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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:39 pm    Post subject: Fan Hidden By Sand [Rank Training] Reply with quote

I walked slowly down the hall in my small appartment, my leg straning in the upper thigh as I did so. []Bloody hell, Still twinged from last night[/i]. I know that to most, an injury lasting through the night may not seem like a big deal in any way shape or from, but to Senith, it was huge. I looked around my old appartment, it was small but somewhat homey. There was a couch and T.V set, and old kitchen, a dining table, 2 bedrooms and a bathroom. I smiled to ymself as I turned on thes pot and began to head for the door.

I walked out through the building, donw to the busy village street bellow. The bustle of the vilage never ceased. I looked around, hundreds of people moving quickly in every way, I took a deep breath in, feeling the pressure in my chest slowly build before exhaling greatfully. I missed the ways of the Land of Waves, quiet and simple. It could even be called seclusion, but it was peacful. I slowly stepped down the 3 steps that spereated my building from the road, instantly swept into the swards of oncoming pedestrian traffic.

After several minutes of being swept through by the mod, not even knowing in which way I was heading, I found mysekf on the edge of town. I looked up and nodded at the ANBU gaurd, whom opened the gate of the village, allowing me to move just outside of it. I looked around for a second and smiled, it was a clam nigght with probably not another person in the desert itself for miles. I walked slwoly for around 10 minutes until I came to a small platue that over looked the desert and the vilalge itself. This will do.

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Itichi, Zarn
Hyuudou, Skye
Hyuuga, Rayne

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: SS-Jounin[Zarn]~S-B Ranked Missing-Nin[Skye]~S-Ranked Chuunin
Village: Otogakure[Zarn]~None[Skye]-Konohagakure[Rayne]
Training Points: 20
Inventory: All; 25 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, 15 Senbon, 50ft Wire, Katana [Zarn], 20 Razor-Bells [Skye]

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I looked all around the plateau. As i scanned my eyes over it, bending my neck gentle to do so, I saw that it was around 50 meters in diameter, almost a perfect circle in shape and had a small oasis in one side of it which was odd for this height. I smiled to myself and walked over to the oasis, noticing a bunch of young trees as I walked. I slowly began to sat down, my knees straining as they bent until I suddenly fell to the ground in somewhat of a heap. I reached into my cloak and slowly pulled out a very small scroll, it was new, just borrowed from the village archives. Not that they knew obviously.

I slowly unrolled it gentle in my fingertips, carefully not to smudge the writing. I glanced down upon it, scanning my eyes from side to side as I moved down the page through the complex hand-seal diagram and long-winded descriptions. After close to 10 painful minutes I finally reached the end of the somewhat boring scroll. Alright, So I wave the fan, send in my chakra and we get a tornado, perfect.

I stood up quickly, trying to free up the muscle in my body, unfortunately my thigh felt as if it was going to explode as a reward. I gentle rubbed my thigh as I rolled the scroll back up and placed it back in the pocket of my over-cloak. I took a deep breath and slowly sent my mind back to a few minutes previously, remembering exactly what it was I had to do.

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Hyuudou, Skye
Hyuuga, Rayne

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Shinobi Rank: SS-Jounin[Zarn]~S-B Ranked Missing-Nin[Skye]~S-Ranked Chuunin
Village: Otogakure[Zarn]~None[Skye]-Konohagakure[Rayne]
Training Points: 20
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I flicked the small hand around and around in my hand. Mmmk, this shouldn’t be too hard.
I quickly sent the fan out and opened it with a stylish flick in my right hand. I took a deep breath, having the same calming effect as always, and began to send my chakra up through my body to my right hand. I quickly waved the fan, attempting to perform the Jutsu at the same time.

Just as I was about to complete the Jutsu, I felt a strike impale the back of my head, the force was enough to send my flying from my feet, my face slamming down hard into the ground in front of me. I could feel hands pulling at me from all side of my body, straining me in different ways as they did so.

I felt lightly gentle beating down onto my eyes, maybe it was just a dream. I began to try and stir slightly but as I did, i felt a gentle tugging at my wrists, as I went to open my eyes pain erupted across my face as the sound of a hand striking flesh filled the air. I grimaced slightly at the pain, opening my eyes and cringing at the light that distorted my vision.

After blinking rapidly for a few moments things started to come slowly into focus, I saw a Man, he was tall and well built. He wore an odd outfit, it looked something like a military uniform. He looked like an average solder, the only distinguishing feature was a scar that stretched from the bottom of his left eye, down to his jaw line.  He looked at me and smiled, opening his mouth only slightly and speaking in a whisper. 'Welcome, P.O.W'.

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Hyuuga, Rayne

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Shinobi Rank: SS-Jounin[Zarn]~S-B Ranked Missing-Nin[Skye]~S-Ranked Chuunin
Village: Otogakure[Zarn]~None[Skye]-Konohagakure[Rayne]
Training Points: 20
Inventory: All; 25 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, 15 Senbon, 50ft Wire, Katana [Zarn], 20 Razor-Bells [Skye]

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 9:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I looked up into the mans eyes, slowly craning my neck with a cringe as I felt it strain. I could feel the warm blood tricking from my nose down my face. I looked at the man more closely, my eyes were adjusting to the light. I noticed militia striped on his shoulder, Fuck, Militia. This wasn't good. Admittedly I was a decent Nin at the time, but I'd been trained as a Doctor my entire life.

