Saya, Gonin of the Mist

fyodor666 · Status: Offline Banned Joined: 17 May 2007 Posts: 2038

*points out to Kat that both Tsunade and Sakura have amazing strength, and that they are med-nins. also points out that Kabuto uses mainly taijutsu (though he uses chakra as well)*

Alright, yes, Kat is right. You have to add at least Kinobori [Tree Climbing] and Suimen Hokou on Gyou [Art of Water Walking] to your want to learn list. Do the ones he suggested as well. Next, you need two more physical weaknesses. As you're not going to use jutsus much anyway, I suggest a "below average chakra pool" and "below average chakra control". Although I can let you off with one of them since you have far more mental weaknesses and Photosensitivity is a HUGE weakness.

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Saya · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 2:33 pm Post subject:

Ok will do, the low chakra I can handle because she will rely more on body strength more than actual chakra.

To point out though...the first one bugs me slightly...I know VARIOUS people in the show who were 'experimented' on

A huge character is pretty much shown in the beginning....Orochimaru. Then comes most of his subjects *sorry spoilers coming up so don't read if you do not know what I am talking about* most people with the cursed seal were experimented on. Suigetsu turns into water whenever he is hit...that too is an experimentation, Orochimaru experimented on himself various times, that is how he has that long tongue and can stretch and move his body freely.

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 2:36 pm Post subject:

I understand what you're saying, but, Fyo, I'll leave this to you, or Air, since you have more authority than me, are we going to allow that?
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airknight12 · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 4:06 pm Post subject:

ok wow guys six pages. from now on dont debate in a topic. do that over Pm so we dont get completly off our goal please.
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airknight12 · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 4:09 pm Post subject:

sorry for double post but heres what i think.

to counter act your healing ability make it destoy cells and there for shorten your life span and late ron when you level up put something about your body deterating other than that its fine.

(dont argue send it over PM)
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fyodor666 · Status: Offline Banned Joined: 17 May 2007 Posts: 2038

Hmmm... yes, there have been people experimented on. Even here. If you remember Jikota said he was modified with cells from kabuto or something like that.

But that's a good idea air. Even though the healing is only a little, the experiment shortens your lifespan because your cells age at double the rate or something.

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Saya · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 4:24 pm Post subject:

The way I chose it the cells don't heal twice as fast merely grow faster. That can make her age faster, but I don't think in any way that it would cause her body to deteriorate. *goes to pm just in case*

Other than that does my character look fine?
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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 4:28 pm Post subject:

That actually sounds good to me, you'll be kinda like Tsunade when she uses her "Creation Rebirth Jutsu". And the RPC looks fine to me now, what about y'all?
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Tinaki · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 4:41 pm Post subject:

I reviewed it myself, and I say its good.
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airknight12 · Posted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 5:15 pm Post subject:

i came up with the cell problem to shut frodo and katsu up lol. Personally at the rate she describes it you can still kill her as easy as anyone else.
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