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 Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 3:59 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: Dude, redo your post, you don't know any of us technically.
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
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Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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| Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 12:09 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: Can we just ignore his post, since he hasn't taken care of it, and this hasn't moved in like a week.
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Village: Sunagakure-Iwagakure-Kirigakure-Sunagakure
Training Points: 95
Inventory: 1 Swordfan/Fansword, 1 Giant Fan,2 Razor Fans, 10 Senbon, 10 Kunai, 3 Blank Scrolls, and 1 Peice of Chalk - Summoning Scroll(Unassigned), Bandages 10,-Mini Buster, Sunglasses
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| Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 2:44 pm Post subject: |
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OOC:This thread seems to be dead, he hasn't edited his post so that it was different, and Speaker hasn't posted, his post was on the 22nd, his edit the 28th, and it is now the 7th, and nothing, Please, someone do something, or I will go mad!
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Shizuka
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Sun Jan Su
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Shinobi Rank: Chuunin-Chuunin-genin-genin
Village: Sunagakure-Iwagakure-Kirigakure-Sunagakure
Training Points: 95
Inventory: 1 Swordfan/Fansword, 1 Giant Fan,2 Razor Fans, 10 Senbon, 10 Kunai, 3 Blank Scrolls, and 1 Peice of Chalk - Summoning Scroll(Unassigned), Bandages 10,-Mini Buster, Sunglasses
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| Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 5:25 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: I'm starting from your last post.
| Quote: | Midori focused, when the yell came at her, just like her old master, and as such, her eyes focused, her breathing steadied, and she moved quickly into position, it wasn't surprising to her, that she managed to match the stance, like Aoshi, and the Master, but unlike the other student, who seemed strained, but with a bit of work, he would manage.
She kept her body still, but ready for anything that was ordered next, this was how she had been raised, after being a thief for ages, and this was how she would work, not relaxed, except when it was called for, but tense, and restrained, she wouldn't make a mistake.
'Sensei, you have taught me well, and now that I am with a new sensei, it will help me even more' She thought, still feeling the restless energy in her, but quelling it. |
IC: Makoto watches Aoshi and Midori, staying in the stance, smirking at them, nodding his head as he comes up, putting his feet together, bringing his left foot in, and not moving his right foot from the spot at all, bring his hands to his sides, then bow to them slightly, not even halfway, then comes back up. Smirking at them, seeing that they can at LEAST get the very basic stance down, he waits for them to do the same thing, and wathes them very carefully, and will "retaliate" if there's even the SLIGHTEST mistake in their stance, and when they try to come up, watching their movements for even the slightest movements from their right feet, and their other body parts to see if they move them the way they shouldn't.
Now, your turns!
Aoshi watches Master Makoto very carefully, nodding his head to him after he's given "orders" of what to do next. Aoshi thinks about it for just a split-second then just BARELY bends his right knee to get his left foot to slide up the way he wants, not knowing he did it though, then brings his hands to his sides, then bows just like Master Makoto, not missing anything there, then comes back up. He doesn't even know what the Master has in store for them if they mess up any, and Aoshi doesn't even know that he's already made one of the biggest mistakes one could possibly make while coming up from a stance to bow, and that's to never, NEVER, EVER bend your knees! But, he just waits to see what's going to happen next, not even caring to look at Midori.
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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| Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 5:24 pm Post subject: |
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OOC:No you didn't, it still says Aoshi. Which is something your character wouldn't know, since he hasn't met Aoshi yet.
Midori, being careful, moved in the same way as the Master, keeping her knees straight, but keeping her Arms just a little too far from her body, while holding the stance, bowing back to the Sensei, bowing lower than the Sensei, and then lifting back up, showing her respect, though still hoping that she didn't mess up.
She didn't look at Aoshi, though she felt that he too was not wishing to mess up, and as such, hoped that they both didn't mess it up.
