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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:16 am Post subject: |
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"That is enough for tonight." Seiko said as he waved his hand and the clone dispersed. His voice had a bit of disappointment in it as he turned around and didn't face Gatsumi. "He's got spunk but no skill whatsoever. There's no way I can train him the way me and Tamotsu have trained in the past. He wouldn't be able to withstand the sheer brutality of it. I don't think he's ready for a sensei like me. Should I tell him to leave and find someone else? Should I tell him he's not welcomed to be my subordinate?" He thought to himself as his doubts became louder in his head and then looked down to the ground and saw the water leaking away to a nearby drain to drain the courtyard of water. He sighed as he kept his gaze away from the genin and then spoke. "I don't believe..." Seiko froze. "... I can... be... your sensei." He choked out. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Inuzuka, Tamotsu
Mitsuki Seiko
Yuan Ji
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Shinobi Rank: S-Rank Missing, Jounin, Jounin, Chuunin Village: None, Konoha, Iwagakure, Kirigakure Training Points: 50 Inventory: Hyuuga Right Eye, Madara's Armour, Wind Shire Fire/False Water Blade, Medical Supplies, Info Cards, Master Summon Scroll, Forbidden Tech Scroll, Sword Jutsu Scroll ~Master's Blade, Medical Supplies.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:22 am Post subject: |
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''Gah..shit.." Hitching out a breath of dismantlement of hope, he sighed, and turned himself away from his Sensei, or now former Sensei. ''Fine..if you cannot believe in me Sensei..you are as bad as everyone else..you'll see your mistake once I am Mizukage.." He let out in a loud, fiery tone, although he seemed to be weak, and unskillful, that was merely because of the absense of his blade ''Allow me..to have one more chance with my sword..and you'll see otherwise.." He said coldly, as he began to slowly walk back towards the hut. A rather fiery step in his walk. Upon walking in and grabbing his blade, he walked out with it in hand, and smirked towards Seiko ''This sword is not a crutch, it is merely something that allows me to express my Skill Sensei..may we have another chance at this? or are you going to give up that easily.." He said, enthusiastic to have another go, as it was obviously apparent that he would go the extra mile to get what he wanted. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Guren Kuroi
Gatsumi ''The ace" Nenshou
Geni Churitsu Kajin
No 4th RPC
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Shinobi Rank: Chuunin~ Genin Village: Iwagakure, Otogakure. Training Points: N/A Inventory: Kuroi~Kunai, Shuriken and explosive tags. Gatsumi~Wakizashi, Kunai and Shuriken
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:37 am Post subject: |
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Seiko looked at Gatsumi and took out his blade and whispered a simple phrase. "Limit Break." His sword lit up blue with chakra energy and then with one quick slice he shattered Gatsumi's sword. As the pieces slowly took the air, it felt as if time had slowed down and Seiko looked at Gatsumi, still in his stance from the slash as he looked down at the ground. "Baka..." Seiko said roughly as his gaze slowly met with Gatsumi and the dark Sharingan eye looked at him. The world seemed to slow as Seiko's pose remained the same. "... I'm in a whole different class then you. If I wanted you dead, you would not have seen it coming. I don't need to pity you. I took you as a student thinking I could mold you. But I can't change what's already been made." Seiko said as the pieces of steel flew into the lake.
