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 Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 3:30 pm Post subject: Jisatsu, Zetsumei |
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Name: Jisatsu, Zetsumei
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Height: 1.37m (4 foot 6 inches)
Weight: 42kg (92 lbs. 9.44 oz.)
Appearance: He wears white sandals and long, white bottoms with a bandage on the left leg. He has a bandage that is wrapped around his stomach and a white jacket which is usually worn unzipped and also showing the chest of his body. The sleeves are long and his headband is worn on his neck due to the fact that he wants to attract females. He has a tool pouch on the right leg and the left part of his waist. He has a terrible scar not shown on the right arm which goes from the shoulder to the wrist.
Race: English.
Hair: Meduim sized, dark blue, long spiked hair which reaches his shoulders.
Eyes: Dark Green yet a shade of brown on the left eye.
Body: Little muscle on legs and arms are shown. Only shown when he is fighting for his life.
Ethnicity: Land of Water
Level/Rank: Genin, E-Rank
Village: Kirigakure
Bloodline: N/A
Main/Favored Weapon: Kunai attached to wires
Element: Wind
Fighting Type/Style: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu
Starting Inventory: 15 Kunai, 10 Wires, 10 Shuriken, 2 Smoke Bombs, 2 Spiked Chains
Personality: An annoying fellow at times. Likes to show off in front of friends and especially girls. He says random things and only thinks at fights. Although he seems as a mindless fellow, he is very bright and his thinking is inevitable. He can think up many strategies but stays quiet unless the information is to be shared. He has a random fighting pattern but for the best as the enemy could have a hard time guessing his next move. When he sees a woman he likes, he would blush at every time their eyes meet. He also hates it when people argue, so he may be driven mad by that.
Special Abilities: N/A
Jutsus: Henge, Bunshin, Kawarimi
Bloodline jutsus: N/A
Jutsus you want to Learn:
Fuuton: Daitoppa [Wind Release: Grand Blast]
Fuuton: Mugen Sajin Daitoppa [Wind Release: Infinite Sand Cloud Great Breakthrough]
Hayabusa Otoshi [Peregrine Falcon Drop]
Missions Completed:
D-Rank:0
C-Rank:0
B-Rank:0
A-Rank:0
S-Rank:0
Background: As a small boy growing up, Zetsumei was afraid of many things, yet his father forced him to face his fears all the time. After numerous occations, Zetsumei's father thought he was about to snap at the sight of a big poisonous spider. However, Zetsumei simply looked at his father and told him he was not scared. At that moment, Zetsumei became a real boy at the age of five. As he was growing up, he learned how to stand up for himself and actually beat up his bullies vigorously and nearly got expelled. At the age of seven, a skill passed on in the family; which is incredible accuracy, came into play. He was able to throw weapons straight into the middle of a target, and Zetsumei sometimes over-did it and cracked the target he threw into. He then started thinking of weapon combinations, and his favourite one was kunai attached with string. As he throws a lot of kunai, Zetsumei would aim around the enemy as to cut and stop him with the strings. At Zetsumei's graduation into genin, his father took him out to an expensive restaurant. On the way home, Zetsumei was awarded his father's spiked chains, and Zetsumei was overjoyed. As he graduated, he was put into the world of responsibilities and self-confidence, and was ready for the real world.
Roleplaying Characters:
Jisatsu, Zetsumei
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N/A
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: E-Rank, Genin
Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 15 Kunai, 10 String, 2 Smoke Bomb, 2 Spiked Chains
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A
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| Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 5:38 pm Post subject: |
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There's a couple things I see wrong:
1. If you don't have any actual "Special Abilities", like with a Bloodline or something, then put "N/A".
2. I believe that spiked chains are for Chuunin+, no?
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Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 6.5
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| Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2008 5:56 pm Post subject: |
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Ah, ok.
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 6.5
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| Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 1:34 pm Post subject: |
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Looks good to me, but could you put down how many pounds he is? I don't know the measurements for "stones". Other than that, it's fine.
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Lammergeier (Pet-Nin)
Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: 6.5
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| Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:36 pm Post subject: |
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Could you please just put it in pounds and ounces?
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Shigane, Makoto (Kempo Master NPC)
Roleplaying Characters:
Uchiha, Katsuga
Shikami, Aoshi
Raptor "Hagetaka", Zetsumei
No 4th RPC
RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: Mizukage [SS-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]; Genin [E-Rank]
Village: Konoha (originally), now Kiri; Konoha; Konoha; Pet-Nin (Konoha)
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 10 Kunai, 10 Senbon, 2 Fumma Shuriken, 5 Windmill Shuriken (small), 10 strands of Chakra Wire, 2 Kodachis (Ranpu and Ankoku)
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Forum Credit: 6.5
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| Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:48 pm Post subject: |
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do you mean to take the 42kg part away and leave the weight as 6 stone 8 pound or change it again to pounds and ounces? (sorry, i use kg and meters, not familliar with the others) if so, i took away the kg part
Roleplaying Characters:
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RPG Stats:
Shinobi Rank: E-Rank, Genin
Village: Kirigakure
Training Points: N/A
Inventory: 10 Shuriken, 15 Kunai, 10 String, 2 Smoke Bomb, 2 Spiked Chains
Personal Stats:
Forum Credit: N/A
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