She felt her sword, still on the rack, make a small chakra charge, as she tried to hold completely still, both encouraging her, and stating that she was messing up.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Shizuka
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Midori Shara
Sun Jan Su
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin-Chuunin-genin-genin
Village: Sunagakure-Iwagakure-Kirigakure-Sunagakure
Training Points: 95
Inventory: 1 Swordfan/Fansword, 1 Giant Fan,2 Razor Fans, 10 Senbon, 10 Kunai, 3 Blank Scrolls, and 1 Peice of Chalk - Summoning Scroll(Unassigned), Bandages 10,-Mini Buster, Sunglasses
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| Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 10:59 am Post subject: |
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OOC: If you read it all the way, which you probably didn't, you would notice that I said "Hey! Aoshi! where do I begin? I saw you training people earlier. Are you as good as people say you are?" that would imply, you idiot, that I heard of him! God you people are impossible! I swear you go out of your way to try and make people look like idiots!
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| Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 3:42 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: You may have heard of Aoshi, but he's only a Genin, so he wouldn't be "training" anyone. The Master of the Dojo is my NPC Makoto, so you'll really need to be talking with him, ok? Go back and fix your post again, and, on a serious note, if you go in acting like THAT, you just may end up in the Village hospital, ok? ^_^
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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| Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2008 12:51 am Post subject: |
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OOC:The Fact is, I did Read your whole post, it doesn't matter, but unless you were in a thread, where he was training someone, There is no way you would know of him.
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Roleplaying Characters:
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Sun Jan Su
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin-Chuunin-genin-genin
Village: Sunagakure-Iwagakure-Kirigakure-Sunagakure
Training Points: 95
Inventory: 1 Swordfan/Fansword, 1 Giant Fan,2 Razor Fans, 10 Senbon, 10 Kunai, 3 Blank Scrolls, and 1 Peice of Chalk - Summoning Scroll(Unassigned), Bandages 10,-Mini Buster, Sunglasses
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| Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 8:01 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: | Quote: | Midori, being careful, moved in the same way as the Master, keeping her knees straight, but keeping her Arms just a little too far from her body, while holding the stance, bowing back to the Sensei, bowing lower than the Sensei, and then lifting back up, showing her respect, though still hoping that she didn't mess up.
She didn't look at Aoshi, though she felt that he too was not wishing to mess up, and as such, hoped that they both didn't mess it up.
She felt her sword, still on the rack, make a small chakra charge, as she tried to hold completely still, both encouraging her, and stating that she was messing up. |
Sorry for the wait. ^_^
IC: Makoto watches both Aoshi and Midori carefully, knowing exactly when they have made a mistake, and knows what kind of punishment he's going to give them, if they mess up even the tiniest amount. Watching them closely, he spots Aoshi just slightly bending his kness, but doesn't say anything, and just smirks, nodding his head some, then turns his attention to Midori, where he sees that she almost did it right, but sees that her arms are just a little too far from her body. Again, he doesn't say anything, but just smirks at her, nodding his head again, then goes over to the wall where all the Shikai's are hanging, takes one down with his left hand, then slowly walks back over to where they're at from behind, tapping the wooden sword on his right palm lightly, as he stops behind Midori first....
Your arms are out too far!!!
From that he brings the Shikai up high, then comes down onto her left arm first, then instantly brings it back up, then comes down onto her right arm, kinda hard, but not enough to do any permanent damage to her, but it's more than enough for her to show how serious he is. From there, he walks over to Aoshi, brings the Shikai up, then brings it down onto the back of both of his knees, using the same kind of force he put on Midori.
Don't bend your knees!!!
From there, he walks back up to the front of the Dojo, placing the Shikai against the back wall, then waits to see what they're going to say.
Aoshi watches as Master Makoto walks away from them, but doesn't watch to see where he goes to, but hears him taking one of the Shikais off of the wall, and coming back to them, but from behind, which tells him that either one, or both, of the have messed up, and they're more than likely going to receive some kind of punishment for it. Hearing Midori getting hit twice, sounding like on her arms, he doesn't jump or anything, and wanted to smirk, but forces himself not to, then hears Master Makoto coming up behind him, but he doesn't think that he's made a mistake so he just looks ahead waiting to her him congratulate him. Instead, he feels the sharp pain of the Shikai going across the back of his knees, which forces him to bend his knees slightly, and tense up a lot, grinting his teeth to force back a "yelp", then straightens back up almost instantly, and watching as Makoto goes back to the front of the room, nodding his head to him.
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 6.5
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