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Menboku Status: Offline Newbie

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Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 9:19 pm Post subject: Kaen, Kurama(WIP) |
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Name: Kaen, Kurama
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Height: 5'9
Weight: 112
Appearance: He usually wears a pink outfit consisting of a loose fitting shirt and comfortable pants. He wears the traditional ninja sandals and usually doesn't wear his headband. When he does wear it; however, he it is worn around his neck or on his forehead. He has two known tatoos. One on his right arm after his ceremony of maturity in which he became an adult. That tatoo was in the shape of a fox claw, his spirit animal not unlike his father's tattoo in which was a wolf claw. His second tattoo is in the shape of a rose on his abdomen.
Race: Chinese/Japanese/Australian
Hair: He has long red hair, extending down to his back.
Eyes: deep beautiful, mystifying green eyes
Body: Sora has a medium muscular physique.
Ethnicity:
Level/Rank: Genin
Village: Iwagakure
Bloodline: Heaon
Main/Favored Weapon: Bo Staff
Element: Earth
Fighting Type/Style: Genjutsu, Ninjutsu
Starting Inventory:
Personality:
Special Abilities:
Jutsus: Kawarimi no jutsu
Bunshin no Jutsu
Bloodline jutsus: N/A
Jutsus you want to Learn: Mokuton Jutsu
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background:Sora has always lived a life of peace within a branch of nomadic Harakora members as a rouge. He has been taught in the ways of the ninja and been taught life's teachings throughout the years with his clan as they moved along. Their journey began from the division between the original clan that settled in Konoha and later this clan after about ten years settled in Kusa.
Sora and the clan whilst they were traveling had and still have a deep concern for the weak and nature. Sora himself had a particular infatuation with nature, especially roses. They had caught criminals and all unmoral people they had come across of and then simply continued their journey. They also "liberated" anything from passers-by that they needed to survive such as food, water, and money. Sora, once their clan's journey for enlightenment and wisdom had ended, had been specifically trained in the ways of the ninja and had joined the ninja academy to start his career as a ninja and the preservation of his morality and nature.
Upon becoming a ninja, he has trained non-stop to become a stronger ninja and "a warrior of the earth." Sora had trained in the academy being as kind as possible to anyone he came in contact with. He has devoted the majority of his jutsu to genjutsu and mokuton jutsu.
Roleplaying Characters:
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Shinobi Rank: Village: Training Points: N/A Inventory: Empty
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YuweaCurtis Status: Online!  RPG Moderator

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Posted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 10:17 pm Post subject: |
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Um, there's no Heaon clan. Not unless you make it (PM me for help with that). But Bokkon in the custom section can only use wood. _________________

Roleplaying Characters:
Caleb Uchiha Umoki
Aleison Nova
Mousy
Dharma, The Silver Moth
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Chuunin, A ~ Chuunin, B ~ Jounin, A ~ Jounin, A Village: Konohagakure ~ Konohagakure ~ ??? ~ Konohagakure Training Points: 240 Inventory: Blade of the Wind Spirits, 20 kunai,100 feet of metal thread ~ See Inventory ~ Summoning Quiver (Explosive Arrows), 10 smoke bombs ~ Mouse Paw Yo-yo, Lexi, Retractable Shuriken, and Silver Soldier Serum x3
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Uchiha Katsuga Status: Offline  Head of Forum Moderation

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Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 6:02 pm Post subject: |
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Off topic: KURAMA!!!! XD
On topic: Here's what I see wrong:
1. 5'9'' seems a little tall for a typical 15-year-old, but, I guess with the Australian blood in you, I guess it's ok.
2. Your "Ethnicity" is what Country you're from. Being you want Iwagakure, then you're from "Tsuchi no Kuni (Earth Country)".
3. Put in "E-Rank" beside your title.
4. As Cutris pointed out, if that's a Bloodline/Clan you came up with, you can't use it now. You have to have 200 posts, and be at least a Chuunin, and get two others to join you. Or, you can ask someone who meets the requirements to post it for you, but you'll still need at least two others to join to it to pass. Either way, if you still want to keep your Bloodline/Clan, you'll have to put "Dormant" beside it until it gets accepted.
5. Need a "Starting Inventory". Your main weapon goes in there too.
6. Need "Personality".
7. The Jutsus you start off with are Henge no Jutsu, Kawarimi no Jutsu, and Bunshin no Jutsu.
8. Also, as Curtis pointed out, only those who have the Bokkon Bloodline, or the one that Yamato and the First Hokage had, can use Mokkuton Jutsus. _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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Forum Credit: 6.5
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Uchiha Katsuga Status: Offline  Head of Forum Moderation

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Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2008 6:25 pm Post subject: |
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Just edit it, dude. No point in deleting it. Just click "Edit", and go from there. _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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Forum Credit: 6.5
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Uchiha Katsuga Status: Offline  Head of Forum Moderation

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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 2:46 pm Post subject: |
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No clue, but we'll give it more time, ok? _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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Forum Credit: 6.5
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Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:28 pm Post subject: |
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DENIED!
Due to inactivity, this RPC is denied. Please PM me, or another Mod./Admin., if you wish to continue. _________________
Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank] Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha) Training Points: N/A Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 6.5
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