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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 1:38 am    Post subject: kenji-new character Reply with quote

Name:kenji Sigarra
Age:13
Gender:male
Height:5'7  
Weight:120

Appearance: Kenji wears an black sleeveless hoodie and carries two dual wakazashi on his back. he sports his village crest around his right arm. he wears standard black ninja pants and shoes. he also wears a pare of fingerless gloves

Race: Japanese
Hair: black, spikey hair in front but the back is pony tailed
Spoiler:

<-this just shows the style of hair but the color is black


Eyes: Hazel Brown
Body: athletic and lean
Ethnicity: Hi no Kuni

Level/Rank:genin
Village:Konoha  
Bloodline:Dormant (Starkin).
Main/Favored Weapon:dual wakazashi
Element:lightning
Fighting Type/Style:Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory:+20 Shuriken, 20 smoke bombs, Fuma shiriken

Strengths:
+ good Taijutsu for a Genin
+ great potential
+ good close combat fighter
+ quick with fast reflexes

Weaknesses:
- long range battles
- lazy behavior at time
- below par stamina for a Taijutsu user
- acts first, thinks second
- lets emotions affect logical sdecisions

Jutsus:
Bunshin no Jutsu
Henge no Jutsu
Kawarimi no Jutsu


Bloodline jutsus:
Name: Shifting Weapon (dormant)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D  
Requirements: Starkin Evolving Weapon
Description: This adds another weapon type to the ones you can form. As with the primary one, this changes form with skill. You can still only have one weapon at a time. They can learn this as many time as they want and it can be any weapon they can wield at their rank.
Jutsus that wants to learn:

Suimen Hokou no Gyou [Art of Water Walking]
Rank: C (Basic)
Requirements: None
Description: The user focuses their chakra to the soles of their feet and step onto the water. From the surface of the liquid, they would then need to be able to measure the amount of chakra it would take to support their weight along the surface of the water without sinking. Once this is mastered, the user would be able to easily walk on water.

Kinobori [Tree Climbing]
Rank: C (Basic)
Requirements: Learned From A Gennin Sensei
Description: The user concentrates onto the soles of their feet and coats them with a layer of chakra. Once this is done, the user will then be able to walk up any tree like they are walking up a regular foot path.

Name: Throwing Sword Feint Jutsu
Type: Weapon Jutsu (Kinjutsu)
Rank: C
Requirements: A special sword that can return to the user (such as the Mizukage's).
Description: The user throws his/her sword straight at the target like a kunai, causing him/her to dodge. Once the opponent starts dodging, the sword is quickly returned to the user. This is often followed by another throw to where the opponent was dodging, intercepting the target.

Name: Spear Blade Jutsu
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Sword
Description: Similar to the Cutting Sword Jutsu, Spear Blade Jutsu sends chakra through the blade. However, it does not use the energy of the swing. It launches off the front of the blade, giving it a spear like edge. It is strong enough to pierce through skin. It lasts up to ten feet.

Name: Dual Combat
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: Starkin Evolving Weapon
Description: This grants the Starkin the ability to dual wield normal sized weapons. A Starkin with shifting weapon can only make one weapon shift into any given form at the time. They can change both weapons, but not into the same form other than the base one.




Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: kenji is a young man who grew up on the outskirts of Kanoha. As soon as he was able to walk and talk he began his training with his father. His father was an Kanoha Jounin well baptised in the art of war. Kenji's father was a Excellent Taijitsu user and had spent many years to perfect his dual swords. Kenji would spend hours and days on rigourous training in the hope to succeed the level of his father someday. His father never took training litely on Kenji thats why he loved his mother so deeply who provided him with compassion and comfort. Kenji's mother owned a small flower shop that sold a vast assortment of flowers, it didnt make much money but it was an job more for his mother to keep busy instead of make money. Kenji thought he had the life everyone dreamed of, a loving mother and an successful dad, plus having the potential to one day be a great Kanoha hero, but this dream took a turn for the worse.
when Kanoha went into war Kenji's father left home to help the fight. Kenji was proud and never doughted that his dad wouldnt return, to him his dad was the best ninja he knew. As time passed Kenji trained and trained and before each day had ended he looked down the road in hope that today would be the day of his father's return but it wasnt, that day would never come. At the age of 10 He and his mother recieved the message that his father was one of many shinobi that passed while at war. Kenji stood in disbelief when the news was given to him, then the emotions began to rush through him like an hurricane. Anger, Sadness, Confusion..but he had to stay strong for his mother that was all he had left.
At the funeral of his father he vowed to continue his legacy. He would continue to perfect his father dual swords and do what ever he could to protect his mother and kanoha. The very next day Kenji began to train much harder..slowly spending less and less time with friends and doing other activities and more time training and becoming an better fighter. As years passed Kenji was obviously becoming better and he felt ready to enter the Acadamy. upon entering the acadamy he quickly began to remake friends and his childish, less stressed half began to blossum. He graduated The acadamy at the age of 12 but instead of becoming a chuunin he stayed at home for a year as a Genin. He wanted to spend another year at this level becouse he felt once he become a Chuunin his missions would become harder and he may to face the same fate as his father, leaving his mother alone. after a year of extra training and spending time with his mother..it was finally time for him to move on, but before leaving he left his dads swords home with his mother and vowed to return to them when he felt he was capable of using them better than his father.. 

