Remove These Ads By Registering!
| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Message |
Yoko
Status: Online!
Honored Retirees
Joined: 02 Sep 2006
Posts: 2162
|
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
 Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:33 pm Post subject: Laughing Demon of Heaven |
 |
|
If this is accepted, should I edit it into my template?
Name: Laughing Demon of Heaven
Name: Mai
Type: GenJutsu
Range: 20 Feet
Leader: Shunsui Mai
Description: The user stands roughly twenty feet away from the opponent and molds his chakra with his psychological thoughts. The caster can mold his GenJutsu chakra, with the thoughts in his/her subconcious and make them appear to almost be real. The more creative or psychotic the caster is, the more dreadful the images can appear to be.
Usually, Yoko's illusion involves a number of roots sprouting form the ground and completely wrapping the opponent up. The ground beneath them crumbles as a large wall of fire rises and scorches them. If the affect is successful, the opponent will literally feel as if their own body had been crushed and burnt.
Performing this illusion requires an incredible amount of mental strain. If the caster does not have enough willpower or intellect before using the GenJutsu, they themselves can be convinced that the illusions are real, and easily be overtaken by their own attack.
Number of Members Allowed: 20
_________________
The world has gone mad today and good's bad today,
and black's white today, and day's night today,
and that gent today you gave a cent today
Once had several chateaux.
Roleplaying Characters:
Yoko Mai
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: B-Ranked Missing-nin (A-Ranked)
Village: None
Training Points: 0
Inventory: Fan, Shougeki Shuuha
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 15
Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
|
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
Lavathing9
Status: Offline
Site Admin
Joined: 24 Jul 2006
Posts: 5820
|
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
| Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 8:49 am Post subject: |
|
|
pretty good........about equal in advantages and disadvantage....
One thing though...A little too advance for an AS (Academy Student)....You can be in the CLAN, but wait to inherit the BLOODLINE til you are Genin, is ok with you?
Anyway, you need to reapply your template with that clan. But to make it easier for you I can kick the Template that is already approved back over to the Creation Center?? Or do you just want to Remake it?
Please Note: The ONLY thing you can change is the clan.....nothing else....since your RPC is already approved. The ONLY time when you reapply your Template and it CAN be changed is when you get up a rank:
such as AS>Genin. Then you may add the new jutsu, change History to match your RPing, etc. I think you get it right?
_________________
The Box
Roleplaying Characters:
Mai, Lava
Miyazu, Sano
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin (SS) ~[-]~ Jounin
Village: Kirigakure ~[-]~ Iwagakure
Training Points: 0
Inventory: 15 Kunai, 25 Shuriken, 2 Katana Strapped To Back, 8 Scrolls, Po-Med Stuff.
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A
Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Yoko
Status: Online!
Honored Retirees
Joined: 02 Sep 2006
Posts: 2162
| |
| Back to top |
|
|
Lavathing9
Status: Offline
Site Admin
Joined: 24 Jul 2006
Posts: 5820
|
Add A Comment For This User
Show All Comments On This User
| Posted: Wed Sep 20, 2006 4:10 pm Post subject: |
|
|
ok, so you are in the clan, you CAN (if you want to) get the Bloodline when you become a Genin...
Blah Blah Blah,
Accepted and Moved.
AND Kicked your Template back to 'Post Profiles'.....btw, you can still RP even though it's not in the Accepted section (the Template).
_________________
The Box
Roleplaying Characters:
Mai, Lava
Miyazu, Sano
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Sannin (SS) ~[-]~ Jounin
Village: Kirigakure ~[-]~ Iwagakure
Training Points: 0
Inventory: 15 Kunai, 25 Shuriken, 2 Katana Strapped To Back, 8 Scrolls, Po-Med Stuff.
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A
Edit Your Shinobi Info So It Shows Under Your Posts By Clicking Here!
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum
|
|
