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'Bring it on im ready" said Kera spitting out the wood 'How could he fall for that trick" he stood up "damn i need to get away Im almost out of chakra and I dont think I'll last." he thought to himself. He looked at his arm, the "gift" from his father. He hated it and loved it. It made him different ,it gave him power ,but it made him a monster that craved blood 'I wonder" he thought to himself "if things went different would I still be a monster perhaps if i didn't i dont know" He looked around at the trees. He once loved this place " if im meant to die here then let me die here" he thought " im ready come and bring it" he said to the man
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things i want to do before i die 1 kill you 2 kill your family 3 kill your pets 4 eat ice cream
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charoo hanibi
kera marrow
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Shinobi Rank: missing nin B rank A/'missing nin D
Village: Konohagakure/the sand
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 1 unikurin, 90 senbon, 2 tekagi, 20 Explosion Tags, 5 soldier Pill, 30 Medical Senbon wire 50ft Poison Senbon 30 /kunia
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"Alright" Jikota said, heaving no remorse upon taking the boy's life. Jikota disappeared and then reappeared infront of the boy. It was as if he moved at the speed of light, when in actuality he moved just about fast enough so that Kera's untrained eyes wouldn't be able to see. He appeared infront of the missing shinobi and delivered one hard strike into the abdomen of the shinobi.
It was a strong hit and if the attack connected with the boy, it would make the boy cough out blood. Possibly, break a few of the shinobi's ribs and ofcourse, send the boy flying.
Meanwhile, another Rogue shinobi approached. Was he too there to kill Kera? Or was he there to kill someone else in the village, perhaps Jikota?
OOC: Are you sure you want to die? Positively sure you want to die?
Also, the last line is my second character coming into the role play. He's not here to kill you.
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Village: Sand~None(Sand)~Sand
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| Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 3:47 pm Post subject: |
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ooc fine but this is true for kera has little feeling in his demon arm plus it huge and muscled so it would soften the blow some
Kera demon arm grabbed the fist. Kera felt the bone break in the forarm it would heal in time .'I chose to live" with the little chakra he had he made the hand seals. "Goukakyuu no Jutsu" it was weak and kera couldnt see what happened. He used to much chakra Kera fell. " I want to live with this curse " he whispered to himself and blacked out.
i know this isnt 5 lines but i have a little writers block
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things i want to do before i die 1 kill you 2 kill your family 3 kill your pets 4 eat ice cream
Roleplaying Characters:
charoo hanibi
kera marrow
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: missing nin B rank A/'missing nin D
Village: Konohagakure/the sand
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 1 unikurin, 90 senbon, 2 tekagi, 20 Explosion Tags, 5 soldier Pill, 30 Medical Senbon wire 50ft Poison Senbon 30 /kunia
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OOC: Even so, I have Taijutsu far beyond that of any Jounin on the Forum. And probably stronger than a Hokage. You're making me look bad with that horrible role playing....though, I do have to say, it's getting somewhat better. You just need grammar practice. Try using periods at the end of every sentence. They make your posts easier to read.
Also, carefully read my post because what I mean in detail is that you put: | Quote: | | Kera felt the bone break in the forarm it would heal in time . |
Then you put: | Quote: | | with the little chakra he had he made the hand seals |
That doesn't make any sense. If your bone is broken then how are you able to make hand seals....????
You're getting too many role playing infractions, and I can't believe I'm allowing you to live with them.
IC: Jikota allowed the shinobi to grab his fist and stop it. He then let go of the shinobi and watched him make hand seals. Jikota put his hand out to block the jutsu, he knew exactly what technique it was. The missing shinobi fired out a fireball however, it was weak from not having enough chakra. With his bare hands, Jikota was able to block the jutsu, without the fire spreading to the tree's and the rest of the park.
He watched as the shinobi fell. Jikota then turned around and felt a presence he hadn't felt in years. He turned around and said to his cousin, "Tetsuya, are you in league with this shinobi?"
"Why ofcourse not, you know I don't hand out with weaklings."
"Then leave this village, or else I will have to kill my own family member..."
"Very well then but, I came to this village for a subordinate. You see, I learned a new Ninjutsu and I need someone to test it on."
"Stay away, Tetsuya!"
Jikota zipped up to Tetsuya and punched him creating a huge explosion that can be felt half way across the village. Tetsuya's right arm was crushed and fell off and then the Henge technique dispersed. It revealed that it was a mere puppet disguised as Tetsuya. When did his Kugutsu no jutsu get so good he said to himself. He felt cold sweat falling down his spine. It's so strong, that it can even carry his scent and life force...what is he up to?
He turned around, only to see that Tetsuya had left with the missing shinobi in hand. Just then, 2 Jounin from the village appeared and watched as Tetsuya made his way out of the village. "Should we chase him, Master Jikota" one of the Jounin said. "No, it would be no use. Today, I have let 2 missing shinobi from this village leave....I'm a disgrace...I thought it was a weak shinobi and I forgot to follow the first rule of combat...Not to under-estimate your opponent...."
Jikota looked towards the horizon and saw that his cousin and the missing shinobi were out of the village. "Damn, and I didn't even get the other shinobi's name....Today, is one grim day for me. Listen, everyone meet up with the Kazekage for a Tactics discussion for the village."
Jikota left, only returning the next day, swearing an oath that someday he will capture Tetsuya and kill him with his bare hands.
OOC: Now, you are Tetsuya's subordinate....What will you do?
Jikota's Rp Out. I'll make a topic for you and Tetsuya in the Wind Country.
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