Erina Kousetsu, Snowing in the desert.

Seraphim · Last edited by Seraphim on Mon Feb 08, 2010 5:59 pm; edited 4 times in total

Name: Erina Kousetsu
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Height: 4'7
Weight: 81 lbs

Appearance:
Erina is a slight girl, pale skinned, with distinctive yellow-brown eyes. With her complexion, living in Suna, she usually sports reddish sunburned cheeks. She favors loose clothing, wearing reds and purples when she is home, or blacks when stealth is required. She usually wears clothing with hoods, to allow her to cover her distinctive, shock white hair, and keep most her skin out of the sun. Physically she isn't imposing, even for a girl her age, being slightly frail, and none too tall. Her petite frame hides a startling swiftness and flexibility, however.

Race:

Hair:

Eyes:

Body:

Ethnicity:

Personality: Erina was always a curious girl, in all senses of the word. She was constantly reading, and exploring, sometimes poking her head in places where it really didn't belong. She is very level headed, it is extremely rare for anything to crack her composure. She is fairly outspoken in her dislike of the heat, and is very fond of nighttime air, especially when the moon is full, casting enough light to see by. She is friendly, though somewhat reserved, able to chat comfortably with someone she just met. She is quite driven, hoping to become a ninja to equal the nostalgic tales spun by her mother about her late father.

Rank: E
Village: Sand
Fame: 0
Infamy: 0
Title: Genin

Bloodline:

Element:

Fighting Style:

Main/Favored Weapon: Senbon
Starting Inventory:

2x Reels Wire, 15ft each, one kept wrapped on her right arm, the other on her left leg
6x Shuriken, kept in left hip pouch.
2 Kunai, kept in right hip pouch.
22 Senbon, 14 in her left hip pouch, 5 in her right, 1 in each of her socks, and one in her hair.
1x tanto, (12 inch blade) kept in a scabbard on her right leg.
3x Smoke bombs, kept in her right hip pouch.
One small scroll of paper.
One pencil.

Combat Styles: None.
Special Abilities: None
Jutsu Total: 3/8
Jutsus:

Henge No Jutsu
Kawarimi No Jutsu
Bunshin No Jutsu

Bloodline Limits: None
Bloodline Jutsu: None

Missions Completed:

D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0

Background: Background: Erina's mother had, 14 years ago, fell in love with a missing Mist ninja, whom had fled to Suna seeking refuge. The relationship was not to last, with Sand agreeing to extradite the fugitive for a couple of very minor favors. He was sent back to Mist, and there was executed. Soon afterwords her mother discovered she was pregnant. The people of sand were surprisingly kind about the whole affair, helping her mother, whom had little family, and many a neighbor babysat this pale, half mist baby. As a student with affinity for water element, in Suna, famous for its air and earth users, she found scant few teachers, being viewed as something of an oddity. She was quicker then most of her peers, both mentally and physically and, when the opportunity presented itself, she found herself a very strong swimmer, something unheard of in the desert. However she was one of the weaker members of her class, certainly not up for overpowering anyone, and her frame wasn't really stout enough to take many blows, so she lagged in her martial arts.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Erina Kosetsu
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank:
Village:
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Empty

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Maximillion · Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:01 am Post subject:

I don't see anything wrong with this.

I will give the others a chance to look this over though, in case I overlooked something.
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Shippopotamus · Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:25 am Post subject:

please copy the template directly so you get the format

also you need to pick a fighting style such as, taijustu, ninjutsu, genjutsu, ijutsu, puppetry, or fuuinjutsu.

without a bloodline you can pick from specializing in one, majoring in another.
or
majoring in one, and minoring in another
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Cielle · Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:28 pm Post subject:

Seraphim · Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 5:22 pm Post subject:

Combat Styles, Check.
Formatting, Check.
Thanks for the imput Smile

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Roleplaying Characters:
Erina Kosetsu
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank:
Village:
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Empty

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Cielle · Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 5:47 pm Post subject:

Those are actually your fighting styles, not combat styles. Also your rank would be "E" since your title is "Genin"
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Seraphim · Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:01 pm Post subject:

oops. Got confused while I was editing. Thanks for taking a second look Smile

, that should be everything now.
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Roleplaying Characters:
Erina Kosetsu
No RPC
No 3rd RPC
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank:
Village:
Fame: 0
Reputation:
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: Empty

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Cielle · Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:06 pm Post subject:

Looks good to me, though since secondary and primary both seem to equal one style point you could probably bump that up...but wait for a staff person to answer if you can I guess.

Otherwise I give my member approval, worth all of 1/5!!!
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TheGreatWarMage · Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 6:12 pm Post subject:

Besides the minor spelling of Senbon, and world being word, it looks good.

For Cielle: Can't up it to major since that would mean having 2 majors. Has to wait for SS rank or given for that to happen.

PM me if you want those minor spelling errors changed.

Approved
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Roleplaying Characters:
Suteki Yaku
Sara
Jin
Kishin Shou
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: D~E~E~E
Village: Cloud~Water~Cloud~Fire
Fame: 75~0~0~0
Reputation:
Training Points: 300~135~0~0~3090
Inventory: 5 bundles of 50 ft Wire, Wire Cutters, 5 bells, 4 Smoke Bombs, 10 Kunai, 40 Senbon, 3 pipes and 1 box of metal/glass, 5 Unknown Scrolls--2 two foot long metal poles, Several sheets of scroll paper, +1 fake scroll A mysterious Egg~~5 Kunia, 2 buster knuckles~~5 kunia and 2 Modified Buster Knuckles

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