Faithful Subordinate(evermember)

Zeke Jamora · Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 12:34 pm Post subject:

OOC: Like are several oasis's within the Wind Country. I'll post again in an hour, I have ot go check up on something. Also, we are shinobi. A Normal person would tkae a week to get fro mthe Wind Country to the Fire Country. It takes a shinobi 3 days. We are faster then people think, though, you are VERY weak so, I can give you an excuse.

IC: It was noon time, the sun was directly in the center of the sky. It's 12 he said to himself as he made his journey across the land. Tetsuya ingaged in a long sprint. For 20 minutes he ran non stop and eventually, he reached one of the several oasis's in the Wind Country. They would have to be very careful. He looked back and saw that his student was lost. He wasn't worried. If he were picked up by a Jounin or an Anbu that would be his fault and his fault only. He then looked towards the horizon and saw Kera.

Not bad he said to himself. The boy has spirit A smirk appeared on his face. In a few minutes the student would meet back up with his master and when that happened, Kera's feast would begin.

Tetsuya saw several cows eating grass. The outside perimeter was covered with palm tree's. And it appeared that there were about 10 people working as staff on the Farm. There were 4 building's. One building was where they packed the pick and sent it across the country. One place, was where they allowed Cows to mate. One place, was where the workers would sleep and rest between shifts. The final area was where the processed the milk before it went to packaging.

OOC: Wow, You impressed me. Your role playing is getting much better. But, I know you can do much better then that. Try to push yourself to do better. I'll post back here again in about 30 minutes to an hour. I have osmethign to do on other sites.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Chimiri, Jikota
Chiba, Tsunemi
Chimiri, Tetsuya

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin~Jounin~Genin
Village: Sand~None(Sand)~Sand
Training Points: 5
Inventory: A whole bunch of stuff

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evermember · Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 2:10 pm Post subject:

Kera saw his new master in the horizen. "Finaly" Kera thought "I thought I messed up on my calculations and picked the wrong one but he did say something about cows and this is the closest dairy farm so I gessed and I was right." Kera walked up to his master and looked out at the farm. "If only it was a buchery than this would be less difficult"said Kera. He lifted up his demonic arm it was turning white agien the hour was almost out. "Ok how are we ganna do this? I suggest we get that big one on the outskirts, the one near the border see it? That should keep me good for a week and a half."

ooc: so can you help me make a custom justu
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Roleplaying Characters:
charoo hanibi
kera marrow
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: missing nin B rank A/'missing nin D
Village: Konohagakure/the sand
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 1 unikurin, 90 senbon, 2 tekagi, 20 Explosion Tags, 5 soldier Pill, 30 Medical Senbon wire 50ft Poison Senbon 30 /kunia

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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 3:07 pm Post subject:

OOC: Sure, what do you want to base it on? Also, it didn't take an hour to travel 30 miles dude....we're shinobi... do you read my entire post?

IC: "Simple" Tetsuya said to Kera. He looked at the farm. There weren't many people around and if there were a shinobi here, he would've sensed it already. Tetsuya then looked back to Kera. "Go wild out there. I'll patrol the area just in case any shinobi come. Do you think 5 cows will do you good?"

Meanwhile, as Tetsuya explained the plan to his student. Tetsuya was ordering his puppet walkers to remain invisible, hidden to the untrained human eye. His puppet walkers were string less and were able to move free spirited. However, if there puppet master were to give them an order they had no choice but to follow it. Some would say that the puppets have a mind of their own but, in fact, they didn't. They didn't have a soul, there for they don't have individual thoughts. And their only purpose in life were to carry out the commands of their creator, Tetsuya's.

"What are you waiting for? Go!"

OOC: What type of Demon was his great grandfather? Or was he just a miscellaneous demon? Ya know, no real element but had demonic-like powers.
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Chimiri, Tetsuya

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin~Jounin~Genin
Village: Sand~None(Sand)~Sand
Training Points: 5
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evermember · Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 3:42 pm Post subject:

ooc " he was a fire arcdemon one that had a fight with a sand hokage that is the reason that punch broke the arm and didnt kill me i may be weak for now but not him he was a strong bastered

ic Kera looked over to the farm. He never had as much as he wanted before. He ran toward the cows. one big one was his target. He killed it quickly by snapping its neck he sliced its neck with one of his claws and drank the blood. It was thick and gooey and tasted like the old blood cakes at one of the local roman shop. It was hard to get down but it was what he needed so he drank and drank. His power was coming back and the arm was taking on its normal black pitch. "Oy who are you and what are you doing to my cow," yelled somone. "uh oh time to go"said kera to himself and ran back to his master. The blood did him good he knew it would be a couple of weeks till he needed to drink blood agien. " thank you master now what I'll be good for a while so im ready to do whetever you want me to do"said kera to the strange man

ooc the reason it satisfied him is it was a big cow plus the blood he was talking about was blood cakes served in some soup at a local romain shop like it said in the rp those used to last him a day and they were the size of a cracker
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Roleplaying Characters:
charoo hanibi
kera marrow
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: missing nin B rank A/'missing nin D
Village: Konohagakure/the sand
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 1 unikurin, 90 senbon, 2 tekagi, 20 Explosion Tags, 5 soldier Pill, 30 Medical Senbon wire 50ft Poison Senbon 30 /kunia

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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 4:11 pm Post subject:

OOC: Sand hokage? No such thing. Hokage is for Fire Country. Mizukage is for Water Country. Tsuchikage is for Earth Country. Raikage for for Lightning Country. and Kazekage is for Wind Country. They siad that in the first episodes on Naruto. Don't you watch Naruto at all dude?

