory: Katana:2, Shuriken: 30, Kunai:40, explosive tag:40, soldier pills:20, wire:20 meters, Trench knives:2 Fuuma Shuriken: 20 Special medicene pack.
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OzanaruSyra Status: Offline  NRC Global Mods

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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 6:24 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: It's definitely all. I'm posting based on events and writing impact rather than getting points.
IC: " You..." She said, cold hatred dripping from her words. " You bastard..."
Her mind was carried back into the past. The day were it started would be burned in her memory forever, seven years prior to this exact day.
It was a freezing winter that year. Syra had began her journey from the mainland to Kirigakure No Sato, where she hoped to begin a new life. She was forced to stop on the coast of the Land of Waves, the bite of the winter winds and the dangers of the unpredictable waters throwing her off course for days.
Frozen, hungry and depressed, she made her way through the weaving forest trails. A few hours later, she found herself lost within the unfamiliar landscape. By then, the skylight was dissapatting, leaving her in the darkness, alone with her miserable thoughts. As she trudged along, she saw lights in the distance. Excited, she rushed through the high piled snow and heavy brushes.
She rejoiced when she walked into the sleepy little town. The buildings looked worn down, but still warm and comfortable. She walked up to the nearest one, and knocked on the door. Her cold hand trembled as she removed it from the mitten. Three knocks, and she could hear floorboards creak from heavy footsteps. Her spirits lifted when the door opened, but soon dashed away.
A man stood there, his disheveled appearance and torn clothing an odd sight. Syra could tell that something was terribly wrong. She made a quick apology, and moved to leave, but the man grabbed her, and pulled her in.
" What do we have here?" He said, looking at her from top to down. " She's cute, even when frozen." He dragged her down the hall, into the small room at the end. Another girl was tied up there, crying and naked. Syra's eyes widened as she saw this, and began struggling, and yelling. He slapped her hard against the face, but that only prompted her to bite. " You bitch!" He said, and threw her. She slammed hard against the wall, and slumped downwards.
She awoke several hours later, half naked. The man was turned around to the sink, washing himself thoroughly, cleaning all of the evidence away. Syra saw this moment, and seized her chance. She rose, and walked up behind him. Her eyes burned brightly with pure rage, she drew a long dagger from the inside of her jacket.
" What the-" He said, turning around. It was only at the moment of his doom did he recognize the immense hatred in the cold, blue eyes. Syra stabbed foward, cutting deep into his larynx. She stabbed foward again, and again. Her arm pumped quickly as she made hundreds of incisions into his body. He soon was just a puddle of gore.
She breathed heavily, and slumped to the ground. He had been the first person she had killed. As she worked around the first murder, ehr memory of the earlier event was returning. It was only then that she realized there had been more than one man there. Six voices came into fruition in her mind, each distinctly impressed into her mind. From that day on, she vowed, she would exact her revenge on every single one.
To this day, she had only found five. It was only now that she finally met the last. As she stood in front of the man who raped her, all she could think of was pounding a blade into his heart. _________________ Syra's Theme - 463

Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Kidaku Itichi
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure Training Points: 185 Inventory: 1 Katana
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Forum Credit: 5 FC
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Eric Hatake Status: Offline  Honored Retirees

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Posted: Fri Sep 28, 2007 6:39 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: 1.5 _________________ Hatake, Eric
Hiroshi, Kite
Kaguya, Takashi
Roleplaying Characters:
No RPC
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin~~Genin~~Jounin Village: Konoha~~Kiri~~Kiri Training Points: N/A Inventory: Katana:2, Shuriken: 30, Kunai:40, explosive tag:40, soldier pills:20, wire:20 meters, Trench knives:2 Fuuma Shuriken: 20 Special medicene pack.
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 11:13 am Post subject: |
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IC: " I'll kill you!" She snarled, her mind becoming consumed with vile hatred. She charged foward, kicking up dust, her primal scream chilling the bones.
A barrage of bullets shot into the unseen area. Several dull thuds, and a soft groan could be heard. They waited with baited breath, hoping to see her dead. What they saw was much more disturbing. Their own soldier was laying in a pool of blood, looking desperately around as he lived the last moments of his life. Tears welled up in his eyes; he wouldn't ever see his children again.
Standing high upon a building was a lone figure, undiscernable in the sun's glare. The soldiers lowered their rifles, aimed, and fired. A volley erupted into the body, and exploded into what seemed like nothing, from this distance. The closest soldier looked through his scope, unsure if that was the renegade woman. What he saw was a puddle of water. It was only then they realized they were fighting a ninja, and it was too late.
The row of buildings suddenly glinted with the hundreds of weapons; water clones staring down on the gunmen like a horde of calvary, waiting for the signal to charge the valley. The real Syra had stood in front of the man, the bastard, who had destroyed her life. " Do you remember these eyes?" She spoke softly, her voice like black ice. He did recognize her at that moment, and merely grinned evilly. His warped sense of humour led him into a chuckle, and Syra's frozen expression of cold fury only deepened.
Thousands of blood-curdling screams erupted around the two, but neither seemed to take notice. Even after the echo of a few shots, the two had only twitched their arms. He seemed completely unfazed by the death of his entire brigade. Even Syra felt a slight twinge of guilt.
She whipped out a shuriken, and whipped it at his head. He twisted his body, managing to avoid it by a hairsbreath. He was playing her for a fool. " Ragh!" She yelled, taking the few steps distance, and throwing a devasting closed punch to his stomach. He promptly disappeared, appearing behind her.
" Nice try woman. I was once a chuunin, of Kirigakure No Sato. There is no chance for you to defeat me."
OOC: For notation, she used Mizu Bushin No Jutsu (P. 3), and Kawarimi No Jutsu (P. 2), and Houshou (P. 6). _________________ Syra's Theme - 463

Roleplaying Characters:
Syra Ozanaru
Kidaku Itichi
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure Training Points: 185 Inventory: 1 Katana
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 5 FC
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Eric Hatake Status: Offline  Honored Retirees

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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 11:20 am Post subject: |
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OOC: I thought guns didn't exist.
1.5 _________________ Hatake, Eric
Hiroshi, Kite
Kaguya, Takashi
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No RPC
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
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Shinobi Rank: Sannin~~Genin~~Jounin Village: Konoha~~Kiri~~Kiri Training Points: N/A Inventory: Katana:2, Shuriken: 30, Kunai:40, explosive tag:40, soldier pills:20, wire:20 meters, Trench knives:2 Fuuma Shuriken: 20 Special medicene pack.
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Uchiha Katsuga Status: Online!  Head of Forum Moderation

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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 2:20 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: I know I'm not supposed to post, but, no, guns DON'T exist. _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
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Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2007 3:01 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: sench is right _________________
Ryo: 0
FC: 10
Roleplaying Characters:
Zacara Seath
Izaku Takimi
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
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Shinobi Rank: dominant wind clan leader, ANBU captain, A-Ranked missing-nin~ A-Ranked Missing-nin Village: Missing-nin(s) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 15 kunai, 25 explosive tags, 10 explosive sacks, 2 explosive nets, 3 fuma shurikan , teiken and onike, 2 metal chains~ 6 weapon scrolls, hyoumenkaken [shattering blade], 25 kunai, 10 shurikan, 25 explosive tags
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