

Remove These Ads By Registering!
| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Message |
Fuuma Akatsonu Status: Offline  Member

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Posts: 13
Forum Credit: 0 Transfer FC
Buy FC
|
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 1:46 pm Post subject: Suiryo Akatsonu |
|
|
Name: Suiryo Akatsonu
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Height: 5'9
Weight: 152 lbs
Appearance:
http://i248.photobucket.com/albums/gg166/San_90/Within_the_mist.jpg
Akatsonu looks as if he's right about his age, he has messy brown hair and very dark brown eye's, they would seem as if they are black, he also has a scar just above his left eye due to an accident when he was a child. He wears a traditional shinobi garments with two armbands that have the symbol of mist on them. His robe on the back has an odd symbol similar to that of a oni mask which is very odd. Most of the time though on the battle field he has been seen wearing a tattered cloak , mostly used for surprise attacks when the opponent get's to lose he reveals hidden blades in his cloak or blades attached to his armbands.
Race: Japanese
Hair: Dark Brown
Eyes: Dark Brown
Body: Slim
Ethnicity: Mizu no Kuni
Level/Rank: Genin, E-rank
Village: Kirigukare
Bloodline: None
Main/Favored Weapon: Wakizashi
Element: Suiton
Fighting Type/Style: Genjutsu, Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory:
• Wakizashi [x1]
• Kunai [x10]
• Shinobi Forehead Protector [x1]
• Survival Kit (Food bandages hebs etc.)
Strengths:
He is above average on speed
Good in genjutsu and ninjutsu
Uses Edged Weaponry/Swords Well
Keeps a cool headed when needed
Weaknesses:
Physically he is not strong
His taijutsu is not great
He lacks much concentration
He is also very cocky
Jutsus:
Kawirimi, Bunshin, and Henge
Bloodline jutsus:
Jutsus you want to Learn:
Kasumi Jusha no Jutsu [Mist Servant Technique]
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: The user creates hundreds of clones that phase in and out of the ground as if they were made of blackish oil-like liquid. The user can then hide the projectiles they throw within the illusory ones that the clones throw at their opponents.
Name: Kankaku Gyoutai [Sensory Delay]
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This jutsu operates on the principle of "the hand is quicker than the eye", a phrase the user will often say just before activating it. It delays the target's sensory perceptions by one second, making it seem as though time has paused. The pause is only one second long, so it seems as though it never really happened. The user will then continue the battle, but the opponent will think the user is one place, while they were there a full second before. This allows the user to usually get in two or three hits before the target becomes aware of the delay. After this the target might realize it is Genjutsu and use Genjutsu Kai, or they might not realize it and just try to anticipate one second in advance
Kirigakure no Jutsu [Hidden Mist Technique]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: A ninjutsu technique that covers the area surrounding the user completely in mist. Once used, there's practically no visibility within the area of this jutsu for both the user and their enemy. This is a perfect situation for someone who trains in the art of silent killing.
Kiri Shunshin no Jutsu [Mist Instantaneous Body Skill]
Rank: D
Requirements: None
Description: The user will be able to disappear from their previous position in a cloud of mist and reappear elsewhere. The distance they reappear to depend on the amount of chakra they choose to use.
Suirou no Jutsu - Water Prison Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Suirou no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for limited movement. The ninja must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain its existence. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and their target is released. When combined with a bunshin technique, the ninja can imprison their target but still allow for a clone to attack others nearby.
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background:
Born in the country of Kirigukare he considered it to be a blessing to be a part of the land which would be called the village hidden in the mist. He was adopted by a family of aristocrats and he was not interested in ther emoney or luxeries, he wante dto become a shinobi and learn the art of jutsu. He enrolled in the ninja academy at the age of eight years old, he was one of the oldest. He was in a class with many other talented students. They all had something he lacked which was natural talent, many of them hade it the natural talent the Uchihas the Hatake's Hyuuga's, so on and so forth, he did not hate them though, he mereley envyed them, so he began using weapons and learning water jutsu which were really the only jutsu which interested him, he would quickly begin to impress all of the other students in the class and even the teachers. He was always afterwards a good shinobi although he had a bit of trouble with authority and following orders, he always did everything his way and was going to show people that this was just as good as the basics. He would always have a curt reply or a sense of sarcasm to anything someone said although he could be very kind at times. The only person he really hung out with were few seeing as she was kind and calm kind of like the opposite of Akatsonu. He was always bragging about his skills with a blade and that made him the number one bragger in Kirigukare he loved being as strong as he was, although he knew there were those stronger and he wasn't the most powerful although he was up there with them (or he thought so at least). He would achieve his goals no matter what the cost he would later become a Genin and one step closer to proving himself as a member of the mist defecting from his family of aristocrats and learning the jutsu of his village. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
No RPC
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Village: Training Points: N/A Inventory: Empty
Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
Last edited by Fuuma Akatsonu on Thu Jun 12, 2008 6:05 am; edited 14 times in total |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
AJ Gray Status: Online!  Honored Retirees

