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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 6:18 pm Post subject: Kuroda Tensei - Water Country |
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Name: Kuroda Tensei
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 150 Lbs
Appearance:
Race: Japanese
Hair: Light Blue in front and White in back
Eyes: Gold
Body: Compact and average.
Ethnicity: Water Country
Personality: Kuroda is calm and quiet, preferring to keep to himself. Most of the time he thinks in place of talking, so usually when he talks it'll have some meaning to it and will be planned out. When fighting Kuroda prefers to be cunning and using whatever is at hand. If he is doing something he doesn't like Kuroda will act more lazy and take his time. However, if it is something he likes to do Kuroda will lunge at the chance to do it.
Rank: C-Rank
Village: Kirigakure no Sato
Fame: 10
Infamy: 0
Title: Genin
Bloodline: Dormant
Element: Lightning
Fighting Style: Ninjutsu (Specialist)
Main/Favored Weapon: Satsujinki
Starting Inventory:
- 50 senbon
- 10 Kunai
- 10 pieces of wire 15' each
- Nekode
- Satsujinki
Combat Styles:
Special Abilities:
Jutsu Total: 4/15
Jutsus:
- Henge
- Bushin
- Kawarimi
- Raikyuu
Bloodline Limits: (See Bloodline)
Bloodline Jutsu: (See Bloodline)
Missions Completed:
- D-Rank:0
- C-Rank:1
- B-Rank:0
- A-Rank:0
- S-Rank:0
Background: Kuroda was raised by his older brother. His father had become crazed and killed his mother. He then attempted to kill his brother, but his oldest brother, Hikaru saved him. Injured, the Tensei's father fled and wasn't seen again. Kuroda was away at the time, so he only has the stories Riku told him. Since his father and mother were dead or missing, and Kuroda never had a teacher, he was never able to take the Chunin exam, causing him to be a 16 year old Genin. Though Kuroda was born and raised in the Mist village, his parents were actually born and raised in the Leaf village. Riku's brother is currently a traveling shinobi who is home almost never. Kuroda, Riku, and Hikaru's relationship used to be extremely close, though has recently started to weaken. Kuroda’s relation to Riku remains strong. Kuroda at one point was lost to the Village of the mist and joined with the sound village, but left sometime beofre it’s destruction. At which point Kuroda rediscovered Riku and joined the mist with him, preforming in a false Chunin exam sometime later. All that came about of this was re-naturalization into the village of the mist. For a while Kuroda laid around the village doing little to nothing, but his brother’s bragging spurred him to action once again.
Roleplaying Characters:
Kuroda Tensei
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Genin E-rank Village: Kirigakure Fame: 10 Reputation: Training Points: 60 Inventory: 5 Kunai, 10 shurkinen, 5 pieces of wire 15' each, 5 Explosion Tags, Nekode
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 6:31 pm Post subject: |
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hmm...... you will have to have a Tensei weapon custom made and I don't think you can have exploding tags. Background needs to be longer. _________________ Active:Dr.VonGlockenshpielt =http://narutorpcenter.com/about18110.html
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Nobody
Tenkai Niju
Jeremy Hax
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Shinobi Rank: SS/S/S/S/A Village: Kokorogakure/Kumo/ Kirigakure /Sunagakure Fame: 1100~0~0~0 Reputation: Training Points: 5780 Inventory: Poisened Tegaki/Nobody's Holster,Blade Breaker, Kingmaker Mach 2,Blood Sucker Sword, Kaefu-Sword of Crushing, Sword of Speed, Liberi Fatali, Nezic Hsm, Nobonox, FASKO Launcher
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 6:34 pm Post subject: |
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still...he's a lot better than isnt he senpai?
And ohh yeah overall your character is good(cause compared to other people You seem to have a good discription towards your character.)
And yeah.. I think Nobody-senpai is kinda right. You need to have a bit longer background for your character. _________________
What Banana.. I see no banana here*kicks Basket away
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Shinobi Rank: Genin,Genin Village: Konoha,Konoha Fame: 0 Reputation: Training Points: N/A Inventory: 50+ in total (senbons), 4 kunais 13 pieces ok shuriken and 3 home-made soldier pills
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Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 7:59 pm Post subject: |
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overall good. But I don't really know anything about the Kensei clan. Only bits and peices. But as Noboy said the weapon needs to be approved in the weapons applications. You don't have 100 posts yet so you will have to wait or have someone else make it for you. Also Nanomaru, It is cute how you stick to Nobody's side and all but you don't need to go an repeat everything he said. thanks.
Anyway if you need someone to create your weapon I will be happy to do so. Just PM me what you have planned out and I will apply for it... _________________
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holy shit
shikon's background
has 7117 words
give or take ten |
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Ookami, Shikon
Farron, Sarah
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Shinobi Rank: C.-Chuunin/ S-Jounin/ Village: Konoha/ None Fame: 485-750 Reputation: Training Points: 1950 Inventory: Empty
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