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Fuuma Akatsonu
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 Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 2:03 pm Post subject: |
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Why'd you delete your "Ethnicity"?
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Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
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Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
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| Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 8:59 am Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | Born in the country of Ame he considered it to be a blessing to be a part of the land which would be called the village hidden in the leaf. He was adopted by a family of aristocrats and he was not interested in ther emoney or luxeries, he wante dto become a shinobi and learn the art of jutsu. He enrolled in the ninja academy at the age of eight years old, he was one of the oldest. He was in a class with many other talented students. They all had something he lacked which was natural talent, many of them hade it the natural talent the Uchihas the Hatake's Hyuuga's, so on and so forth, he did not hate them though, he mereley envyed them, so he began using weapons and learning water jutsu which were really the only jutsu which interested him, he would quickly begin to impress all of the other students in the class and even the teachers. He was always afterwards a good shinobi although he had a bit of trouble with authority and following orders, he always did everything his way and was going to show people that this was just as good as the basics. He would always have a curt reply or a sense of sarcasm to anything someone said although he could be very kind at times. The only person he really hung out with were few seeing as she was kind and calm kind of like the opposite of Akatsonu. He was always bragging about his skills with a blade and that made him the number one bragger in Kirigukare he loved being as strong as he was, although he knew there were those stronger and he wasn't the most powerful although he was up there with them (or he thought so at least). He would achieve his goals no matter what the cost he would later become a Genin and one step closer to proving himself as a member of the Fuuma Clan defecting from his family of aristocrats and learning the jutsu of his clan |
Your background doesn't make much sense. Usually, I don't care about where you come from or how your dad banged your mom and you were born. But your history doesn't make any sense. First you start out that you are from the Rain Country, then you say that you enrolled into the Fire Country's Leaf Village Academy. Then you say that you come from the Mist village. Then you say that you don't come from a Clan but at the last bit you state that you run away from the aristocrats in-order to be with your Fuuma Clan members in the Mist or Rain village?
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| Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 2:01 pm Post subject: |
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It looks a lot better, but the only-other thing I see wrong is his height/weight. 5' 11'' seems a bit tall for a 14-year-old.
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Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi
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