Ohk, you need to stay calm and thing, you can get out of this. I began to try and decipher how exactly I was tied up. I realised it simply came down to my wrists and ankles being bound by a single rope that was bound to the wall. From were I was siting I had around a meter of slack, sadly the militia man was abit too far away, I needed to make him come closer.

I just know I’m going to regret this. I smiled at the man slowly, the muscles in my cheeks twitching from the strain. I suddenly spat at the man, hitting him in the chest. The look of disgust and fury on the man's face was prickles. He leant in to strike, moving around half a meter closer to me to do so, putting himself in range. At this exact moment I used all the strength remaining in my tired legs to launch myself from the ground, sending my fangs from my mouth as I did so.

I quickly reached the man's neck before he even realised what was going on. I was nervous, I hadn't bitten a human before. You have to do this, I told myself as I quickly plunged my fangs deep into the mans neck, sending them down through the arteries. I sucked in some of his blood, not allot, close to 50ml's. It was enough. I felt a surge of energy rush through my body. I smiled to myself as I grew stronger, but the smile quickly faded from my face as I realised what was happening, Bestial Form.

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Itichi, Zarn
Hyuudou, Skye
Hyuuga, Rayne

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Shinobi Rank: SS-Jounin[Zarn]~S-B Ranked Missing-Nin[Skye]~S-Ranked Chuunin
Village: Otogakure[Zarn]~None[Skye]-Konohagakure[Rayne]
Training Points: 20
Inventory: All; 25 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, 15 Senbon, 50ft Wire, Katana [Zarn], 20 Razor-Bells [Skye]

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 9:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I began to shake slightly as the now lifeless corpse of the militia man dropped to the floor in front of me. Not again, I began to shake violently as if having a very bad seizure. Slowly my skin turned from its natural softness to a hardened colour of grey. My fingernail's grew about 2 inches and turned into claws, similar to large wolves. My teeth grew also, again to the same length of wolves and my fangs nearly doubled in size. I could feel the strength in my body growing, I knew that it double when a frenzy beings. I felt the control I have over my mind slowly slipping again.

After several minutes my large, transformed body stopped shaking and was very still. Instantly, I sent my claws back down through the ropes, slicing myself free with ease. I got up slowly, cracking my neck from side to side as I did so. I smirked to myself and laughed with a laugh that was not my own. I dropped the ropes to the floor and let looked around the room. My senses were heightened beyond belief, sadly I could not control myself.

I spotted the door on the other side of the room. I walked over to it slowly and using my left hand, I attempted to turn it, finding it was open, surprisingly. I opened it slightly, an inch at the most and peered out through the gap as I moved my face up against the gap between the door and frame. I looked out to see two men. One was standing at the window, the other was siting on a couch, apparently sleeping. My face slowly turned into  sick smile as I slowly pushed the door open with my left hand.

I quietly walked into the room, my eyes flaring red with blood lust. I moved silently up behind the man at the window. I sniffed silently as I moved my face up along side his neck. I smiled to myself as I, with lightning speed, sent my head down quickly, sinking my wolf-like teeth into the neck of the man. I clamped my mouth shut, ripping through his flesh and deep into his windpipe and his arteries with ease. The man let out a small cry, it was reasonable quiet seeming as my teeth sank quickly into his vocal cords, but it was enough to wake the other man.

I dropped the corpse of the window man to the floor and turned to face the man from the couch with a smile. He was a small man, but he reached down the sofa and pulled a sword that he must have been sitting on. I smiled at him as I tensed my muscles, preparing myself for him. He ran at my quickly, sending a clumsy swing at my head. Due to my heightened senses, I ducked under the swing easily. As it passed over my head I sent my fist slamming into the base of his chin, due to the fact my strength was doubled, it sent the mans head flying back. A sickening crack filled the room as the mans neck shattered.

The man slummier back, falling backwards to the ground. I stood over his corpse with a smile, I bent down next to the man slowly, bending my knee's to lower myself to the floor. I lowered my head down next to his neck, preparing to bite him when I suddenly felt fait. Darkness engulfed my vision and my senses disparaged.

I woke up around half an hour later, my head pounding beyond belief, my entire body sore. I was completely back to normal, but I was drained. I looked around me, confused by the corpses. I slowly got up, struggling to remember what had happened. I took a deep breath then head out the door, heading back towards Suna.


[5 Posts for Rank Training done. Will finish Jutsu Training later.]