Also, the first Kazekage was my character's grandfather.

Even though your grandfather may have been strong, over the years, he got weak from old age and so does the arm. Which is why it would be fun to build up the strength of the arm. Even so, Jikota was moving at speeds that you wouldn't be able to comprehend. So how were you able to see the block anyway. That was the biggest amount of godmod I have ever seen in my life.

One more thing, in grammar, you have to use periods at the end of every sentence.

IC: Tetsuya watched as Kera sucked the blood out of the cow. One big cow was enough to satisfy him. I've got to do something about that Vampire he said to himself. Kera returned to Tetsuya after he was discovered. He then nodded to Tetsuya and ordered him to follow him back to the lair.

After traveling for 30 miles, they had got away from the dairy farm. They sprinted for about 20 minutes, which was extremely slow for a shinobi but, it couldn't be helped. Tetsuya had to keep waiting on his subordinate.

Once they reached the lair, Tetsuya opened up the fornt door. He then walked in and turned around to Kera. "Go into the 4th room. That'll be your room where you will sleep." he said ot Kera. "Get some sleep, in your room there should be a nice bed. It might be a little dusty but atleast the lights work. Rest well, for tomorrow, we begin your training."

OOC: Also, if your demon is suppose to make you a Vampire then I would like to tell you that there is already a Vampire bloodline. Would you like to join that Clan?
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Roleplaying Characters:
Chimiri, Jikota
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Chimiri, Tetsuya

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin~Jounin~Genin
Village: Sand~None(Sand)~Sand
Training Points: 5
Inventory: A whole bunch of stuff

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evermember · Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 4:22 pm Post subject:

ooc no no when my grandfather was on earth he was given blood sacrifices by people so he would stay away he got used to the flaver and ate nothing else but flesh but sense im half human and i have his arm it sorta grew on me you know also then you grandfather and my great grandfather foght cool then we have soom history =} also if you want to talk about this i say you pm me and i gess were done with this thred next up comes training
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Roleplaying Characters:
charoo hanibi
kera marrow
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: missing nin B rank A/'missing nin D
Village: Konohagakure/the sand
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 1 unikurin, 90 senbon, 2 tekagi, 20 Explosion Tags, 5 soldier Pill, 30 Medical Senbon wire 50ft Poison Senbon 30 /kunia

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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 6:29 pm Post subject:

OOC: You need to make an exit post. You never just up and leave from a topic. You always have to put that you left the thread through RP.
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RPG Stats:
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Village: Sand~None(Sand)~Sand
Training Points: 5
Inventory: A whole bunch of stuff

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evermember · Posted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 9:34 pm Post subject:

ooc fine fine i know this is not five lines but it is the end of a short story and the begining of a larger one

Kera looked at his new life.Here with a master were he will be trained and molded. A home were he can stay and live. It would be challanging straining his every aspect to the limit but he could do it. "I always liked a challenge" He thought to himself "and I will get stronger"
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things i want to do before i die 1 kill you 2 kill your family 3 kill your pets 4 eat ice cream

Roleplaying Characters:
charoo hanibi
kera marrow
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: missing nin B rank A/'missing nin D
Village: Konohagakure/the sand
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 1 unikurin, 90 senbon, 2 tekagi, 20 Explosion Tags, 5 soldier Pill, 30 Medical Senbon wire 50ft Poison Senbon 30 /kunia

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Zeke Jamora · Posted: Wed Jun 11, 2008 9:34 am Post subject:

Tetsuya watched as his student walked into his room. He doors shut behind him and Tetsuya put up two puppet walkers to work as guards and made sure he didn't leave. Meanwhile, Tetsuya went into his room and began to plot on tomorrow's adventure's.

That boy is troublesome he said to himself. He could become a powerful shinobi if he trained har enough. But, tomorrow is a new day. I won't go easy on him, I'll show him what it means to be a real shinobi.

Tetsuya began to modify his puppet walkers. A Strange light shined out of his room. The light flowing everywhere. What could this light be? Is this the weapon he was creating to destroy the Hidden Sand?

OOC: Also, 5 lines is the minimum. I don't care if it's the first post or last post, I wanna see 5 lines everytime.

Rp Out

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RPG Stats:
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Village: Sand~None(Sand)~Sand
Training Points: 5
Inventory: A whole bunch of stuff

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