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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 2:03 pm Post subject: New Character: Leon Maci |
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Name:Maci, Leon
Age: 14
Gender:Male
Height:5'7
Weight:160
Appearance:
Race: Japanese
Hair: Red
Eyes: Red
Body: Average
Ethnicity: Thunder Country
Level/Rank: Genin, E-rank
Village:Konohagakure no soto
Bloodline:N/A
Main/Favored Weapon:Wakizashi
Element:Fire
Fighting Type/Style:Ninjustu, Taijustu
Starting Inventory:Wakizashi x1
kunai x20
shuriken x10
Strengths: Adept with swords
Good Charka Control
Long Rane and Close range Specialist (Nin/Tai)
Fast Learner
Thinks before he acts
Skilled in Ninjustu
Weaknesses: Bad with using Shuriken
Hot blooded at times
acts like an idiot at times
Low in Genjustu
Sometimes easily Stressed
Lower in TaiJustu than Ninjustu(Higher than Genjustu)
Really Friendly
Jutsus:Henge, Bushin, and Kawarimi
Bloodline jutsus: N/A
Jutsus Want to Learn:
Name: Katon: Goukakyuu no jutsu (Great fireball technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C, B
Requirements: None
Description: By breathing in and storing chakra in their chest the user then transfer chakra into their hand and by putting it near their mouths and blowing they can create a large fireball. At the C rank the user can use a normal sized fireball and blow it in any direction. At B rank the size of the fireball increases 3 times the size of a regular man and can be pushed away from the user, unlike the C rank.
Konoha Senpuu [Leaf Spinning Wind]
Rank: C
Requirements: None
Description: This taijutsu attack uses a combination of speed, strength, and the element of surprise. It is a perfect move to link up with other aerial attacks. For this taijutsu, the ninja first disappears using a really fast movement. The opponent, obviously, is totally confused. However, seconds later, the attacking shinobi appears just below their opponent, and by raising his dominant leg, kicks the enemy right on the chin. This would send the victim flying up into the air. The attacker can then proceed with an even more devastating follow-up attack. Leaf spinning wind is very hard to dodge, since the movement is so fast the opponent won't probably know about the attack until he gets kicked and is already high up in the air.
Shishi Rendan [Lion Combo]
Rank: B
Requirement: Konoha Senpuu [Leaf Spinning Wind] / Kage Konoha Buyou [Shadow Leaf Dance]
Description: A Taijutsu technique following the Kage Konoha Buyou [Shadow Leaf Dance], putting both the ninja and their opponent in the air, giving the attacking ninja the advantage. Four separate blows are delivered: a roundhouse kick, followed by a powerful backhand blow, followed by a driving blow to propel them towards the ground faster, and finishing with a hard-hitting axe kick into the ground, reinforcing the blow. This technique puts a great deal of strain on the user's body, which is why it is concluded that it is not a technique one could come to rely on
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique]
Rank: A (Kinjutsu)
Requirements: None
Description: Being a forbidden and advanced ninjutsu, only a few people know this technique perfectly. It is similar to the Bunshin no Jutsu since the main function is to create clones. However, Kage Bunshin no Jutsu doesn't create mere illusion clones. This jutsu can create clones that are real, and can deal physical damage. They disappear after being hit by an attack.
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background:Leon was born in the Lightning Country on the 12th of March. He was an only child so growing up he did not have anyone to play with at home. To make up for this time he worked in his father grocery shop. By the the time Leon was age 8 his father was killed for not paying off a debt. The men stormed into Leon's Home to kill him and his mother but his mother went to shop. Leon was hiding in a closet when they entered his house. Leon sat down and felt he was sitting on a piece of metal. He picked the metal up finding out it was a kunai knife. When he heard a bag drop and the scream of his mother he came out the closet and stab one of the men that turned their back to him. The 2 other men that were there tried to get to Leon but one had to hold on to his mother. One of the men grabbed Leon not knowing Leon had a knife with him. Leon stab his attacker in the right leg and then swiftly came up for and upward strike. The hit was very inaccurate but Leon's attacker dropped to the floor. Leon ran quickly as the man took his struggling mother out the door. Leon threw kunai hoping it would hit the man and it did . Leon's Mother grabbed him and gave him to some leaf ninja. She told them to bring him to the Hidden Leaf Village. Leon waved goodbye to his mother before passing out. After 3 years Leon went into the Academy. He quickly learned the Justu's and releases. He decided to go back to the Lightning Country to find out his mother has a rare illness that would kill her by the time Leon is age 20. Leon says every year he will visit her. Leon is currently 14 in the Leaf Villiage
Roleplaying Characters:
Leon Maci
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin Village: Leaf Training Points: N/A Inventory: Empty
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 2:51 pm Post subject: |
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Good profile. The strengths and weaknesses just don't balance out though. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Kaeor Arumashi
Sesshomaru Ozanaru
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Kage ~ Jounin Village: Iwagakure~Sunagakure Training Points: 0 Inventory: Kunai x6, Shuriken x 15, Poison Senbon x30, Nodachi strapped at his left waist and hiltless katana at his back, Explosive Tags x15, The Harvester~x9 Kunai, x18 Senbon, x30 Shuriken, x1 Wakishizi, x1 Katar
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 4:48 pm Post subject: |
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Well, we don't have "Lightning Country" on here, but I guess that it's alright for you to use it, heh. The only-other thing I see wrong with it is that Explosive Tags are Chuunin+. _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 4:58 pm Post subject: |
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You can keep "Raiton (Lightning)" as your main Element if you want to. Or, when you reach Jounin, you can take it then. But, unless you have the Element, you can't learn the Jutsu for that. Like, because you're taking Katon (Fire), you can't learn any Raiton Jutsus. See what I'm saying? _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 5:01 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah, sorry about that. We'll have to put that in there. We're just here to help. ^_^ _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 6:44 pm Post subject: |
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You erased a part of the profile for some reason, but I put it back in, ok? Well, I don't see any problems with this one. Objections? _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku); Twin Kodachis, 10 Kunai, 10 Shuriken, 5 strands of Chakra wire (10' each); ??? Feathers, 15 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, Wakizashi
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