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PostPosted: Tue May 20, 2008 9:30 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

well if you would do it for me id appreciate it......but id need to be approved to use it
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PostPosted: Wed May 21, 2008 3:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Unfortunately that would be at least a B rank weapon since katanas are B rank.
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PostPosted: Wed May 21, 2008 4:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uh, how about you get back to the actual profile? It looks good to me, except hasnt opened true power of Tetsusaiga isn't a weakness.
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PostPosted: Wed May 21, 2008 6:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

- weakened at a certain time of year- Not a weakness unless we install a system of time in the year and you also need to define the time of the year. Or else it's not a weakness at all

- hasnt opened true power of Tetsusaiga- Have got to be kidding me. Definitely not a weakness


I think you ned to take these out and add 2 real weaknesses.
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PostPosted: Wed May 21, 2008 7:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok i edited it....how does it look now.
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PostPosted: Wed May 21, 2008 7:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Explain stamina issues.
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PostPosted: Wed May 21, 2008 7:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Inuyasha is great at taijitsu but he exerts alot of energy in his attacks, especially when he is in rage and not thinking. and when using genjitsu he uses much chakra. basically he doesnt knows how much  chakra to exert in order to last a lengthy battle
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PostPosted: Sat May 24, 2008 12:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you're copying Inuyasha, wouldn't his "Fighting Style" be Tai and Nin?
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PostPosted: Sat May 24, 2008 1:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeah i changed it Tai and Nin
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PostPosted: Sat May 24, 2008 1:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I did some minor editing, just some mispelled words, and it does look fine to me.  Objections?
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