Roleplaying Characters:
kenji
Inuyasha
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin, Genin
Village: Konohagakure
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Empty

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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 1:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not too bad, but here's what I see wrong:

1.  15's a little old for a Genin, but since you explained why, I'll allow it.
2.  You say that your hair's black, but the pic doesn't show that.
3.  Your "Ethnicity", being that you're in Konoha, is more than likely going to be "Hi no Kuni (Fire Country)".
4.  If you're not going to have a Bloodline, please put "None" for that space.
5.  What kind of Chakra Control do you have?
6.  Those Jutsus that are "Almost exclusively for Kumo Shinobi", it's going to be very hard to learn them since we don't have a Kumogakure no Sato (Village Hidden in the Clouds).
7.  It's spelled "Konoha", not "Kanoha".
8.  Does your RPC have a last name?
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Roleplaying Characters:
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Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi

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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 3:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

1.i edited the age now he is only 13.
2. the picture the shows the of his hair not the color i shuda put that by tha picture.
3.i edited the ethnicity
4. question about he bloodline trait. if i wanna add one later after 200 post would i be able to change this from slot..but for now i put it as none
5. i edited the chakra control part to indicate it means control his chakra as in manipulate it into his weapons.
6.i removed those kumo Jutsus
7.8. and added his last name and spelled kohona right

anything else.

Roleplaying Characters:
kenji
Inuyasha
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin, Genin
Village: Konohagakure
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Empty

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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 3:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Need to edit the height and weight.
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Roleplaying Characters:
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Shikami, Aoshi
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi

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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 8:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

weight and height edited

anything else?

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Village: Konohagakure
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Inventory: Empty

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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 9:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Are duel swords allowed? I thought that Katana's were banned or something.

Other than that it looks good to me. I would say unbold your background, just bold "Background" but thats me and my OCD....Lol xD

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+ able to control and manipulate his chakra into his swords

That would be more of a jutsu, which you probably want to include in a custom jutsu once you are able to create it.

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Shinobi Rank: A-Ranked Jounin ~~~ E-Ranked Genin
Village: Sand Village ~~~ Leaf Village
Training Points: 0
Inventory: +20 Shuriken, +20 Kunai, +20 Senbon Needles, +10 Smoke Bombs, +1 Fuuma Shuriken, +50 Yards of Wire, +4 Bags of Clay

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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 10:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If katanas weren't allowed, how would that cancel out swords? They aren't banned but he can't use them until a later ranking. He could you wakazashis or the such. And why the hell would katanas be banned on a ninja rp?
Also, generally putting chakra into weapons isn't a jutsu if it's a slight boost.
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Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ ??? ~ Konohagakure
Training Points: 30
Inventory: Blade of the Wind Spirits, 20 kunai,100 feet of metal thread ~ See Inventory ~ Summoning Quiver (Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ Mouse Paw Yo-yo, Lexi, Retractable Shuriken, and Silver Soldier Serum x3, Tsurugi 2

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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 10:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

he just uses his chakra to increase their strength at this level, he will later learn techniques, which i will put in the custom jutsu, when i learn some basic techniques first and gain some rank.

yeah i unbolded that background it kinda was getting to me to. but on the other hand is there anything else that needs changing or looked into..becouse i want to make the chunin exams and entry ends on the 12th

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Village: Konohagakure
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Empty

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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 10:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright, you can't channel chakra into you weapons unless there special ones that do that. Pm me and I can post a weapon for you that can do that.
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Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ ??? ~ Konohagakure
Training Points: 30
Inventory: Blade of the Wind Spirits, 20 kunai,100 feet of metal thread ~ See Inventory ~ Summoning Quiver (Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ Mouse Paw Yo-yo, Lexi, Retractable Shuriken, and Silver Soldier Serum x3, Tsurugi 2

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PostPosted: Fri May 09, 2008 11:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok i edited the profile again..changed the weapons to wakazashi which should be more fit for kenjis level.

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