Itsuki, Haruki

Sench · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 5:29 pm Post subject:

Ever, Ballian and Maruko, stop posting here please.
Ok, you only start with Henge, Bunshin and Kawarimi and 1 D-rank bloodline jutsu. Your character could use more strengths and weaknesses. You'll have to post your bloodline to be able to use it
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Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Mutou Kazuki
Akayuri Rosu
Henshin Ellen
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ Jounin (A) ~ E-rank Missing-nin (A) ~ None (C)
Village: Konoha ~ Konoha ~ None ~ None
Training Points: 205
Inventory: 20 Shuriken, Daggertail ~ Renkinshou XXXIX, Kris ~ Infinity Bow, Kris ~ Medical Supplies

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 5:57 pm Post subject:

Sench, if you recall, Members are allowed to post here now, if it's to help. Anyway... GO KIRI!!! Whoot! XD

Anyway, here's what's wrong:

1. You can't have "extremely" as a Genin. It's either "above average", "average", and/or "below average".
2. It's "Water Prison", not "Hydro Prison".
3. It's "Bunshin", not "Buushin".
4. In terms of your Bloodline, since you can't have it accepted yet, unless someone else posts it for you, it'll be "Dormant", which pretty-much means that you can't use any of it's abilities unless it does get accepted.
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi

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Sench · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 6:21 pm Post subject:

Oh yeah, but of all their posts there was only 1 helpful.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Tachibana Ukyo
Mutou Kazuki
Akayuri Rosu
Henshin Ellen
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ Jounin (A) ~ E-rank Missing-nin (A) ~ None (C)
Village: Konoha ~ Konoha ~ None ~ None
Training Points: 205
Inventory: 20 Shuriken, Daggertail ~ Renkinshou XXXIX, Kris ~ Infinity Bow, Kris ~ Medical Supplies

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uchihagirl28 · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 6:25 pm Post subject:

Um... my profile? I don't mean to be rude, but is it accepted or is there still something wrong with it.
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'Nuff said.

Roleplaying Characters:
Itsuki, Haruki
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin
Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Empty

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Uchiha Katsuga · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 6:40 pm Post subject:

Nah, you're alright. Other than your Bloodline, I don't see any problems with it.
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)

Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi

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uchihagirl28 · Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 8:36 pm Post subject:

I don't even care about the bloodline anymore. I'm just gonna scratch it. I don't think I'm gonna make one in the future either.....
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'Nuff said.

Roleplaying Characters:
Itsuki, Haruki
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin
Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Empty

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Rin Shouten · Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 9:34 am Post subject:

Accepted~

Roleplaying Characters:
Rin Shouten
Sazaku Norimune
Tsubame Inuzuka
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Jounin[SS] ~ Jounin[S] ~ Jounin[A]
Village: Kirigakure ~ Otogakure ~ Konohagakure
Training Points: 0
Inventory: 40 Senbon, Tsukihime ~ Kiku-Ichimonji ~ Tri-Nunchaku

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