Joined: 12 Dec 2007 Posts: 3692
Forum Credit: 10 Transfer FC
Buy FC
| |
| Back to top |
|
 |
Fuuma Akatsonu Status: Offline  Member

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Posts: 13
Forum Credit: 0 Transfer FC
Buy FC
| |
| Back to top |
|
 |
AJ Gray Status: Online!  Honored Retirees

Joined: 12 Dec 2007 Posts: 3692
Forum Credit: 10 Transfer FC
Buy FC
| |
| Back to top |
|
 |
Fuuma Akatsonu Status: Offline  Member

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Posts: 13
Forum Credit: 0 Transfer FC
Buy FC
| |
| Back to top |
|
 |
Sench Status: Offline  Site Admin

Joined: 19 Jun 2007 Posts: 8394
Forum Credit: 0 Transfer FC
Buy FC
| |
| Back to top |
|
 |
AJ Gray Status: Online!  Honored Retirees

Joined: 12 Dec 2007 Posts: 3692
Forum Credit: 10 Transfer FC
Buy FC
|
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 2:08 pm Post subject: |
|
|
As your element is Water, I would suggest Kirigakure as there are many water users there that can help you learn faster. Just a suggestion, not a change.
Roleplaying Characters:
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Village: Training Points: Inventory: Hyuuga Right Eye, Madara's Armour, Medical Supplies, Info Cards, Master Summon Scroll, Forbidden Tech Scroll, Sword Jutsu Scroll ~Master's Blade, Medical Supplies.
Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
|
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
Sench Status: Offline  Site Admin

Joined: 19 Jun 2007 Posts: 8394
Forum Credit: 0 Transfer FC
Buy FC
| |
| Back to top |
|
 |
Kaeor Status: Offline  Head of Forum Moderation

Joined: 29 Sep 2007 Posts: 2270
Forum Credit: Transfer FC
Buy FC
|
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 2:22 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| Sench wrote: | | Genin can't have "very high" strengths. It can be "good" for now. Also, please use the jutsu forms and descriptions provided in the library. |
You could just put "Above-Average Genin Strength" as long as you have something to balance it out.
Roleplaying Characters:
Kaeor Arumashi
Sesshomaru Ozanaru
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Kage ~ Jounin Village: Iwagakure~Sunagakure Training Points: 0 Inventory: Kunai x6, Shuriken x 15, Poison Senbon x30, Nodachi strapped at his left waist and hiltless katana at his back, Explosive Tags x15, The Harvester~x9 Kunai, x18 Senbon, x30 Shuriken, x1 Wakishizi, x1 Katar
Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
|
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
Uchiha Katsuga Status: Offline  Site Admin

Joined: 11 Jan 2007 Posts: 7814
Forum Credit: 16.5 Transfer FC
Buy FC
|
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2008 6:51 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Didn't anyone notice his last name and/or Bloodline name...? O.o It's the Fuuma Clan, which is from the Naruto series, which means that he can't use it because all Cannon Bloodlines/Clans are closed. Please fix that. _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi
Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
|
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
|
|
You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum
|
|