"My last student was like you. He was eager and ready to go. His power was good but he didn't have the endurance. I worked him to the bone..." Seiko said as he stood up and replaced his headband over his eye. "... so much so that the training killed him. I couldn't forgive myself. I swore to never train anyone or care for anyone if they couldn't be on my level." Seiko replaced his sword and looked at Gatsumi sadly. "It's not that you wouldn't be a great student, it's what I would do that makes me afraid of teaching you. Caring for you. Tending you as my own. I'm not ready for that commitment." Seiko said as he thought in his memory and how Gozu loved his students. He sighed as he looked down. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Inuzuka, Tamotsu
Mitsuki Seiko
Yuan Ji
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Rank Missing, Jounin, Jounin, Chuunin Village: None, Konoha, Iwagakure, Kirigakure Training Points: 50 Inventory: Hyuuga Right Eye, Madara's Armour, Wind Shire Fire/False Water Blade, Medical Supplies, Info Cards, Master Summon Scroll, Forbidden Tech Scroll, Sword Jutsu Scroll ~Master's Blade, Medical Supplies.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:46 am Post subject: |
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''Sensei if I cannot handle it I do not deserve to live..and become a great shinobi, Great shinobi aren't made by being given the easy path, I am a future Mizukage remember? I have to take a few risks, otherwise I'm as useless as a shattered blade.." Gatsumi said towards his Master, it was obvious he wanted, and needed to get stronger, and it was defiantly apparent that he would go the whole way, even if it meant dying because of it. ''That blade may of been the most..official way of expressing his skill, he none the less, kicked down on a branch, that was awkwardly placed on a rock, with that it spun in the air. But soon enough was caught by Gatsumis skilful hand. ''I may not be much in the way of professional skill..but that's because no one has taught me..Seiko do you really want to push my dream away..Or are you going to be a great Sensei, and come to care about your students?" He said, the inuzuka fire within his light blue eyes. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Guren Kuroi
Gatsumi ''The ace" Nenshou
Geni Churitsu Kajin
No 4th RPC
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Shinobi Rank: Chuunin~ Genin Village: Iwagakure, Otogakure. Training Points: N/A Inventory: Kuroi~Kunai, Shuriken and explosive tags. Gatsumi~Wakizashi, Kunai and Shuriken
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:53 am Post subject: |
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Seiko looked at Gatsumi and watched his kick and catch. He listened to his words and then closed his eyes for a moment and thought in his head what he should do. As he combed through his mind, he could hear a faint voice calling out to him and he tried to bring it forth.
"Seiko, I remember when you were a fucking runt. No bigger then the calf muscle on my leg. And I remember your father asking me to take care of you and train you as my own. And over the years you grew into a great shinobi. Remember who you are and what you were."
The voice faded back into his memory and Seiko smiled softly as he walked up to Gatsumi and took his hand for a moment. "Come... I'll take you to the top of the tree. And you'll see something very few people have ever seen. And there we'll make our pact. Okay?" Seiko said as he picked up Gatsumi and carried him on his back while walking on the water. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Inuzuka, Tamotsu
Mitsuki Seiko
Yuan Ji
Empty.
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Rank Missing, Jounin, Jounin, Chuunin Village: None, Konoha, Iwagakure, Kirigakure Training Points: 50 Inventory: Hyuuga Right Eye, Madara's Armour, Wind Shire Fire/False Water Blade, Medical Supplies, Info Cards, Master Summon Scroll, Forbidden Tech Scroll, Sword Jutsu Scroll ~Master's Blade, Medical Supplies.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 12:58 am Post subject: |
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''Yes Sensei!" He smiled warmly, and allowed himself to be carried by his Sensei, this reminding him of one day with the man he dared call father.
''Geez Gatsumi are you tired already?"
''Ahhh! Baka! I'm not tired! my legs are just sleepy" Gatsumi, as a young boy said.
''Come on Silly..hop on.." Said the man as he picked Gatsumi up, and began to run with him up the hill, this setting there as a ''vacation" of sorts.
''Wooow Dad this is beautiful!" Gatsumi said in awe, as he looked at the beauty from the hill.
''Not many get to see this Gatsumi..be appreciated by this okay?" He said, as Gatsumi nodded in reply.
''Okay..Sensei.." He muttered after his flash back, his form relaxing on his back, as he stared up at the top of the tree, and wondered how they were going to get up there. ''Uhm..Sensei how are we going to get up there? it's really high.." Gatsumi said, laughing to himself. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Guren Kuroi
Gatsumi ''The ace" Nenshou
Geni Churitsu Kajin
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin~ Genin Village: Iwagakure, Otogakure. Training Points: N/A Inventory: Kuroi~Kunai, Shuriken and explosive tags. Gatsumi~Wakizashi, Kunai and Shuriken
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:04 am Post subject: |
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"Trust me. As long as you trust me, I can never let you down." Seiko said as he closed his eyes and did a single handseal and watched as the water began pushing him upwards. Slowly but surely the water began taking a wave form climbing the tree and they rose high above the mansion. Soon after the top of the tree was jump away and Seiko jumped up, holding Gatsumi tightly to not let him fall. As the reached the top of the tree, there was a small guard house with a board walk block with railings on top but a view of the massive country unlike any other. Seiko let Gatsumi down and stood beside him. He put his arm around Gatsumi's neck and then pointed out to a flickering light many miles away. "That is Amegakure." Then he slowly turned his finger round to another place. "And that is Kirigakure." He said pointing to a nearby village that was massive. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Inuzuka, Tamotsu
Mitsuki Seiko
Yuan Ji
Empty.
