Saya, Gonin of the Mist

Cite · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 10:53 am Post subject:

He just lost all my respect, cause he's talking about shit he doesn't understand, ol' whinin' cock lickin' bitch.

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Kaeor · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 11:02 am Post subject:

O.O Calm Down Everyone. Have we forgotten the reason we are all here. To usefully criticize Saya's application so she can get accepted.

Cite and Sench,

If you two are going to continue your argument and etc. then please dont post it here. Either PM eachother or make a thread in the Town Center board.
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Ballian · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 11:11 am Post subject:

Sench · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 11:13 am Post subject:

um... I was only trying to say that a very strong genin isn't quite the same as Tsunade in physical strength... but whatever, at least we came to an agreement...
EDIT: ...which really doesn't matter much since none of us are mods... lol
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fyodor666 · Status: Offline Banned Joined: 17 May 2007 Posts: 2038

Alright, this is getting out of hand. I'm checking it now, so anyone who is not a mod shut the hell up.

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fyodor666 · Status: Offline Banned Joined: 17 May 2007 Posts: 2038

Alright, I still see you haven't put any physical weaknesses. I'm sorry, but I require them to balance out. You also need at least one mental strength. You could remove thick-skinned, and move "resistant to pain" to weaknesses as "feels pain more acutely". Perhaps say that experiments made her partially photosensitive too, and she can't operate at full power during the day. These are just examples, but you have to even them out. As you increase in level, you can remove the physical weaknesses and more them to strengths, but in that case only put one mental strength now.

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Saya · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 1:49 pm Post subject:

Hmmmm.......................

The sadest thing I can see here is that I was not even a part of this XD

But moving on from the...deliberations, I sorta agree with you fyodor thats not a bad idea...being photosensitive and all, I expected to have her more of a night person anyways so I like it myself.

And yeah...the strength is NOTHING like Tsunade, for some reason I word it to where you think big and not small....she has above human strength...above human means where she can pick up more and do more generally than what a normal full adult male can. Of course punching a rock is not going to break right away o.o

As for the physical and mental thing...I want her mentally weak and impressionable, but I guess I can come up with something real fast. *goes to edit and hopes no one posts with something else*
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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 2:17 pm Post subject:

*cracks knuckles hard, looking at everyone that's posted on here*

Ok, first-off, if people would KINDLY read the rules.... IF YOU'RE NOT A MOD., DON'T POST ANYWHERE IN THE APPLICATION SECTION! I'm going to leave the posts up, and thank you for the help, but stop posting on here. The only exception to that is if this is YOUR RPC. Now then...I shall speak on this matter.

1. Why are we going to allow an RPC that has been experimented on? I haven't seen a single char., here or on the show, that went through something like that.

2. If you're going to want to heal yourself, unless you have a Demon inside you, you're going to have to become a Med-Nin, and they don't specialize in Taijutsu.

3. I can see that you editted your Strengths and Weaknesses, but you didn't put any Jutsus under "Jutsus Want to Learn", please put the ones down that I suggested under there, ok?

I'll look to see if anything else needs done.
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