Roleplaying Characters:
Itichi, Zarn
Hyuudou, Skye
Hyuuga, Rayne

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: SS-Jounin[Zarn]~S-B Ranked Missing-Nin[Skye]~S-Ranked Chuunin
Village: Otogakure[Zarn]~None[Skye]-Konohagakure[Rayne]
Training Points: 20
Inventory: All; 25 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, 15 Senbon, 50ft Wire, Katana [Zarn], 20 Razor-Bells [Skye]

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 7:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC: you know, you can't combine rank and jutsu training. it has to be one. also, it's 5 points which will be given out by moderators, not posts.
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Shinobi Rank: Hokage (SS) ~ Jounin (A) ~ E-rank Missing-nin (A) ~ None (C)
Village: Konoha ~ Konoha ~ None ~ None
Training Points: 205
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 7:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OOC; Yeah, I just got told we can't combine. Errm, Editing.
And yeah, I know but its atleast 1 point per post if its reasonable, like those. I just did 5 posts becasue it was late at night and I wanted my rank the next morning.

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Hyuudou, Skye
Hyuuga, Rayne

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Shinobi Rank: SS-Jounin[Zarn]~S-B Ranked Missing-Nin[Skye]~S-Ranked Chuunin
Village: Otogakure[Zarn]~None[Skye]-Konohagakure[Rayne]
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Edited, Sorry for double post.
And yes, the first 2 posts havn't changed, but it leads into the scene.
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Hyuudou, Skye
Hyuuga, Rayne

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Shinobi Rank: SS-Jounin[Zarn]~S-B Ranked Missing-Nin[Skye]~S-Ranked Chuunin
Village: Otogakure[Zarn]~None[Skye]-Konohagakure[Rayne]
Training Points: 20
Inventory: All; 25 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, 15 Senbon, 50ft Wire, Katana [Zarn], 20 Razor-Bells [Skye]

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 11:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Quote:
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Your still not done.  Got a little bit more to go.
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Shinobi Rank: Kage ~ Jounin
Village: Iwagakure~Sunagakure
Training Points: 0
Inventory: Kunai x6, Shuriken x 15, Poison Senbon x30, Nodachi strapped at his left waist and hiltless katana at his back, Explosive Tags x15, The Harvester~x9 Kunai, x18 Senbon, x30 Shuriken, x1 Wakishizi, x1 Katar

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

As I head for the door, I stopped and slowly craned my neck, panning my vision over the entire room. I looked at the corpses on the floor and smiled to myself slowly as million's of through flew through my head. One answer, Beast form. But who were they?. I slowly turned around and walked back over to the first corpse, the man by the couch. Using what little strength was left in my legs to support my body weight, I managed to lower myself down to the ground and inspect the man.

As I moved my eyes slowly over his body, soaking in every small detail about his physical appearance as I did so, I noticed nothing that would signify him as any different to any other man in this village, it didn't make sense. I sighed deeply to myself as I strained all through my thighs and lower back as I raised my body back up to full height, walking to the second man, the man by the window.

Again, I inspected him and found nothing unusual, so once more I completed this process on the third man, the on in the bedroom. Again, nothing unusual. I gentle rocked back on the balls of my feet, falling back into a sitting position with a gentle thud. Who they hell are they, As I sat thinking to myself I didn't hear the gentle noise of the front door creaking open and the gentle delicate footsteps of the woman entering. As I sat, trying tirelessly to decipher the riddle I was presented with, I did hear the next noise, the crunch as she trod on a shard of glass.

I instantly leapt backwards, getting up onto my feet yet causing a surge of pain and strain to rush through my entire lower body and core. Once I was upright I gentle gripped onto a kunai from the left side of my belt, using my right hand. I slowly crept closer to the door, praying my knees wouldn't crack, revealing me. Once I reached the door I gentle gripping onto the handle with my left hand and pulled it free. There was a woman; she was dressed just like the men yet with more stripes on her shoulder.

I took a deep breath and slowly peeled the door open, my heart racing throughout the process. Once it was open I leant through the gap slightly, hurling the Kunai with my right arm at the women, my shoulder straining and sending a scream of pain through my body as a reward. The woman must have heard me for she quickly jumped to the side, avoiding the Kunai. She span around, catching my eye, starting at me for a moment before she bolted for the door. I tried to follow her but my legs wouldn't let me.

By the time I reached the door I could see her darting through the trees in the distance. I sighed and leant my weight against the door-frame. Great, the one clue and she got away. It was at this point that I noticed the sizzling noise above me. I glanced up to see the roof plastered with Exploding Tags. I didn't even think, I just reacted. I gripped the door frame with each of my arms on there respective sides. I then, using what tiny amount of strength I had left, Hurled myself from the building just as it exploded. The explosion sent my flying out into the felid.

I was hurled through the air until I collided with a tree, hard. I woke a few hours later, a burning wreckage next to my and blood trickling down my face.


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Roleplaying Characters:
Itichi, Zarn
Hyuudou, Skye
Hyuuga, Rayne

RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: SS-Jounin[Zarn]~S-B Ranked Missing-Nin[Skye]~S-Ranked Chuunin
Village: Otogakure[Zarn]~None[Skye]-Konohagakure[Rayne]
Training Points: 20
Inventory: All; 25 Kunai, 15 Shuriken, 15 Senbon, 50ft Wire, Katana [Zarn], 20 Razor-Bells [Skye]

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