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Rank Missing, Jounin, Jounin, Chuunin Village: None, Konoha, Iwagakure, Kirigakure Training Points: 50 Inventory: Hyuuga Right Eye, Madara's Armour, Wind Shire Fire/False Water Blade, Medical Supplies, Info Cards, Master Summon Scroll, Forbidden Tech Scroll, Sword Jutsu Scroll ~Master's Blade, Medical Supplies.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:11 am Post subject: |
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''Amazing..simply amazing.." He said to his Sensei, as he stared out over the beauty. His light blue eyes hardly able to take in all the greatness, and just pure bliss of the sight ''It's things like this that cannot be bought.." He whispered softly, before becoming at ease in his Sensei's grasp ''What other things can we see from here? I'm not used to this sight..so I wouldn't really know what they were Sensei" Gatsumi said rather dully, as he looked out over the land, trying to work out where Tamotsu would currently be. ''Hm..Seiko where would Tamotsu be? could you just show me?" He said, holding his hand out, hoping that his Sensei would move his own hand to show him the direction in which Tamotsu resided, so he felt he atleast had some part in it. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Guren Kuroi
Gatsumi ''The ace" Nenshou
Geni Churitsu Kajin
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin~ Genin Village: Iwagakure, Otogakure. Training Points: N/A Inventory: Kuroi~Kunai, Shuriken and explosive tags. Gatsumi~Wakizashi, Kunai and Shuriken
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:21 am Post subject: |
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Seiko looked at Gatsumi and nodded. "To the far north..." He pointed to an area where a singular mountain could be seen before the horizon made the land disappear. "... in a country called Iwagakure. He resides in the woodland where the border of that country and Kusagakure rests." Seiko said as brought his finger back down and pulled Gatsumi closer to him. "And over there, thought you can't see it much, it's Sunagakure." Seiko said softly as he smiled at Gatsumi. He stood there looking at him smiling, remembering the first time he had been up there. It was long ago when Gozu and his team were sent to protect that land. But as he looked at Gatsumi, he could see the fire in his eyes and the passion in his soul. Seiko's smile faded and his eyes grew lighter. "I swear to protect you." He said with a sense of care and urgency. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Inuzuka, Tamotsu
Mitsuki Seiko
Yuan Ji
Empty.
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: S-Rank Missing, Jounin, Jounin, Chuunin Village: None, Konoha, Iwagakure, Kirigakure Training Points: 50 Inventory: Hyuuga Right Eye, Madara's Armour, Wind Shire Fire/False Water Blade, Medical Supplies, Info Cards, Master Summon Scroll, Forbidden Tech Scroll, Sword Jutsu Scroll ~Master's Blade, Medical Supplies.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:25 am Post subject: |
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''And I swear to be a great student..and protect this village, as you protect me.."Gatsumi said with a tinge of care, his light blue eyes becoming filled with joy and comfort. ''So when will we start training Sensei? I'm not rushing you..it's just I have an eager urge..to get stronger right now.." He said, in all honesty he would rather train and get stronger, then sit around and relax, it was an apparent sense of urgency, to stop his true feelings being shown to anyone but those he cares about. ''So Tamotsu is in Iwagakure..hm..I guess we'll have to see him sometime, eh Sensei?" Gatsumi said in a rather coy tone, as his light blue, yet somewhat fiery eyes travelled their glare over the spot of Iwagakure. ''We'll see how strong he is when I meet him.." He thought as he gazed off at space. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Guren Kuroi
Gatsumi ''The ace" Nenshou
Geni Churitsu Kajin
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin~ Genin Village: Iwagakure, Otogakure. Training Points: N/A Inventory: Kuroi~Kunai, Shuriken and explosive tags. Gatsumi~Wakizashi, Kunai and Shuriken
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