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 Posted: Tue Sep 02, 2008 9:37 am Post subject: |
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She took the hits to hear arms, and realized her mistake, but then heard Aoshi take hits as well, and realized that both students had been hit. She kept silent, though wished her sword had told her if only a bit more than childish taunts.
She looked at the Sensei of the Dojo, and bowed again, properly "Thankyou for this lesson." She said, holding the bow, she wanted him to know that even though her arms hurt, the meaning had sunk in.
She then stood up, her energy starting to get the best of her "May I have another lesson?" She asked, sounding eager, but focused, she wanted to learn more, as much as she could.
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| Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 3:39 pm Post subject: |
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OOC: I'm truly sorry for not posting here. It's been total hell out where I'm at lately, and I won't go into it.
IC: Makoto nods his head to the both of them, showing exactly how serious he is, and how hard this training's going to be for them, then turns his attention to Midori, nodding his head to her slightly. He gets back in the traditional starting stance, looking at the two, knowing that they should get this right this time, putting his arms in front of him, down some to about where his stomach is, about shoulder-width apart, places his feet shoulder-width apart as well. After this, he'll wait for Aoshi and Midori to do the same thing, watching to see if they make any other mistakes. He doesn't say anything to Midori for a reason, and waits to see if she says anything else about it, and just does what she's told to do.
Aoshi doesn't move, even when he's his by the Shikai on the back of his knees, but winces just a little, hardly noticeable, as he bows back to Master Makoto. After coming back up, he was about to ask something to him, but sees that it's probably not a good idea at the moment, so he follows his Master's instructions, and gets in the same stance, not too sure why he's doing this, but believes that it's part of the training, so he does it anyway. Following Master Makoto, he puts his feet shoulder-width apart as well, and places his arms in front of him, right at his stomach, and shoulder-width apart, like Makoto's, and just looks straight ahead, waiting for further instructions.
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Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
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| Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 1:52 pm Post subject: |
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Midori takes the stance, knowing how she had screwed up, and following exactly what he does this time, avoiding any and all mistakes. She couldn't see it as anything else, but preparation, she needed to show him the discipline she had, as a student, and would work harder than ever, just to learn the techniques, stances, and lessons.
She didn't look anywhere but right infront of her, so as not to lose concentration. She missed her old sensei, but would only do to honor him, by proving that he had taught her well, and as such, would make failure a minimal.
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Village: Sunagakure-Iwagakure-Kirigakure-Sunagakure
Training Points: 95
Inventory: 1 Swordfan/Fansword, 1 Giant Fan,2 Razor Fans, 10 Senbon, 10 Kunai, 3 Blank Scrolls, and 1 Peice of Chalk - Summoning Scroll(Unassigned), Bandages 10,-Mini Buster, Sunglasses
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| Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 12:03 pm Post subject: |
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ooc: Ok I'm sorry I fixed it. But right now my charecter is acting like he knows Aoshi to become friends with him. I haven't been on in a while. so My charecter is still in the dojo, but is still waiting for instructions. I wouldn't mind if the Sensei smacked nataku over the head because of his A.D.D. Can I post?
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| Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 12:11 am Post subject: |
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OOC:sure, just don't be stupid about it.
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| Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 1:21 am Post subject: |
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Midori also stood still, not wanting to make herself seem destracted easily, after she worked so hard to gain some showing that she was able to be a good student.
She wouldn't break that image, nor would she weaken her resolve, she had to keep at it, till she had this as her own, and was able to use it to increase her powers as a swordswoman. She felt her blade still in the rack, and wished it wouldn't keep so quiet about events though.
She had heard the voice of the guy, and figured from the sounds, that the guy had done really bad, as he entered the dojo, and didn't feel sorry for him, if he failed it like that, then he definately needed to learn.
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Training Points: 95
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| Posted: Tue Sep 30, 2008 2:23 pm Post subject: |
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| Ari Phoenix wrote: | Midori takes the stance, knowing how she had screwed up, and following exactly what he does this time, avoiding any and all mistakes. She couldn't see it as anything else, but preparation, she needed to show him the discipline she had, as a student, and would work harder than ever, just to learn the techniques, stances, and lessons.
She didn't look anywhere but right infront of her, so as not to lose concentration. She missed her old sensei, but would only do to honor him, by proving that he had taught her well, and as such, would make failure a minimal. |
OOC: Well, I guess we'll just continue without him again... ~_~ Edit your post after I do this one, ok, Ari-chan?
IC: Makoto watches the two very carefully, and, upon seeing that they're not making any mistakes this time, he smirks at them, nodding his head slightly, then brings his feet together, not bending his knees at all, bringing his hands down at his sides, flat against his thighs, then bows to them about halfway, but keeping his head up so that he can see them, but this is also part of the training, and is going to see if they will follow him by keeping their heads up. If they pass, then he's got something "planned" for them, but if one, or both, even make the slightest mistake, then he'll "punish" them again, and they'll have to start over again, but he's really wanting to see what they can really do in terms of combat, but only hand-to-hand right now. After he bows, he'll come up, and wait to see what they're going to do, hoping that they get it right this time.
Aoshi watches Master Makoto very carefully, not wanting to make the same mistake twice, nor wanting to make a mistake at all, as he stands there with his feet shoulder-width apart, and his arms in front of him, also shoulder-width apart, down at the same level as his stomach, and waits to see what he needs to do next. Seeing that he's doing the bow again, Aoshi hopes that he won't make a mistake again, mostly on that he doesn't want to get hit by the Shikai again, but also wants to progress to the next stage of the training, and wants to become at least a Beginner of the Style, but wonders why Master Makoto is looking at them when he goes down, hoping that it's actually a part of the training and not a trick, and he does his absolute best to perform the bow without any mistakes this time. This time, though, he brings his feet together, not bending his knees this time, brings his hands down to his sides, flat against his thighs, then bends down at his waist, going about halfway down, looking at Master Makoto as he does, hoping that what he's doing is right.
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Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
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Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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| Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 2:55 pm Post subject: |
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LOCKED! (At least until Ari-chan can get back, hopefully)
Edit: Well, the other reason why I locked it is because so no one else will post here. But, if you want to leave it unlocked, that's fine. But, even if it were still locked, I'm sure a Mod./Admin. would be around if she came back.
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Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
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Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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| Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:35 pm Post subject: |
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(OOC:Thankyou for waiting, and next time, send me a message, Baka, I'll be on as soon as I can, life is hectic ya know.)
Midori looked at the sensei, and thoguht a second, before bowing correctly, matching the perameters that had been taught to her, but bowing lower than the sensei, as a sign that she was not of the same rank, but of a lower rank, as she was his student, she hoped. She knew that by bowing deeper, it showed respect, and could only hope that by showing him respect, that he would be more willing to teach.
She felt her sword try to say something, but ignored it, trying instead to focus on the bow, keeping it down till he got back up, she would only know it by the action itself, nothing else would show her that it was time to get up.
She only hoped that her teaching wouldn't fail her, and that she would not become a botch on his teaching record.
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Village: Sunagakure-Iwagakure-Kirigakure-Sunagakure
Training Points: 95
Inventory: 1 Swordfan/Fansword, 1 Giant Fan,2 Razor Fans, 10 Senbon, 10 Kunai, 3 Blank Scrolls, and 1 Peice of Chalk - Summoning Scroll(Unassigned), Bandages 10,-Mini Buster, Sunglasses
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